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Re: The Girl On PEBHMONG
« Reply #15 on: September 05, 2013, 01:18:37 PM »
And I told liked it is yo.  I dont talk about my love life, I write about it.  Kinda like Taylor Swift.  So maybe I told her already IF she exists.   O0

IF you informed her then why did you state in your poem that "she has yet to discover," because to me that implies that you haven't told her.   ;D    :P   We'll see what you have for us next....   ^-^



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Re: The Girl On PEBHMONG
« Reply #16 on: September 05, 2013, 01:25:08 PM »
IF you informed her then why did you state in your poem that "she has yet to discover," because to me that implies that you haven't told her.   ;D    :P   We'll see what you have for us next....   ^-^
Dang, you analyzed my piece.  I'm saying she thinks its someone else but its really her.  The next piece.will be awesome too. O0



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« Reply #17 on: September 05, 2013, 04:06:35 PM »
Dang, you analyzed my piece.  I'm saying she thinks its someone else but its really her.  The next piece.will be awesome too. O0

I don't just read poetry, I analyze and interpret the meaning behind them too.   ;D    :P



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« Reply #18 on: September 05, 2013, 04:14:43 PM »
I don't just read poetry, I analyze and interpret the meaning behind them too.   ;D    :P
:2funny:  I wonder how many times you reread it.   :icon_study:



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« Reply #19 on: September 05, 2013, 04:26:44 PM »
:2funny:  I wonder how many times you reread it.   :icon_study:

Not as many times as you've had when you were writing it.    ;D     :P



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« Reply #20 on: September 05, 2013, 04:32:49 PM »
Not as many times as you've had when you were writing it.    ;D     :P
Sure.  Tell yourelf that hog wash.   :munky2:



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« Reply #21 on: September 05, 2013, 06:13:28 PM »
Sure.  Tell yourelf that hog wash.   :munky2:

Well, I only had to read it twice and you were pretty straight forward with your writing so there wasn't that much analysis involved.   ;D



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« Reply #22 on: September 05, 2013, 06:24:56 PM »
Well, I only had to read it twice and you were pretty straight forward with your writing so there wasn't that much analysis involved.   ;D
That's because my style is as you describe yet packs a major punch.   :boxing:



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« Reply #23 on: September 05, 2013, 06:49:56 PM »
That's because my style is as you describe yet packs a major punch.   :boxing:

It certainly can......espec ially a certain one that was....uhhh... .moved.  Or at least that's what I heard.   ;D    :D



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« Reply #24 on: September 05, 2013, 08:39:01 PM »
It certainly can......espec ially a certain one that was....uhhh... .moved.  Or at least that's what I heard.   ;D    :D
How did you hear about it if you've never read or seen it.   :)



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« Reply #25 on: September 06, 2013, 10:09:45 AM »
How did you hear about it if you've never read or seen it.   :)

Fortunately, I only saw part of it......and a little birdy told me it was moved.   ^-^



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« Reply #26 on: September 06, 2013, 10:15:32 AM »
Fortunately, I only saw part of it......and a little birdy told me it was moved.   ^-^
Ohhh, was it me that told you?  I'm forgetful.   :)



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Re: The Girl On PEBHMONG
« Reply #27 on: September 06, 2013, 05:33:48 PM »
Ohhh, was it me that told you?  I'm forgetful.   :)

Ding, ding, ding.  Good job.   O0      :D



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« Reply #28 on: September 06, 2013, 05:40:38 PM »
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