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Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« on: November 04, 2010, 01:36:47 PM »
Once upon a time, long before who knows when, there lived a man named Darkplanetasia .  He was a skillful artist whom the PH villagers admire.  Everyone was always so fascinated about his drawings and character.  He was always so cheerful and dandy. 

One day during the late afternoon, while he was walking down the PH forest, he stumbled upon a small creek.  This creek was never been seen before.  Darkplanetasia was quite surprised and yet afraid for he had walked through PH forest for since he was able to walk and yet never stumbled upon this very creek before. 

Very excited about his new found creek, he dropped his bag from his back.  Took out his drawing pad and pencil.  Sat down on the ground and sketched out what his eyes was able to see.  He was such a skillful artist, he did not need to look at his sketch for whatever he sketched would come out exactly looking the same as what his eyes see.

He did not care to look at what he completely had drawn.  Before he knew, it was dark.  He packed his belongings and ran home to sleep in hopes that he can cath the sunrise tomorrow at the same place where he found the creek. 




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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2010, 03:23:44 PM »
Darkplanetasia woke the next morning, before the sun rose up.  The way he did this, was not by alarm clock, since they did not have alarm clock in that era.  He had to drink 10 cups of water before he went to sleep, so he can wake up every so often to use the restroom.  As Darkplanetasia woke, First thing he did was run straight out the door and to the nearest tree to take a nice long leak.  He ran back inside, pack his drawing board and drawing equipment into his bag.  Headed right out the door and started to hurry towards the the place where he saw the creek.  As He walk toward the creek, he started realizing that the sun was coming up soon, so he ran towards the creek.  Right when the sun rose, was when he got to the creek, So he took out his drawing equipment and board and started drawing the sun coming up from where the creek had, seem to start from the Distant.  The more he drew the more he realized that the creek had gottan bigger.  so he finish drawing the Creek with the beautiful sunrise and Compared this drawing with the one he had made the day before.



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2010, 11:28:19 AM »
Darkplanetasia was so happy he had completed the his drawing.  As he took out the other piece from last night to compare, he was so amazed at his artistic skills.

Then something caught his eyes.  In the drawing from last evening, there was a beautiful womanly human figure in the background but kind of a blur.  He didn't recall seeing anything like that from last night.  Darkplanetasia closed his eyes tightly trying to remember what exactly he saw.  There was no form or shape of any spieces.  Nothing.

He opened his eyes and glimpsed over to the drawing he just did with the sunrise.  There was no creature but the creek flowing along the trees.  As his eyes followed the creek in his drawing through the trail of forest, he found himself staring at the rays shining through the treetop.  He followed the rays down as it touched the tree trump on the side of the creek...he found what he thought some sort of entrance.

Then it hit him hard in the head.  He looked up quickly to view the creek where he found the entrance in the drawing but there was nothing.  He couldn't believe it.  There must have been something.  His artistic skills is so awesome, everything he sees and draws looks exactly the same....but why is his drawing not coming out right. 

What is it that is not right...he couldn't figure.  He was so devastated that he is starting to lose his artistic skills.  He went back home to drown himself to sleep so that time would move by faster and he'll be able to wake up during the afternoon in hopes of finding out what could it be that is secretly hidden in the creek of the PH forest that evening.




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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2010, 12:57:00 PM »
DarkplanetAsia reached home and walked into his room and layed down on his bed.  He started to drift off and then fell into a Deep sleep.  As he layed there sleeping, he had a dream.  In his dream was a Woman.  The Women wore leaves as clothing, the top was just a few leaves that coverd her chest and the bottom, was mini skirt like dress.  In his dream the women was crying out help me and falling down a deep dark hole.  She cried out help all the way unitl he couldn't see her anymore.  Then the dream change dramatically, with balls of fire falling from the sky and his village was being burn down to the ground with fire and the PH villager running around helplessly.  In his dream Darkplanetasia, Ran to the creek to get water to try to kill the fire.  As he got to the creek, he saw the same women, he had saw earlier, running towards the creek and straight to the entrance that he had drawn the night before.  She open the entrace and crawl through.  He ran towards the entrance and open it and he could see her fallling and crying out for help!   He started to yell out to the women, but Right at that moment, He woke up and was in cold sweet, breathing heavily.



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #4 on: November 08, 2010, 01:49:43 PM »
Darkplanetasia woke up with a migraine.  The right side of his head was throbbing horribly.  Yet his determination to find out the mysterious PH forest wasn't over and that migraine was not going to stop his curiousity either.  He jumped off his bed, pour water over his face, snatched his bag and hurry out the door. 

Upon arrival to the same place he usually goes to, there was a brush of hard wind.  It was so windy, Darkplanetasia lost his balance and had to fall to the ground to hold himself.  However the wind was too powerful, it blew him off to the side of the road.  He couldn't stand anymore, so he slowly crawl himself away into the PH forest to find shelter.  He wasn't looking at where he was crawling to but he saw the sparking creek not too far away.  He knew that if he followed that creek, he wouldn't get lost, as most river always has a river bank.  As he followed the creek he finally found a large giant tree where he held onto tightly so he wouldn't fly away.

Soon after the wind died down a little, Darkplanetasia finally lifted up his head.  In front of his eyes there was three trees marked with significant symbols not too far away from where he was.  The creek was gone.  He had no idea how or where the creek was anymore.  He picked himself up quickly and walked over to the four magnificant trees.  These trees were huge and different than any other trees surrounding the area.

One of the trees was carved with a rock with some stars glittering down to some spiral looking gene.  One of the tree was carved with weird looking eyes and spiky hair growing from the top like a fruit.  The last one was the most intriguing one for Darkplanetasia .  It was carved with a beautiful white gown flowing as if the wind was blowing by it...and lots of bird-like pigeons twirling around in it like a magical swirl. 

Darkplanetasia's eyes was totally locked down on that tree as his feet started walking towards it.  He couldn't help but wonder why anyone would carved such beautiful gown to a tree.  He couldn't take his eyes off it.  As he got closer, he reached out to carass the beauty mark on the tree.


(rockstargenes, the spotlight is on you to introduce our second character...LO L)



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #5 on: November 08, 2010, 03:10:06 PM »
wth guys!!?? hahahahahahaha funny!  :idiot2: :2funny:



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #6 on: November 08, 2010, 03:43:38 PM »
As DarkplanetAsia Went to Caress the Beauty mark, he heard a Beautiful voice calling his name.  Darkplanetasia .... Darkplanetasia ....  he turn around and no one was there.  So he Went back to Examine the markings and right when he touch the markings a beatiful woman Suddenly appeard in midair Saying Dark, please help us... Darkplanetasia was soo Shock..  It was the same women From his dream.  She Said to him, "my name is Yes.. The pigeon Spirit of this Forest..  These other marking, on the other trees are also Spirits of the forrest.  they no longer sparkle for they are weak and the edge of dying.  I need your help to save them. Will you Come to the spirit world with me to Save them."  Darkplanetasia was speachless.. he couldn't Say a word...  So he decide to Run.. he turn around and was about to start running but she was in human form, right infront of him.   He couldn't Stop But admire her beauty.... She ask him once again would you help me save them?  he didn't know what to say, so he started to say her name Yes and  The pigeon Spirit took that as an answer yes to her question and Started to teleport them to the Spirit world.



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #7 on: November 08, 2010, 03:44:01 PM »
wth guys!!?? hahahahahahaha funny!  :idiot2: :2funny:
 

You know your in this story!



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #8 on: November 08, 2010, 09:28:31 PM »
Please continue. You two are quite imaginative writers.



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #9 on: November 09, 2010, 11:13:44 AM »
Please continue. You two are quite imaginative writers.

I suck at writing and story telling. 



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #10 on: November 09, 2010, 12:17:43 PM »
As DarkplanetAsia Went to Caress the Beauty mark, he heard a Beautiful voice calling his name.  Darkplanetasia .... Darkplanetasia ....  he turn around and no one was there.  So he Went back to Examine the markings and right when he touch the markings a beatiful woman Suddenly appeard in midair Saying Dark, please help us... Darkplanetasia was soo Shock..  It was the same women From his dream.  She Said to him, "my name is Yes.. The pigeon Spirit of this Forest..  These other marking, on the other trees are also Spirits of the forrest.  they no longer sparkle for they are weak and the edge of dying.  I need your help to save them. Will you Come to the spirit world with me to Save them."  Darkplanetasia was speachless.. he couldn't Say a word...  So he decide to Run.. he turn around and was about to start running but she was in human form, right infront of him.   He couldn't Stop But admire her beauty.... She ask him once again would you help me save them?  he didn't know what to say, so he started to say her name Yes and  The pigeon Spirit took that as an answer yes to her question and Started to teleport them to the Spirit world.
:2funny: :2funny: you should become a fairytale writer!!! cuuute!



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #11 on: November 09, 2010, 03:27:13 PM »
Yes started flopping her arms like a chicken.  Then she put her right foot in, she put her right foot out, she put her right foot in and she shake it all about...she does the Hokey-Pokey and she turn herself around cause that's what it's all about teleporting Darkplanetasia into the PH world of spirit...the world as Darkplanetasia knew had turned upside down and he went blank....

*splash*

Darkplanetasia woke up with water dripping down his face.  He looked around and saw an old lady mumbling to herself walking away with a bowl to get more water.  He was confused of his whereabouts.  The old lady dipped into the small  ceramic pot and scooped up some water. 

Darkplanetasia got up right away so that the old lady is aware he has woken up.  Right when the old lady turned around, Darkplanetasia had his eyes wide open staring straight at her and gave her a fright.  She threw the bowl of water hard straight into Darkplanetasia's face.   Darkplanetasia tipped over and fell back into the bed.  It was hot water and had burned his the side of his face.  Yes popped through the entrance door and quickly grabbed a cloth, hurried over to Darkplanetasia's side and wiped his face. 

He was overly insecure about his meeting with Yes, he tried to push her over, but when his eyes met hers...time stood still. 

*splash* *splash*

"You two, stop being gay and get over here!  There are things that needs to be explain and we need to hurry!" cried the old lady.



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #12 on: November 09, 2010, 03:38:28 PM »
Yes started flopping her arms like a chicken.  Then she put her right foot in, she put her right foot out, she put her right foot in and she shake it all about...she does the Hokey-Pokey and she turn herself around cause that's what it's all about teleporting Darkplanetasia into the PH world of spirit...the world as Darkplanetasia knew had turned upside down and he went blank....

*splash*

Darkplanetasia woke up with water dripping down his face.  He looked around and saw an old lady mumbling to herself walking away with a bowl to get more water.  He was confused of his whereabouts.  The old lady dipped into the small  ceramic pot and scooped up some water. 

Darkplanetasia got up right away so that the old lady is aware he has woken up.  Right when the old lady turned around, Darkplanetasia had his eyes wide open staring straight at her and gave her a fright.  She threw the bowl of water hard straight into Darkplanetasia's face.   Darkplanetasia tipped over and fell back into the bed.  It was hot water and had burned his the side of his face.  Yes popped through the entrance door and quickly grabbed a cloth, hurried over to Darkplanetasia's side and wiped his face. 

He was overly insecure about his meeting with Yes, he tried to push her over, but when his eyes met hers...time stood still. 

*splash* *splash*

"You two, stop being gay and get over here!  There are things that needs to be explain and we need to hurry!" cried the old lady.
hahahhaa im shaking it all about now!!!! thanks pineapple! you're good !!



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #13 on: November 11, 2010, 11:24:24 AM »
The Old Lady Yelled Out to both Darkplanet asia and Yes to Come to the table that she was near by.  They Both walked Over there and the Old lady said " sit, both of you.  I have to explain the plan to both of you."  Both of them started to sit down on some old wooden chair, that didn't look to sturdy.  Yes sat down with no problem, but darkplanetasia, was a different story.  Right When he sat down the chair some how magically Moved and he fell striaght down to the ground, hitting his ass on the ground.  The Old lady Bursted in laughter.  yes Said at thtat moment sorry just had to do that once.  She moved that chair with her magical powers.  DarkplanetAsia got back up Grab the chair and this time he made sure he sat down on the chair, by watching yes and hold on to the chair.  After he sat down the old Lady Started to Explain the Plan but Darkplanetasia interuppted her and Said " who the hell are you, old lady?"



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Re: Darkplanetasia by: Rockstargenes & Pineapple
« Reply #14 on: November 12, 2010, 11:37:46 AM »
"There's no time for that right now!" retorted the old lady.  She turned around and walked over to a coner of the room.  Kneeling down, she grabbed a small shovel nearby and started digging on the ground.

*what is she doing* thought Darkplanetasia .  Yes sat still.

After digging awhile, the old lady put her hands inside the whole and took out a piece of paper.  Quickly grabbed a cloth and started wiping down the peice of paper.  "Here it is..." she whispered quietly.

Darkplanetasia rolled his eyes.  He thought to himself about an old lady buring a freaking paper, why would an old lady bury a paper..? 

She walked over and sat next to Yes.  She took Yes's hand and placed the paper in her hand.  "This my dear child, is PH's salvation."  Yes was confused, she did not know what the old lady meant.  The old lady continue, "it is through you, that this young man will wield the the power to help keep PH world in peace."

*this old lady is one crazy woman* thought Darkplanetasia *what the heck is that piece of paper*

Yes slowly opened the old ragged piece of paper in her hands.  There were stick people walking around.  Lots and lots of names over those stick people.  They were moving all around the paper.  Seems almost like watching drama and people bashing one another.  Then her eyes rolled over to the top and it read "In Your Control." 



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