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The Invisible Man
« on: October 10, 2013, 10:18:05 PM »
I know I’m not the most handsome cat
I’m at the bottom of the list if comparing stats
When it comes to the race, this nice guy is already last
It’s okay, I’m use to that

You said wait patiently and I’ll eventually get my chance
I’ve waited an eternity for romance
Has love viewed me as one insignificant ant
No wonder I don’t know how to slow dance

I have shown you everything
There is nothing else, no sugar coating
I’m being real, no acting
Place your hand on my heart, for you it’s beating

Only if you see with your heart and not your eyes
You’ll then realize
I’m a real gentleman, no disguise
I’m apart from all the other guys

Yes, I’m different
A person like me does live in your present
Your eyes looks through me as though I’m transparent
You don’t believe me, call me, no appointments

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Re: The Invisible Man
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2013, 12:22:51 AM »
You're not invisible..... I'm sure she sees you too. :)

What a sad poem though.. sigh.
Thanks for your kind words.  I was writing and I guess my sadness manifested its way out. 



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« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2013, 07:25:27 AM »
You are right about writing being therapeutic.  I do feel a lot better.  My mind is released from this subject, for now that is..  It was bugging me for a few days.  Actually, I got a few ideas that's been bugging me.  I hate writers block.  I'm also glad ghat we have crossed paths.  Your insight made me smile and I thank ya kindly.  That comic is simple and funny.  :)



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Re: The Invisible Man
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2013, 06:32:16 PM »
I agree with BB, it was nice with a tinge of sadness.  Were you listening to a certain song when you wrote this?



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« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2013, 01:15:29 AM »
I agree with BB, it was nice with a tinge of sadness.  Were you listening to a certain song when you wrote this?
I was listening to a certain song.  You know where to look.   :) O0



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« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2013, 09:51:01 AM »
I was listening to a certain song.  You know where to look.   :) O0

I see.  That one is sad.  It's odd but I've never heard of it before.   Thanks for sharing.    ;)



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« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2013, 01:53:49 PM »
I see.  That one is sad.  It's odd but I've never heard of it before.   Thanks for sharing.    ;)
You never heard of it before.  Wow.  I thought for sure you did.  Thanks for reading.  :)



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« Reply #7 on: October 12, 2013, 07:23:22 PM »
You never heard of it before.  Wow.  I thought for sure you did.  Thanks for reading.  :)

I know, I was surprised myself.   ;D    :D    :P



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« Reply #8 on: October 12, 2013, 08:14:29 PM »
I know, I was surprised myself.   ;D    :D    :P
There's another song I like too.  I'm going to write my version as well. 



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« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2013, 05:56:39 PM »
There's another song I like too.  I'm going to write my version as well. 

I'm assuming you'll be posting that song also...   ^-^    :P



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« Reply #10 on: October 13, 2013, 07:06:22 PM »
I'm assuming you'll be posting that song also...   ^-^    :P
You know me so well.  :toothy12: 



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Re: The Invisible Man
« Reply #11 on: October 14, 2013, 09:00:00 AM »
You know me so well.  :toothy12: 

Or maybe because you're predictable.  Hehehe.   :D    :P



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« Reply #12 on: October 14, 2013, 01:26:54 PM »
Or maybe because you're predictable.  Hehehe.   :D    :P
No, I told you before and recently.   :P



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