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A PH Valentine
« on: February 10, 2014, 05:27:02 PM »
For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter

What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour

Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract

So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory




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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2014, 06:28:53 PM »
It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom.   :-\

Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... ..   ???    ^-^



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2014, 06:33:20 PM »
It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom.   :-\

Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... ..   ???    ^-^

I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.

We can to a happy piece together.  Your call.  O0 :)



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2014, 04:45:59 AM »
What a beautiful poem. :)

Thank ya generously ma'am.



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2014, 07:29:53 AM »
For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter

What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour

Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract

So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory



 
Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.

But a nice piece indeed.



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2014, 10:04:16 AM »

 
Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.

But a nice piece indeed.

I hear you PL. I appreciate your insight.   O0



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2014, 03:31:49 PM »
I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.

We can to a happy piece together.  Your call.  O0 :)

Was that a clue?  Hehehe.    :D

Sure.  That's fine.   ;D



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2014, 03:39:48 PM »
Was that a clue?  Hehehe.    :D

Sure.  That's fine.   ;D
That was not a clue.  I told you already.  O0



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2014, 06:09:58 PM »
I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym  :-*



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2014, 06:17:08 PM »
I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym  :-*
A date with the gym.  Me too.  O0



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #10 on: February 12, 2014, 07:47:39 PM »
That was not a clue.  I told you already.  O0

I know.  I was just joking.   :2funny:    :P



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #11 on: February 13, 2014, 11:40:35 AM »
I know.  I was just joking.   :2funny:    :P

You hurt my feelings again. :'(  Why I ought to :knuppel2:



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #12 on: February 13, 2014, 11:50:12 AM »
+1.  Very nice, Json!  If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her.  But I really like your poem.  So much emotions flow from it.  I love it. 



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #13 on: February 13, 2014, 11:55:12 AM »
+1.  Very nice, Json!  If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her.  But I really like your poem.  So much emotions flow from it.  I love it.

Thanks Lilly.  Maybe one day I'll ask but I'm kinda sure of the answer already from the non verbals.  O0



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Re: A PH Valentine
« Reply #14 on: February 13, 2014, 07:33:19 PM »
Json, you can ask through me again.  ;D :D

What are you implying and what do you mean "again"?  Why I ought to :knuppel2: ;)



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