Well since everybody's writing about love, I think I should start also

[jon_jon]

cool i like short poems..

this one probably has already been posted somewhere here but it's always my favorite one:

i carry your heart with me
i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go, my dear;and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)
                                                        i fear
no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
higher than soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)

by E.E. cummings

[jon_jon]

Lub Suab Hu Kuv by jj

Yog tsis muaj koj lub suab hu kuv,
Mloog lawm tus hu los tsis muaj nuj nqig.

Yog tsis muaj koj los nrog kuv mus,
Kuv lub siab yuav nrhiav koj  mus ibtxhis.

Ntshe tig ib hmo yuav uas npau suav txog,
Hnub uas kuv yuav tau koj los nyob nrog.

Es yuav sawv los tsis pom koj nyob ib sab,
Yuav mob kuv siab tsis muaj hnub kaj.

Thaum twg koj mas li los puag ,
Tsis txhob cia kuv nyob ib vuag.

Nco koj npaum li hniav hnub thov,
Kom tau hnov koj lub suab uas rau kuv sov.

Yog tsis muaj koj lub suab hu kuv,
Mloog lawm tus hu los tsis muaj nuj nqig.

Yog tau koj los nrog kuv mus,
Kuv lub siab yuav nyob kaj siab lug.

Yuav nyob kaj siab lug, mus tag ibtxhis,
Mus ntev dhau lub tebchaws nov, kom dim.

[Kvang331]

cool i like short poems..

this one probably has already been posted somewhere here but it's always my favorite one:

i carry your heart with me
i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go, my dear;and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)
                                                        i fear
no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
higher than soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)

by E.E. cummings

Great stuff! That writing level is probably way beyond mines lol but it's good, I like it and for the one in Hmong, I couldn't read it :\ I know, I'm a disgrace to Hmongs everywhere lol

[proudlao]

Me too lol but what I meant is umm more people can relate when it comes to love?

Only fools who have not live life to the fullest do?   

[Kvang331]

Only fools who have not live life to the fullest do? 

Haha I'm a fool then.....in my mind, love is all that matters to me lol

[Kvang331]

JJ, you are very talented. You should write more. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem with us.

Even though I couldn't read it, I agree with Sweet_Tears because I know she have good taste lol

[Kvang331]

Let me translate it for you baby as best as I can.
 
"The Heart Call For You"
 
If there is no you, the one that call
Listen to others call but it would not mean anything
 
If there is no you to go with me
My heart will always be looking for you eternity
 
Tossing and turning I will be dreaming
Of the day that you will be mine
 
But when I wake up, you will not be there
My heart will hurt and never see the light
 
When will you come and hold
Don't let me stranded
 
I miss you every single day, please
let me hear your voice to warm my heart
 
If there is no you, the one that call
Listen to others call but it would not mean anything

If I have you to go with me
My heart will feel free
 
I will live freely for the rest of my life
( I don't understand this last line). LOL

Thanks for the translation, now I can make out  the hmong words a little bit, and it sounds nice, I like it

[jon_jon]

Let me translate it for you baby as best as I can.
 
"The Heart Call For You"
 
If there is no you, the one that call
Listen to others call but it would not mean anything
 
If there is no you to go with me
My heart will always be looking for you eternity
 
Tossing and turning I will be dreaming
Of the day that you will be mine
 
But when I wake up, you will not be there
My heart will hurt and never see the light
 
When will you come and hold
Don't let me stranded
 
I miss you every single day, please
let me hear your voice to warm my heart
 
If there is no you, the one that call
Listen to others call but it would not mean anything

If I have you to go with me
My heart will feel free
 
I will live freely for the rest of my life
( I don't understand this last line). LOL
 

Thanks, ST and Kang for your feedback.

“The Heart Call For You”… close… lols

The title actually says….“The Voice that Calls Me”

Last line translates to… Till the passing of this world, to be free…

Sounds better in hmoob...

Dedicated to Kimberlee.

[Kvang331]

Once again, thanks for the translation and I'm actually Kong by the way, but nice guess though

[Kvang331]

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