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lucky_ly

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A few of my poems...
« on: June 12, 2010, 06:39:35 PM »
... I'll add some more as time goes!...


YOUR WORST ENNEMY


Do u know ur worst ennemy
The one who aint gonna give u a dam mercy.

U have probably meet him a thousand times
But you never knew n though, cos everything were alright n fine.

He's the one that bring you fear
N wanna get rid of everything of u that is Dear

He's the one who wait patiently in the dark
For the right time to throw that first blow n attack.

Yes, he's the coward that will hit u, out of nowhere
When u're at ur weakest by just giving u a cold stare.

He's the one who lives in within you
Yeah, The Devil n negative side of you.

Just make sure u dont let him take over
Always keep him in check n way down under.




HIWAY OF LIFE

In this long, long Hiway we call Life
We are all traveling our way at different place and time
Some of us, we've lost our car ride, now we are just walking along the road side line
Let's hope to catch a passing by, cos no more money, not even a dime.

There's a lot more bumps and wrong turn, we'll have to go through
But let's keep our head held high to reach that special "rendez-vous".
A long way for us to still travel,
But a lot of people to meet yet, and a lot of place to look and marvel.

So continuing our way to the Hiway of Life, we will
Just make sure not to get too sick nor too ill.



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2010, 07:32:28 PM »
nice death poem. keep it up  O0



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« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2010, 03:38:00 PM »
Cool stuff doode.

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2010, 12:37:40 AM »
Getting back into it, slowly.

Who u know more cokky than D is
Excuse me but it was God who gave me this penis
I just do it and whoever in my path, stupid
Foolish enough when I leave them in the ruins

Say b.y.e. when I leave them in a state where they d.i.e.

So annoying, can't I lie
Ruin so many threads when I tread tides
Ride the waves and make ur serious threads look just like...
My toilet bowl when I take a twice


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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2010, 01:49:35 AM »
Nice poems!

Keep them coming...  :)



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 11:21:56 AM »
Lucky,

I love that story!  It has somewhat changed my attitude and the way I'm thinking.  Yes, we do have choices and these choices have a lot to do with our attitudes everyday.  When I meet a person who is always optimistic about things, who always carries a great, positive attitude and seems to always smile and have a great day, I know I love it!  I not only like his/her attitude but I also love being with him/her.  Now, if I like it so much, why not be like that, too?  I have choices, I can choose to be a nice, friendly person with a great attitude?  Or be a mean, cruel, grumpy azz person!  Arrrrrrgh!  :D

Yes, that story just made my morning again.

Thanks.  :)



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 11:25:28 AM »
... Ok, here's another one... Wrote this one back in 99... Yeah looong time ago!...



TO FORGIVE BUT NOT FORGET


Here I come, here I come
Better be ready, cos Lucky Ly's always in a hurry!
I'd like to speak-up my mind
Cos im not all that blind.
Suggest my opponions
That could be solutions.
Im not much of an intellect
Hell!... I dont even know which word to select.
Im just using my basic knowledge
So that I can reach that top edge.

CHORUS
PEOPLE ALWAYS COMPLAIN AND BLAME,
THERE IS NO SHAME, WE ARE ALL THE SAME!
TOO MUCH PAIN... I HOPE IM NOT GONNA TALK IN VAIN.
THIS IS A NEW MILLENIUM, SO LET'S MAKE IT PLATINIUM
LET'S ALL TALK ABOUT LOVE CONNECTION
NOT WAR SITUATION!

Saddam Hussein!... Dam right, he's very insane
But he's just got a different theory, like in our past history.
To conquer and dominate; so he can create,
His hown colonies, with his powerful army.

Bill Clinton!... he's not like the average John, or Don, or Ron
He might have had a few mistresses, but nobody sees his distress
He might had lied, but his iron will hasnt died
People only see his mistakes, they dont all the homeworks in his desk... for God' Sake.

Dennis Rodman!... Sometimes he could be a real gentleman
He's got a lot of tattoos, so people think he's a little "coucou"
He bleach his hair, but at least he's got guts to dare
He started his life not too tall, but he's made the best, better than the rest of us all.

Ben Johnson!...He's not my son,
But he's Canadian, like the rest all the Native Indiens
He might had cheat!... But he did compete and lead!
And We... People of the nation, gave him a standing ovation.
Now... We all gonna give him a diss?!... But I hope he did not get too pissed.

CHORUS

We!... Are the new generation, dont talk to us about destructions
But rather, Solutions... Resolutions... E-v-o-l-u-t-i-o-n-s!

Now!... Did you listen and followed me?
Or think that Im just another l-i-t-t-l-e wannabe?!
Anyway... Never said I was a genious
But I know... When to be serious!

Let's all forgive but not forget
Let's all forgive... But not forget!





You wrote this one? :o :o :o  WOW!

Applauds*Clap*Clap*  Great stuff!

Very nice!  And thanks for sharing...  :)



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 11:45:25 AM »
U're totally correct on this one Mrs Vang!... It just kind of sad sometimes that some ppl will know that... But they wont apply it?!... Just dont know what to say for those ppl... But oh well...


It's because they have a choice, and they choose to not apply it.  ;)

But it's okay, tsuav koj thiab kuv wb apply xwb mas.



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« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 11:47:39 AM »
:)  :)  :) ... Dont know if I can write something like that again tho... For some reasons, at that time, I wasnt having the best time in my Life... Usually I'll hit the gym n feel better after... But I couldnt get rid of the negativities in me/around me... Then one time, I just happened to relax n write stuff on a piece of paper... N the words just "came" to me?!... N so fast too... Must have wrote like... 3-4 poems... In less than... 1 hour?!... wont be able to do again for sure if u ask me to do it again...


I heard the best time to write a poem, a song, a pajhuam, to sing a song, hais a kwv txhiaj is when you're feeling sad and blue.  Yes, I've been there also.  Wrote hundreds of poems when I was going through my divorce.  And I even learned how to hais kwv txhiaj!  LOLz...  ;D

But again, great stuff.  Thanks for sharing.  :)



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2010, 02:16:22 PM »
  Very true again!... N as in my sign:

  "Whatever rock ur boat... I aint here to make u believe, nor to force u"...


There you go... exactly. O0



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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2010, 11:06:39 PM »
nice


« Last Edit: June 26, 2010, 09:18:01 PM by BigBoi1 »

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2010, 11:46:32 PM »
I carry on the marathon bigboi just lapped
I take the tourch, invite the hordes and trap...
These imbeciles, smack em with biblical verses
My mission here, the minister of citidal churches
Burn the polluted, dispute the wisdom of the ages
Make the world see change like a dealer out in vegas
I'm hella foul, outrageous
Kill ur style, plow ur acres,
And proceed to plant the seed because I believe my own fate I can create it
My strong hold, I've long for
A better life when we forgive and forget the wrongful...
Acts of everyman but everyman has his burdens he himself must own
Even jesus had to carry two trees before he received his throne
So what's this make it? I take it that we're all just screwed
But to be remembered, remember to stand up for the truth
Ur definition of it and no body else
Stand up, what the phuck? U need no body's help
if u need the motivated u should motivate urself

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2010, 11:53:17 PM »
Gone!


« Last Edit: June 27, 2010, 03:56:39 PM by BigBoi1 »

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #13 on: June 23, 2010, 01:28:38 AM »
Motivation? I spark and balze it...
But I don't need the trees to spray it
I gaze into the pages like an apprentice of magic
Cast, spell like spelling contest
Words larger than Gods concepts,
brain blowing up like bomb threats
Step on the stage and trash whack hmong cats
I'm colder than leonardo's titanic act is
Only wish I wasn't limited to spitting through this motorolla backflip
Celly is slow but Back to the rap script
Motivation is my ass first
I cry later but laugh first
Live now and enjoy life
Cause we all someday will benchpress the grass turf
Be an influence to kids,
I'm bad, so ur children takes a satan's trend
Idiot, I never play the hero type
God sent me to earth to pee on dykes
A ninja firestarter with gasoline and light
Who u think is burning the woods and trees @ night

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #14 on: June 23, 2010, 08:09:58 PM »
Aite Lucky_Ly...mea ns no harm bro.  Just some lyrics.  I think AZNRAPS.COM would be a proper place for the battles.  Still love and respect....



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