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Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« on: June 22, 2010, 01:45:40 AM »
Kuv xyaum hais lus pajhuam uasi... this is my first one!  ;D

Tsaus ntuj zus kuv siab quaj dhi
Ntuj tsaus nti hauv kuv nruab plawv
Koj tsis pawv hauv kuv siab li
Siab ntxhi chiv tuaj rau ntawm koj
Vim koj ploj mus lawm ntev loo
Tau ntau xyoo tsis hnov koj xov
Txog tav nov kuv tseem nco cia
Kuv txoj sia mas yaj ntshawv ntshis
Ya luj lis tseem nrhiav koj xwb
Me nraug xwb siab phem ua luaj
Hlub tsis ruaj tsis qhia thaum ntxov
Kuv siab ntxhov los txog hnub no
Muab koj nco ua tshais ua hmo
Siab ntxhov nyho lub kua muag poob
Leej nus Hmoob, thov cia lwm tiam
Txhob lim hiam li koj lawm mog
Tsam nco txog ces lig dhau lawm
Kua muag tawm los tsis npau suav
Kho siab khuav los tsis rov ntsib
Kuv mam pib yog tus tsim koj
Kom koj txoj me siav tshuav tu
Koj quaj hu txhos caug ntawv ntua
Los kuv dua toj ncaim lawm zuj zus
Koj siab puas tsus mus tag koj tiam
Neeg lim hiam ces zoo li no
Kuv mam thov nco ntsoov cia rau lwm tiam mog!



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2010, 11:14:01 AM »
... Hais kawg Mrs Vang!... Hope to see more... so kuv thiab practice taub kuj Hmong grammar/spelling/reading!...


Hi, LuckyLy!  Hope all is well with you.  Your Hmong will eventually get better.  Just keep practicing.  


Good luck.  ;)


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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2010, 11:43:06 AM »
  Thanks Mrs Vang... Problem is: my sound at the end of some word is even, at times wrong, so not too sure which letter to use... ha, ha... dumb no?!... But yeah, I'll just have to practice!...


Oh!  Hahahaha...  Hmmm...  You can't hear pitches, huh? 

Tsis ua cas os.  Kav tsij rau rau siab xyaum tas zog xwb ces tsis ntev xwb koj txawj lawm mas.  Ntawv Hmoob twb tsis nyuab, koj yeej yuav tsum txawj xwb os.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2010, 10:21:36 PM »

Caij ntuj sov twb rov tawm tuaj
Kuv tseem quaj kua muag ntws sis
Nco ib txhis tsis kaj siab li
Nco thaum i kuv txiv tseem nyob
Kuv siab mob los txog hnub no
Vim kuv nco nws rau nruab siab
Pos huab niab los nco ib zaug
Lub ntuj tsaug los nco ua luaj
Kab noog quaj ntxeev ntuj tim ub
Nco txog hnub koj ncaim peb lawm
Lub sij hawm dhau lawm zuj zus
Siab puas tsus vim peb ua ntsuag
Qi qhov muag los yeej tsis ploj
Peb twb loj muaj cuab yig tag
Neej txog nta los tseem nco koj
Txawj nrhiav noj thiab txawj nrhiav hnav
Los tseem xav nrog luag muaj txiv
Ntshe ib txhis yuav tsis sib ntsib
Kuv mam pib ua tib neeg zoo
Seb txoj hmoo puas yuav pab tau
Ib tiam dhau puas rov pom koj
Ua siab loj mam mloog koj hais
Seb puas tau rov los ua koj ib zaug ntxhais dua mog.











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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2010, 10:42:58 PM »
I'm very impressed though I can still read Hmong but I can't seem to grasp the writing portion.  Writing is like painting, and you paint a very good picture with your choice of words.  Love and respect.




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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 10:57:57 PM »
I'm very impressed though I can still read Hmong but I can't seem to grasp the writing portion.  Writing is like painting, and you paint a very good picture with your choice of words.  Love and respect.




Thanks, BigBoi.  This is my first time ever writing a pajhuam.  I'm still learning here, too. 

Again, thanks.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 11:29:59 PM »

Cov lus no hais rau kuv niam
Tias kuv tiam daim ntawv zoo dhau
Kuv thiaj tau los yog koj ntxhais
Kuv tsis hais los kua muag nrog
Ib ntus no koj laus zuj zus
Ib lo lus kuv tsis tau hais
Vim koj ntxhais ncauj lus tsis npliag
Tsis tau qhia tias hlub koj tshaj
Siab tsis kaj vim koj laus lawm
Tsis tau tawm hais lo lus qhia
Tias kuv niam yeej hlub peb heev
Koj peem nrees txuag koj txoj sia
Koj qhuab qhia kom peb tsim txiaj
Txawj khwv nyiaj los kav lub neej
Kom txhua leej raug kev tau zoo
Yam tsob ntoo koj roos rawv peb
Koj dawm zeb dawm cav nce toj
Koj nrhiav noj nce toj nqis taug
Los cawm tau kom peb txhob tuag
Lub neej ntsuag vim tsis muaj txiv
Yog muab piv mas koj khwv tshaj
Vim koj npaj rau peb txhua tus
Yuav nco mus kom tag ib sim
Tias ntuj tsim koj yog peb niam
Yuav thov qhia tias peb hlub koj
Nco tsis ploj koj rau nruab siab
Txawm ib txhiab los yuav nco cia
Thiaj thov qhia rau koj paub mog, kuv niam.





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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2010, 07:06:49 PM »
sis.. koj cov paj huam zoo kawg  O0
thov  caw sau ntxi puas tau sis?



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #8 on: July 01, 2010, 11:23:13 PM »
sis.. koj cov paj huam zoo kawg  O0
thov  caw sau ntxi puas tau sis?


Thanks, sis.  This is my first time ever writing pajhuams so you can tell that they're kinda cheesy, hehehe.



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #9 on: July 01, 2010, 11:24:23 PM »
Awwww... Lucky_Ly, your poems are awesome!  Thanks for sharing them.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #10 on: July 01, 2010, 11:42:11 PM »
Leej nus Hmoob, wb tsis sib tau
Nco koj dhau tsis xav ua neeg
Koj ib leeg tseem nyob kuv siab
Kua muag iab ntws nto txhua hnub
Yuav cas hlub koj txog hnub twg
Yam lub lwg tsis muaj hnub qhuav
Pw npau suav pom koj txhua hmo
Sij hawm no koj nrog twg nyob
Kuv siab mob txoj sia tshuav tu
Tsa ncauj hu los koj tsis hnov
Lub siab ntxhov los koj tsis paub
Xuav kuj kaub rau ub rau no
Ntshe yuav nco koj tag ib txhiab
Koj tus ntxhiab yuav tsis ploj li
Siab quaj dhi tsis hlub ntxiv lawm
Kev txij nkawm tsis nrog luag muaj
Los tsis quaj mam tos koj xwb
Thov kom wb sib tau lwm tiam
Ntshe yuav tshiam ruj rawv nruab siab
Thov koj thiab, nrhiav kom tau kuv
Txawm nrhiav puv lub qab ntuj no
Los wb nco tuaj rau nruab plawv
Thov tiam ntawv kom los sib tau
Thov sib sau rau fab lwm tiam nawb mog...


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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #11 on: July 04, 2010, 02:50:24 PM »
Thaum kuv hluas thiab tseem zoo nkauj
Neeg tuaj xauj cav kuv lub npe
Txhua txoj ke muaj neeg raws qab
Txiv Nraug Nab mas thiaj phim xwb
Tabsis twb tsis tau ntau xyoo
Txoj kev zoo txawm siv ploj lawm
Ntxhais Nkauj Ntxawm txaus ntshai kawg kiag
Leej twg ntsia mas ceeb tsheej plhaw
Dawm ko taw tseem ntog tsheej teeg
Vim ib zeeg los txog tav nov
Plaub hau ntxhov ntsej muag zij tag
Lub plab nqa ntxob laws ua ntej
Lub me ntsej mas ceb muag zees
Ntxws chom cees qhov muag ntxob laws
Lub me ntaws mas tshwm nplawv npliv
Luag hawv hiv ntxim ntshai kawg nkaus
Vim kuv laus tsis zoo li qub
Nej txhob ntxub tsam kis rau nej
Ces nej ho taug kuv txoj kev thiab ov...  hiv hiv om!  :2funny:



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #12 on: August 13, 2010, 05:15:33 PM »
A familiar poet,... it's been so long since I've read your poems. Thanks for posting them again. I've always enjoyed reading them. Please, continue to write and share. Your poems have always been truly of best.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #13 on: August 13, 2010, 05:25:53 PM »
Dearest, you are doing really good.  I love Hmoob pajhuam.  Kuv tsis tau sau pajhuam ntev lawm.  I enjoyed reading your pajhuam.  :)



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Re: Tus Neeg Siab Phem...
« Reply #14 on: September 08, 2010, 07:48:13 PM »
A familiar poet,... it's been so long since I've read your poems. Thanks for posting them again. I've always enjoyed reading them. Please, continue to write and share. Your poems have always been truly of best.  :)


I've lost it, Steven....  it's just not there anymore.  However, thanks for your kind words and also thank you for reading. 

I'd love to read some of yours, too.  You are, too, an eloquent poet!  Your ink leaks beautifully...  ;)



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