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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #30 on: October 26, 2010, 07:29:28 PM »
LOL this is so funny :2funny:!  ok, here is another one for you.

cas kuv sau ua lug moob ntsuab,
kuv yuav tshuab cov lug rua koj,
koj has zoj tsi ua kuv chim,
twb yog vim txuj kev phoojywg,
nyob qhov twg los yeej lomzem,
has tau lem los tsi ua caag,
thaum sau taag maam luag uake,
tug haib ntshe yeej yuav yog koj,
vim koj coj tau thaj xev-xim,
nraug kaus-lim txhas yuav hlauv nplaig,
le lub ncaig koj kub kub heev (ver hot ;)),
lub cev seev ntshe yuav zoo saib,
koj yawg aib yog tug muaj moo,
tau qhov zoo lawm ces luag ntxhi,
lub nub ci los yuav tsi sawv,
yuav puag tsawv sib nwj sib nas,
qhov zoo cas rua ob leeg saaj,
txhob maaj maaj cuab thaj zoo zoo,
thaus tau xoom txhas le yuav nkaag  :2funny:
thaus ua taag mas txhas le tsimnyog ov...... :2funny:

laaj nyob es tso dlaag uasi xwb. :)




OMG!  :2funny:

Lem tag tag os, nplaj teb aw...  :idiot2: :2funny:

Kuv yuav hais cov lus zoo xwb,
Cia kuv swb rau koj zaum no,
Thov wb ho tig hais lwm thaj,
Tsis txhob maj hais lus vawb vawb,
Cuag dev dawb sib daig tom kev,
Es yuav xev hais aub hais npua,
Cia wb ua twb zoo los xav,
Kuv mam lav wb kev phoojywg,
Puag xwb pwg hais raws lus ncaj,
Koj mas hot kawg kiag li thiab,
Koj lub siab los zoo ib yam,
Nraug kheev tham kheev hais lus zoo,
Tsawg lub xyoo los koj xev xim,
Nraug kaus lim txawm yog koj ntag,
Hais tsis dag, koj zoo nraug tiag,
Cev los yiag phim nkaus lub plhu,
Koj quaspuj mas muaj hmoo tshaj,
Yam lub paj uas tshiab khwb khiv,
Yuav txi txiv tsis paub tu noob,
Me Nraug Hmoob, kuv xaus li no,
Thov neb nco ntsoov sib sib hlub,
Kom muaj tub muaj ntxhais puv tsev,
Txhob hais lus dev lus npua lawm nawb... lolz...




« Last Edit: October 26, 2010, 07:31:05 PM by Mrs.Vang »

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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #31 on: October 28, 2010, 10:18:04 AM »
kuv tswvyim taag lawm tsi paub sau ntxiv lawm os.  :)


ua tsaug ntau rua koj cov lug,
kuv yuav cug rua huv nruab sab,
lub neej tshab koj nyob le caag,
ncu yaav taag thaum moog uasi,
luag ntxhib ntxhi nraag chaw no su,
thaus koj nrug koj cov phoojywg,
moog qhov twg lawm lub sijhawm,
ntev ntev lawm yog muab xaav txug,
ua rua yug xaav tas yug laug,
lub neej taug tuab ntsai muag xwb,
ces yug twb taag ib nraab neej,
koj puas pheej xaav le kuv xaav,
txhob si caav lawm le koj has,
lug zoo cas wb muab has tawm,
tsaam sijhawm tsi muaj ntxiv lawm ces kuv yuav ncu ncu koj os tug phoojywg. :-[



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #32 on: October 28, 2010, 06:54:13 PM »
kuv tswvyim taag lawm tsi paub sau ntxiv lawm os.  :)


ua tsaug ntau rua koj cov lug,
kuv yuav cug rua huv nruab sab,
lub neej tshab koj nyob le caag,
ncu yaav taag thaum moog uasi,
luag ntxhib ntxhi nraag chaw no su,
thaus koj nrug koj cov phoojywg,
moog qhov twg lawm lub sijhawm,
ntev ntev lawm yog muab xaav txug,
ua rua yug xaav tas yug laug,
lub neej taug tuab ntsai muag xwb,
ces yug twb taag ib nraab neej,
koj puas pheej xaav le kuv xaav,
txhob si caav lawm le koj has,
lug zoo cas wb muab has tawm,
tsaam sijhawm tsi muaj ntxiv lawm ces kuv yuav ncu ncu koj os tug phoojywg. :-[


Ib pliag xwb txawm siv laus lawm,
Lub sij hawm sai npaum tis ya,
Lub siab nqa ua voj ua viag,
Cas ib pliag twb txog hnub no,
Kuv tseem nco thaum peb tseem hluas,
Luag his huas rau ub rau no,
Tsheej tag hmo tseem lom lom zem,
Tej laus cem mas cav tub qaug,
Muaj ib zaug kuv mus noj mov,
Nws tuaj tov tuaj ntsib peb thiab,
Noj nqaij txhiab thiab noj nqaij ci,
Nws cia li kom wb sib npav,
Muab khoom lav wb kev phoojywg,
Kom hnub twg los nco nruab siab,
Tias xiab khoom los ua puav pheej,
Txawm tsawg txheej los wb khaws tseg,
Wb txhob veg txoj kev phoojywg,
Txawm leej twg yuav thuam los xij,
Cas ib sij huam wb laus lawm,
Hmoov yeej sawm los zoo li no,
Ces mam nco cia rau nruab siab,
Mus ib txhiab tias tau sib ntsib,
Tsis tau dib los twb yog phoojwg ces zoo siab lawm os.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #33 on: October 28, 2010, 08:03:33 PM »
Haib ua luaj li os neb nas.  Tshaj lij  heev li lawm nawb.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #34 on: October 28, 2010, 08:13:55 PM »
Haib ua luaj li os neb nas.  Tshaj lij  heev li lawm nawb.  :)


Hahaha...  Dearest, you write one.  You're a great pajhuam writer.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #35 on: October 28, 2010, 09:13:48 PM »

Hahaha...  Dearest, you write one.  You're a great pajhuam writer.  :)

Kuv ces niam no tsis muaj tswv yim sau tej pajhuam no li lawm os.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #36 on: October 29, 2010, 10:08:45 AM »
kuv cov lug moob tsi tshua nplaum es txhas le nyuab rua kuv sau.  koj sau tau zoo vim koj tseem paub lug ntau tshaaj kuv.  tswvyim los muaj tswvyim. :)


lub caij nyoog tej nplooj xyoob nplooj ntoo poob,
cua tuaj txag zag tim tej hauv roob,
ua rua yug ncu txug yug tej nraug/nkauj moob,
lub cev yag leeg lub suab soob soob,

luag has tas, "hlub ib zag ncu moog ib sim,"
tau yug lug ua nkauj muam nraug nug si phim,
txujkev hlub pub dlawb xwb tsi kim,
txug thaum kawg lub sab txhas muaj kev chim,

txawm le caag los nplooj xyoob nplooj ntoo yuav rov hlaav,
txujkev hlub ces zoo le lub paaj tawg kws tsi muaj leejtwg taav,
zoo nkauj hab nxtim hlub, luag pum luag yuav dle coj moog kaav,
yog muab saib lug kuj ua rua yug tu sab, koj puas xaav?



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #37 on: October 31, 2010, 03:51:30 PM »
Mrs.Vang, your pajhuams are incredible.  With your permission I'd like to save them for my inspirations.  Btw, I feel like I'm reading poems from Tong Pak Fu.  I love Hmong literature but cannot write because my Hmong is very limited.  What are the rules to writing Paj Huam?  It seems those who can sing Pajhuam knows the secret outlines of writing it.  I'd like to learn very much in my very broken Hmong.  lol.





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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #38 on: October 31, 2010, 03:52:05 PM »
DEAREST MOTHER


A Mother is the Heart and Soul of any family,

Only now, do I realize how special you were to me.

The affection and understanding that you have always share,

No other woman will Love and Give me so much care.

Always teaching me your good words of wisdom,

So that later on, I could have my own kingdom.

Of all the negativities and tears that I have caused you

How deeply I regret to have never really say: "SORRY" too.

"People learn best, on their own... THE HARD WAY",

That's what Mama, you used to always say.

Now that you are gone and I will never have another chance to call you Mother,

I wish you all the Best because you really deserve better.

Untill the day we meet again,

I will make sure that all your teachings were not in vain.

Missing and remembering you,

I hope sometimes... You think of me too.


This brought tears to my eyes. 



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #39 on: October 31, 2010, 06:57:32 PM »
Mrs.Vang, your pajhuams are incredible.  With your permission I'd like to save them for my inspirations.  Btw, I feel like I'm reading poems from Tong Pak Fu.  I love Hmong literature but cannot write because my Hmong is very limited.  What are the rules to writing Paj Huam?  It seems those who can sing Pajhuam knows the secret outlines of writing it.  I'd like to learn very much in my very broken Hmong.  lol.


Wind, the secret to writing great inspirational poems comes from the heart not the mind.  You have to experience what you are writing about (ie heartbreak, lost love, lust, craving, love, hate, etc).  Mrs. V has life experience which she can bring out from her heart into written form.

The words she uses compared to mine is black and white.  She talks more about kev tu siab.  I talk more about lust... ;D



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #40 on: October 31, 2010, 07:38:36 PM »
Wind, the secret to writing great inspirational poems comes from the heart not the mind.  You have to experience what you are writing about (ie heartbreak, lost love, lust, craving, love, hate, etc).  Mrs. V has life experience which she can bring out from her heart into written form.

The words she uses compared to mine is black and white.  She talks more about kev tu siab.  I talk more about lust... ;D

It is obvious what you were writing about, NraugXXX.  lol  Women's mind is not inspired by lust but very much thoughts of the heart. 



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #41 on: November 01, 2010, 04:39:56 PM »
No yuav hais rau kuv dab laug
tus zoo nraug nyob Canada
Tuag txog lub lav Mesni..so.ta.  
Nws wb mus noj pho qab kawg
tham thaj twg los funny tag
Hais tsis dag, thov nej mloog.
Kuv dablaug xav kuv speak green,
nws kuj noog seb kuv puas white.
Kuv lees tias tau BS los lawm.
PH yog kuv chaw kawm kev phooj ywg,
Thiab kev tso dag.
Hais tiag tiag txhob qhia tus boss
Kuv mam coj ua neeg siab ncaj
yuav tsis BS rau tus dab laug li lawm.  

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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #42 on: November 01, 2010, 04:54:13 PM »
Oh I don't have enough poems to start my own thread.  I'm sure Mrs. Vang tsis mind os.  Your Hmong is fine.  I could make out most of them.  lol



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #43 on: November 03, 2010, 05:43:20 PM »
cua thiab lucky, neb kavtsi tsau tsau siab sau, kuv thiab leej muam Mrs. vaj wb mam li tuaj nrog neb sau thiaj li lomzem. ;)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #44 on: November 03, 2010, 07:19:20 PM »
AubMaimNkaj, you guys are too funny!  LOLz...

Awwww... thanks, Cua and Lucky.  Kuv ces laj laj nyob es lam xyaum sau xwb os...  NraugKKX is a great poet.  He was once known as William Shakespeare.  O0

Lucky, you're not bad yourself, lolz..   Thanks! :)



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