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Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« on: June 17, 2010, 08:35:13 AM »
Ua npau suav pom koj ib muag.
Koj los nrog kuv hais lus luag ntxhw ntxhis.
Lub ntuj phem lub ntuj lem.
Tsis pub wb sib tau sib cuag.
Muab koj dua tshe ntawm lub ntiaj teb mus, cia kuv nyob ib leeg.
Xav tias ntshe lam yog npau suav xwb, vim kuv tsis ntseeg.
Lub ntuj no cas yuav phem ua luaj.
Hais tias ua ib siab los lub siab niaj hnub quaj.
Tseem niaj hnub nco koj lub suab thiab lub ntsej muag luag.
Xav tias yog muaj txoj hmoo, thov kom lwm tiam wb rov los tau sib cuag.  :-[


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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2010, 01:45:30 PM »
I dream of you and see your smiling face.
You smile to me and say you’d see me again in another time, another place.
I sob as my tears flow from my eyes.
Please don’t leave me, I say, I don’t want to say good bye.
You say, I will see you again my love.
I will always be looking down on you from up above.
Take care of yourself and live a happy life.
I cry as you slowly wipe my tears, oh how my heart aches as if it’s been stabbed by a knife.
Just stay with me, I need you in my life, I say.
I can not, you reply, trust in me and our love, we will be together again, some day.
You must live, as your life must go on, it has not yet end.
Trust in me as this is the message that I bring and I send.  
I will always love you, you say as you hold me close and kiss me one last time.
I must leave you now as time was not on my side.
My waves have come and it’s time to set sail and ride my tide.
We will see one another once more.
Just look up above the ocean shore.
I will see you in my next life.
It will be my next' life's destiny to make sure we are husband and wife.




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eclps05975

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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2010, 02:46:55 PM »
Dam!... Uve been practicing hey mlle eclps!... Great rythmes!... Cool poems...  ;)  O0  O0 ...

Hi Lucky, haven't seen you in here for awhile. All is well I hope.  :)

Yeah, I've been practicing, still rusty, but working on it. Thanks.



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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2010, 03:07:08 PM »
That's okay. Practice makes perfect. Do it when you have time, of course.  :)



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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2010, 03:34:17 PM »
Cua tuaj cua nplawm txag zag.
Ntshe yuav tsis muaj nub yuav tshem tau koj huv kuv lub sab kag.
Ncu koj thaum koj tseem nrug kuv nyob.
Lub sab naj nub quaj, lub sab mob mob.
Caag yuav ncu koj ua luaj.
Kheev ib txuj kev hlub tsis xob tsawm muaj.
Has tas tsis xob xaav txug los zoo le lub sab yuav tu.
Ntshe yuav tuag rua txuj kev hlub hab txuj kev ncu.
Tug kuv hlub hab tug kuv ncu, yog vim wb txuj hmoo tsis muaj.
Wb lub neej txha nyuaj ua luaj.
Yog lwm tam wb sib tau, kuv yuav hlub koj kuam kawg kuv lub sab.
Thov kuam koj los hlub kuv ib yaam hab.


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« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2010, 04:09:49 PM »
I find it hard to forget all the times we shared.
Hand in hand, when you told me you loved me and that you cared.
As I close my eyes, I see you smile at me.
I can’t believe you are gone, this can’t be.
Still struck by the pain and sorrow, I cry my eyes out.
You have showed me what true love is really all about.
I miss you and If I could turn back time, I would.
We’d make all the memories last if only we could.
I just want to see you smile again and hear your voice.
I want you to be here with me, but I don’t have a choice.
There was so much that you promised we’d get to share.
Now, I just simply hate life as it’s just so unfair that you're not here.


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« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 09:08:05 AM »
Good morning Lucky. Yes, I aaaam green hmong.  :)
 



Didnt know u were a hmong green Mlle ecpls?!... Cool, cool, cool!...  Can I hear u r-e-a-d this one poem of urs too ... :D  ;)  O0 ...



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« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2010, 04:47:20 PM »
Haib kawg le, yog vim le caag es yuav khua sab ua luaj na los? Xob tu tu sab ma, tub muaj peb ne, kuj ca peb nplij seb lub sab puas kaaj.  ;)



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« Reply #8 on: June 24, 2010, 08:40:20 AM »
Hi Lucky!  :) Of course I don't mind and I'm not quite a pro yet, but thanks.
Hopefully, I'll get there though, but won't compare to you or others such as BigBoi and DP.




Mlle eclps is a real pro now! ... U dont really wanna mess with her!

Words spitting out of her mouth like a machine-gun
She aint joking, not even here for fun

Playa, playa, trying to be  a smart-azz n outplay her
U'll just end-up with 3 big tripple X n zero number

Watch out fools, here she comes through that entrance door
Better step out, or U'll end-up kissing that dirty un-washed dance floor.

Mess with her, n she'll break u in two
Sending u back where u belong, n yes! That's the zoo!


Dont mind me Mlle eclips  ;)  :)  :)



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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2010, 11:15:31 AM »
What new poem??  ??? LOL.. I should probably just delete it anyways... I'll maybe put a different one in here. Maybe..


Mlle e-c-l-p-s-s-s-s-S-s  ;) put ur new poem IN here!!! Kthanksbye ...  ;D


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« Reply #10 on: September 13, 2010, 11:47:29 AM »
Okayy.. fine, you caught me..

An Eclipse…

I meet you for a brief moment, intrigued by you, you captured my heart.
A moment in time, our eyes meet and our hearts connect.
The same goals, experience in love and in life is what we both recollect.
A shadow cast upon us, blocking one another from each other’s reach.
We try hard to fight something too impossible to win.
Within our grasp, time was set short and our ability to hold on was slim.
Our times together, in laughter, in pain and sorrow, I won’t forget that we met.
Even if it was like a vision in a dream, your words of wisdom, I’ve kept.
If I can hold time in place so that the world would not spin, I would.
If I can hold time in place so that you are still here, I would, if only I could.
Two of a kind we are, you smilingly say with high hopes that we’d be together some day.
I always laughed as you say we’d make an unstoppable team.
Setting our hopes high to only live a vivid dream.
Life never turns out the way we all plan.
Yet you were just one of the few great men.
No matter where you maybe, I know you’re in a better place.
Leaving behind your mark and a great name which can’t be erased.
You and I are like an eclipse...
Our meeting so brief, yet quit a vision to see.
Like the sun, you shine bright and the light of my sight.
Like the sun, you are the heat to keep me warm.
Like the sun, you are the brightest star.
Like the sun, you still gleam on me no matter where you are.


ah ya!... the one u posted on ur diaries lod mas  ::)   :)  :)


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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #11 on: September 13, 2010, 12:07:10 PM »
Okayy.. fine, you caught me..

An Eclipse…

I meet you for a brief moment, intrigued by you, you captured my heart.
A moment in time, our eyes meet and our hearts connect.
The same goals, experience in love and in life is what we both recollect.
A shadow cast upon us, blocking one another from each other’s reach.
We try hard to fight something too impossible to win.
Within our grasp, time was set short and our ability to hold on was slim.
Our times together, in laughter, in pain and sorrow, I won’t forget that we met.
Even if it was like vision in a dream, your words of wisdom, I’ve kept.
If I can hold time in place so that the world would not spin, I would.
If I can hold time in place so that you are still here, I would, if only I could.
Two of a kind we are, you smilingly say with high hopes that we’d be together some day.
I always laughed as you say we’d make an unstoppable team.
Setting our hopes high to only live a vivid dream.
Life never turns out the way we all plan.
Yet you were just one of the few great men.
No matter where you maybe, I know you’re in a better place.
Leaving behind your mark and a great name which can’t be erased.
You and I are like an eclipse...
Our meeting so brief, yet quit a vision to see.
Like the sun, you shine bright and the light of my sight.
Like the sun, you are the heat to keep me warm.
Like the sun, you are the brightest star.
Like the sun, you still gleam on me no matter where you are.




Interesting, yet overall good poem I'd say. Yog le nua leejtwg yog tug yeej koj lub sab lawm ne? Is that why your screen name is Eclps, must be yom.. Soo..now, I'm on a venture to figureing out the digits to the screen name. I am sure it must stand for something.


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eclps05975

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Re: Ua Npau Suav Pom..
« Reply #12 on: September 13, 2010, 06:01:07 PM »
Curious aren't we? Haven't you heard curiosity killed the cat. E koj tsis ntshai lod?



Interesting, yet overall good poem I'd say. Yog le nua leejtwg yog tug yeej koj lub sab lawm ne? Is that why your screen name is Eclps, must be yom.. Soo..now, I'm on a venture to figureing out the digits to the screen name. I am sure it must stand for something.



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« Reply #13 on: September 13, 2010, 06:06:19 PM »
Curious aren't we? Haven't you heard curiosity killed the cat. E koj tsis ntshai lod?



Curious xwb ua caag na. I'm sure koj yeej muaj koj own curiosity hab. As long as the big cat or should I say "KING LION" don't open a can of worms xwb, don't think it'll matter much now would it. Besides nothing wrong with a man trying to figure a woman out and you reek of high mystery and intriguing I'd have to admit. Gottta love a mysterious woman.  ;)


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« Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 06:38:20 PM »
Curiosity, hmm.. Wish I had some, but not so much now a days. Mysterious? That'll be the way things remain deary. I could be a guy posing as a girl, LOL.. Still not scurred?  ??? ;D

Curious xwb ua caag na. I'm sure koj yeej muaj koj own curiosity hab. As long as the big cat or should I say "KING LION" don't open a can of worms xwb, don't think it'll matter much now would it. Besides nothing wrong with a man trying to figure a woman out and you reek of high mystery and intriguing I'd have to admit. Gottta love a mysterious woman.  ;)



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