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Author Topic: Fallen Soldier  (Read 1252 times)

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Pineapple

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Fallen Soldier
« on: January 06, 2011, 02:59:36 PM »
Through the darkness, I thought I could find a ray of light
Yet, fallen like a crushed stone
I’ve only caught myself slaughtering my own heart
My mind completely folded and tangled
Everywhere is all in a haze, unfocused

Plundering through this field of mess
Why is there no living presence to my aid
Left all alone in a long and cold battle
Weaken, dragged, and unfounded
Unable to rise on these old worn boots

The speak of victory, the glorified life
Where did it go, how did it become this
The blood that flows through my heart
Cannot be felt by love and protection
That was in favor by those in control.

My lineage, my world, covered underground
One last breath to breathe its worth
This life of darkness before the sun set
With my eyes wide open, here I lie
In the light of my comrades, my life.

-Pineapple



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Peachy Fish

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Re: Fallen Soldier
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 12:28:45 PM »
 :'( It was so sad Pineapple. Good job.



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Peachy Fish

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Re: Fallen Soldier
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 01:25:54 PM »
I think sometimes, when we read sad poems/notes/songs, we gotta look into the bright side... n view it as a msg of Hope n positivity... Nah, Mlle PF?!...

But whichever intertrepation one make with the author/writter's work, we should always give it a  O0 O0 O0 because the work really touched us.

Yes that's true lucky_ly.



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