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Mattster

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2013, 12:19:18 PM »
Thanks!  You're the first one I've shown the poem to.  I'm a sucker for bitter/sweet, love/loss poems.  I guess a reflection of my experiences.




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proudlao

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« Reply #16 on: January 10, 2013, 12:19:41 PM »
Thanks Proudlao.  I've seen your writing.  Coming from you that is big compliment. :)

Thank you as well. If you don't mind, share more of your poems with us. Maybe others may too. If not soon that section will just die out  :)



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yoursunrise4ever

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« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2013, 12:21:36 PM »
I am too. Maybe one day I will return one back to you. In the meantime, I would love to read more if you don't mind. You can post it right here in my journal. Take all the space that you need. ;)



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Mattster

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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2013, 12:29:46 PM »
I have a couple more that I may post up.  I'm pretty private and not an avid writer. Inspiration has been a bit lacking lately.  No recent heartbreaks or heartaches. hehe.  But maybe, I can find someone to inspire me... ;)



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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #19 on: January 10, 2013, 12:32:34 PM »
Yes, I know that just like everything else in life, we need that inspiration. It just doesn't come easy but when it does, our fingers just want to type forever. I hope that you will continue to share with me as I plan to share with you all.



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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #20 on: January 10, 2013, 04:29:20 PM »
Life often throw us a curve ball and it's up to us to either dodge it or take a aim for it. I think my life could have been better if not for all my careless mistakes and decisions. What seems to be right at the time is not so right after a couple of years. Do I have regrets? Yes and No. I tried to live my life the way I see fit me and who I am but I know that they are not always the right way. I have no one to blame except for myself. I am accountable for all my decisions and actions.  :-\


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yoursunrise4ever

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« Reply #21 on: January 10, 2013, 04:30:52 PM »
My daily quote:
 
In everyone's life, at some time, our inner fire goes out. It is then burst into flame by an encounter with another human being. We should all be thankful for those people who rekindle the inner spirit.
Albert Schweitzer



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proudlao

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #22 on: January 11, 2013, 08:31:36 AM »
Love that quote.



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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #23 on: January 11, 2013, 09:13:03 AM »
Thank you. :)



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Mattster

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« Reply #24 on: January 11, 2013, 09:40:10 AM »
Good morning.

I call this piece "Timeless".

Shadows, they play tricks on my mind.
They flaunt your image just out of the light.
How long has it been since the night has come?
The chill creeps in as the light is undone.

The cruel wind, ever teasing me.
It whispers your name unceasingly.
Reminding me, in its chilling embrace.
Of the warmth of your touch and the beauty of your face.

So, upon this lonely hill I wait.
Amidst the memories of another place.
Of a time when cares where free
In a world where you belonged to me.

The sun was your halo, it glimmered and shined.
Its soft golden light caressing your skin divine.
The day you left, my summer ceased to exist.
My world turned gray and faded into the mist.

Time passes like a thief in the night
But I still hold on, with all my might.
Awaiting the return of your forgiving kindness,
Until then, my love for you is forever timeless..




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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #25 on: January 11, 2013, 10:19:13 AM »
Not the best because I just wrote it just now. Since I love that time era so much. This one has no title.
 
 
 
In a time where knights fought
Love came without a thought
And kingdoms was made
From blood that shed on blade (s)
 
The earth shook with stumping horses
And history took its courses
Stood a knight in his shining armor
He was such a charmer
 
He rode from where the sun doesn’t shine
In his armor he look so fine
His eyes were dark brown like the midnight sun
One look into his eyes and you can’t run
 
Mystical spells travelled throughout the land
Seeking for that one person’s hand
It seek only the best and the fairest of all
The one that will rise above all and not fall
 
She who bear his soul from ten thousand lifetime
Will decide his only one crime
To love for all eternity or to have a fable love
For never again will he be sent from above
 
In her castle she sat with empty hopes
Just waiting for her knight to elope
Through the land, the night fall
And all hopes grew lost without a call
 
Morning sunrise sparkle in her eyes
She saw her knight riding toward the sunrise
Distance no more exist between her and him
From afar she can see his beautiful grin
 
At last ten thousand years, two hearts reunited
Under the heaven, no more fight
One love, one soul, one heart
No more will they ever part
 


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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #26 on: January 11, 2013, 10:23:53 AM »
Mattster, since you are looking for inspiration to write. Why don't you write one pertaining to my nickname "Your sunrise forever".  ;)



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Mattster

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #27 on: January 11, 2013, 10:30:51 AM »
Not the best because I just wrote it just now. Since I love that time era so much. This one has no title.
 
 
 
In a time where knights fought
Love came without a thought
And kingdoms was made
From blood that shed on blade (s)
 
The earth shook with stumping horses
And history took its courses
Stood a knight in his shining armor
He was such a charmer
 
He rode from where the sun doesn’t shine
In his armor he look so fine
His eyes were dark brown like the midnight sun
One look into his eyes and you can’t run
 
Mystical spells travelled throughout the land
Seeking for that one person’s hand
It seek only the best and the fairest of all
The one that will rise above all and not fall
 
She who bear his soul from ten thousand lifetime
Will decide his only one crime
To love for all eternity or to have a fable love
For never again will he be sent from above
 
In her castle she sat with empty hopes
Just waiting for her knight to elope
Through the land, the night fall
And all hopes grew lost without a call
 
Morning sunrise sparkle in her eyes
She saw her knight riding toward the sunrise
Distance no more exit between her and him
From afar she can see his beautiful grin
 
At last ten thousand years, two hearts reunited
Under the heaven, no more fight
One love, one soul, one heart
No more will they ever part
 


Wow! That's quite impressive!  I bow down to your talents. :)



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yoursunrise4ever

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #28 on: January 11, 2013, 10:35:12 AM »
Still not as good as you but thank you. You inspired me to write again. :)



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Mattster

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Re: Let Me Be Yoursunrise4ever...
« Reply #29 on: January 11, 2013, 10:55:08 AM »
Mattster, since you are looking for inspiration to write. Why don't you write one pertaining to my nickname "Your sunrise forever".  ;)

Lol, I'll give it a try.  My writing process is long and arduous. I'm not a natural like yourself.  There are a lot of cobwebs in my attic.



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