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Author Topic: Come talk with me...  (Read 3510 times)

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AverageTou

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Re: Come talk with me...
« Reply #15 on: July 23, 2014, 07:33:00 PM »
The thread titled “come talk with me...”
I though to my self “who could this be...?
Must have been post by a lady
Cause it sounded kind of corny

After I clicked to read what was written
My eyes locked on the avatar and widen
To my surprise, I was correct indeed
The starter is a lady, she looked nice and friendly

She was just writing something
That rhymes with other wording
Read them all together
I realized she's a creative writer

Now I'm just going to reply
With words as they poetically combine
To see if she'd continue writing
So I'd know if she's really that “keej-keej”



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LadyLionness

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Re: Come talk with me...
« Reply #16 on: July 29, 2014, 06:29:02 PM »
AverageTou
Nice to meet you
There is so very little time
To clear my heart and my mind
I hope you will come back
And continue this chat
I am not very "keej-keej"
I just enjoy writing



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LadyLionness

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Re: Come talk with me...
« Reply #17 on: July 29, 2014, 06:31:45 PM »
How has the time passed me by
I am so old, in just a blink of the eye
We are where our parents were
When we thought they were such bores
Now we are the old ones
Soon, we too will be gone
 



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AverageTou

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Re: Come talk with me...
« Reply #18 on: July 29, 2014, 07:25:17 PM »
Hi LadyLionness,
With all poetically seriousness
You're such a expressive poem writer
Too good to be true, almost a attention getter

You mentioned how little time seem
I can only imagine how hard it must been
To clear your heart and mind here
As if anyone can reasonably make them disappear

I'd like to ask if I may...
Clear the heart and mind?... why not let it stay?
If its not a bothersome, pls do share
Never know... it might be music into the ear



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LadyLionness

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Re: Come talk with me...
« Reply #19 on: July 29, 2014, 08:13:47 PM »
Poetry is the an expression of the heart
Without a clear mind, one cannot start
It's emotions that move our soul
Which enable the thoughts to flow



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