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Lost Loves
« on: August 19, 2013, 09:30:42 AM »
Faded memories that were lost in time
Foreshadowings that should have been a sign

Living life joyously and free
Ignoring everything that was around me

You were kind, intelligent, and generous
All of this must have been onerous

I loved, honored, and idolized you
My love was bountiful through and true

You left me, then you let me fall
Now I've built this unyielding wall

I don't know how to ever let go
I know I am my own worst foe

No matter what, I love you still
My heart is broken, but not my will

Even though, you are gone
What remains is a despondent song



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2013, 09:44:03 AM »
I didn't write this one, the author wants to remain anonymous...  ;D


We ended what we could of had on a good note
This heart yearns for you, it’s still broke
My pulse weakens due to a triangle choke
I’m rocking to the beat of a sad tone

I desire nothing but the best for your life
Hopefully you’ll receive what you wished for in due time
I knew I could of made it happen if you gave me a try
You didn’t feel the same, that was your reason why

Maybe your reason was true or maybe not
The way I feel for you will never stop
Just like Father Time, it goes on even when the sun drop
My love has no clock, it stops to no roadblock

Meeting you, I’m glad to have known
There’s a saying, “if you love someone let them go”
Just like a dove, you’ve gone, you flown
Will you come back to me, I will never know

I’ve made three wishes on a shooting star on your behalf
I was afraid that you’ll miss it because it shot across the night sky real fast
All three wishes was for your happiness and not a single one was for you to come back
Your smile is everything, you come first even if I finish last



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2013, 10:40:12 AM »
Wow, your piece is good but the second one is better.  I like em both but the second one's last stanza sealed the deal for me.  The poet made all three wishes for that one person, soo unselfish.   O0



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2013, 11:06:38 AM »
 :2funny:   You guys crack me up.   :2funny:



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2013, 11:10:00 AM »
 :dontknow:



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2013, 11:19:20 AM »



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2013, 11:40:31 AM »
You be quiet.    :2funny:    :P
What I do?  It would be nice for the unknown poet to show him/herself to us.   O0



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #7 on: August 19, 2013, 11:47:47 AM »
Is it you Json? I bet it's Mr. President huh?
It could be.   >:D.  You have to ask tRouBle.   O0



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2013, 12:10:18 PM »
I will not reveal unless he is ok with it.   ;D



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2013, 01:11:57 PM »
I will not reveal unless he is ok with it.   ;D
You must admire this poet to keep his identity a secret.  At least we the poet is male.   O0



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #10 on: August 19, 2013, 01:40:54 PM »
You must admire this poet to keep his identity a secret.  At least we the poet is male.   O0

You mean you should admire the person keeping their word and the identity a secret.   ;D



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #11 on: August 19, 2013, 01:50:14 PM »
You mean you should admire the person keeping their word and the identity a secret.   ;D
No, you made a pact and should be obligated to fulfill it.  You could expose the poet but choose not to b/c you admire that person.  I bet he's  flattered.  I would be if I was him.   O0  :P



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #12 on: August 19, 2013, 04:29:19 PM »
No, you made a pact and should be obligated to fulfill it.  You could expose the poet but choose not to b/c you admire that person.  I bet he's  flattered.  I would be if I was him.   O0  :P

Or I chose not to reveal the person because I made a pact......and since I highly respect myself and have higher standards for myself,  I would not reveal who it is.   ;D    :P



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #13 on: August 19, 2013, 05:50:40 PM »
Or I chose not to reveal the person because I made a pact......and since I highly respect myself and have higher standards for myself,  I would not reveal who it is.   ;D    :P
Thought so.   >:D



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Re: Lost Loves
« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2013, 06:09:33 PM »
Yes, BiggieT is really good! ;D


Lol. Not me. Not dark enough :)



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