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FarewellMyConcubine

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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #30 on: July 16, 2014, 03:28:42 PM »
Your passage are like two love birds following each other. Singing to each other's ear.
I wrote the poem in responses to your journal tainted memories. 

I like your words, they are like the movie "you got mail" stating tom hank.

Thanks for your response.  It was beautiful.



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #31 on: July 18, 2014, 02:12:50 PM »
Remember me.




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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #32 on: July 18, 2014, 11:48:07 PM »
Very beautiful ST.

I will remember you.



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #33 on: July 21, 2014, 04:45:07 PM »
Letting go



Part 2 coming





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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #34 on: July 22, 2014, 01:03:20 AM »
Part 2



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #37 on: November 08, 2014, 08:01:16 PM »
"If I don't get to meet you"


I know you probably don't want to meet me
Thinking its a dream; nothing can arise from this
Broken chances and loss words
Doesn't hurt to hug and say hi
Look closely from the side to see your face
Softly whispering in the unseen wind

Maybe you'll give m a chance
A possibility for a date
Make the stars glow, make magic dust fall
Light the darkness with our happiness

But maybe it's all in my head
 I know it's not real, just thoughts
What ifs, and what could of only

If I don't get I meet you
I'll hope, growing old
To wonder what could have been
Once in a while, stopping by from a distance
Staring at a gem, thinking of that decision

I won't regret not seeing you though
If it never happens then it's our fate
No more hurtful words drowning
No more misery thoughts of a fantasy

If we don't meet, it's already decided

What happens is destiny at your hands
I won't give it no more meaning
You'll be the gal I've never met
Make me smile when thinking of someone like you
A girl with a beautiful smile and nice firm lips
And nothing more to follow

If we don't meet then I wish you the best
It's ill-fated, not to believe, but it's predestined not to meet
A good chance for a Ber, but need occurring
Maybe it was better this way
Letting these opportunities go wasted
Just to miss the moment in the future when the words
"What could have been" "what ifs"




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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #38 on: November 08, 2014, 08:10:31 PM »
"Distance"


When I heard you had another
My heart rots, knowing your gone
Reality hits, knowing its real

No matter how I feel
Distance kept us apart
I havent had the time to show you love
Show you my all, the real me
Telling you this is for real

If only you knew distance is temporaly
It's was just the beginning
If I call more or came out more
This feeling wouldn't be so lonely
So sorry

Feeling so bad to see you go
I didn't mean to
Hurts to see you go
Not giving you my time
If only you knew my real intentions



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #39 on: November 08, 2014, 08:34:35 PM »
"When she come"


Across the country, we met in the night
The breeze was chili, filled the air with a cold sensation
It was so soon, gone like yesterday
Time was meaningful to me, not wasting every second
Little time, but build a everlasting impression

When you come, the feeling will be back
The mojo of excitement to feel and touch
Once in a lifetime, a place to filled the mind with good memories
Adding this part to your chapter
Giving the climax what it was supposed to be
A taste of fantasy

We'll watch the birds go and come in pairs
The school of fishes not wanting to separate
Witnessing intimacy of lovely white doves
The places of mystery and excitement
Where we could feel the rising air in our belly and stare at each other
Sigh and eyes glazing; knowing you're the loveliest

Nothing will compare to your smile, beautiful to my eyes
Your laugh still sweet serenading as the first time I heard speak
You won't know it but I get the butterflies and the jitters
There's no word for this feeling out of the blue

This precious movement,
We'll go where the end of the world takes us
The Golden Gate Bridge to the city of angels
The river blue mansion Monticello
A  look at natures peak
Where hearts can move mountains a single beat
The desire will grow tall as the redwood trees

I'll show you all; a moment to remember
A thrill of wow
Not letting a wasted second go by
It would feel like imagining riding the rainbow
Reaching far and wide
As high as the clouds and deep as our eyes could see
This moment will be worth it




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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #40 on: November 08, 2014, 08:39:21 PM »
Beautiful. Your words they echo a past time.


Thanks.

It is these thoughts that make us human.  To love, to be sad, to cherish and treasure, to forget, to wonder, to believe and to feel the touch of love.

How is the wind on your side of the world?



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #41 on: November 11, 2014, 09:49:48 PM »
I'm doing well. Thanks for asking. I hope you have found what it is that you are searching for. Sometimes, a journey can take us further away from our dreams. ;)

Sometimes I feel like a ghost wandering from one place to the next. Maybe I'm journeying to somewhere within my control or into the unseenable. All there is left is a piece of youth left from the last ending.

I can't say for certain if I'm straying away, but these days, my heart aches no more.

When the birds sing, there is no loneliness. When the wind blows, there's no shiver down my spine.
These days when love songs come on, I don't remember what it was like to be in love.
 I never gave any thought of the bird that left a long time ago.
Thesee days I'm blessed, having the chance to venture into the world while youth still reside inside me.
If you ever asked me, I would say tell the beautiful lady thanks for giving me a chance at life again.

How are you? Once in a while over the rainbow, I wondered how everyone one of us will end our journey?






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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #42 on: November 18, 2014, 11:31:33 AM »
It's that time of the year
the leaves changed colors
the ground filled with snow
Animals are hiding in their burrows
Birds are flocking  down South
but there's no where for me to go

it's that time again,the air got cooler
the mountains looked like last year again
I am still here
dreaming of us when love was still magical
thinking of those times when you we're in my arms
reaching out my hands to feel your tender touch

It may be years before we see each other
but some nights I dreamed that we're together
meeting in our sleep; looking into your eyes
I had vision that before the end of our time
at the least see you from a far

it's that time again
maybe you're in a place where warmth surrounds the atmosphere
maybe your heart is in a better place
tonight I missed those nights when our words are exchanged
I missed those sweet words of yours
if we faith allow us to meet, it would be great even for a brief moment
if not, there won't be any regret
due to life circumstances, I'll be Happy to have met someone like you
All I would want is for you to be Happy
Maybe it is better if we watch from the distance

 Every year became the last,
The seasons come and go
the mountains and valleys are improvising
I hope the friendship we had will remain something better than just words
just know there was a person whom you have never met
think of he possibilities and smile that it could have been an adventure
if time concludes, the youth was still there
then timing would have been everything
just remember the words are true,the hidden feelings are all on displayed

In time, we will stumble and our eyes will crossed
even if I didn't know it was you
just know it was more than message in a bottle

its that time again
I wish you the best in your life
wish that the love you had will burn bright againt
he winter won't be like the last, but better
When  close your eyes, you'll be Happy to open them again
 I hope the sun will be bright in your world
Hope he aprreciates what he hadand think of when love was magical


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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #43 on: December 22, 2014, 02:53:23 AM »


You came and left like the white crystal snow
Your appearance only brought in the cold wind that blow
Not even staying for a simple "Hello"
Leaving a trace that I can't even follow

Shining through like a beautiful rainbow
That leave only a memory like no other
But never returning tomorrow
Leaving one's heart in sorrow

Every now and then
Like the spring changing to winter
Leaving out summer

I came like the white snow
Disappear like a ghost
Without a word winter is gone
A new spring emerge

A new leaf sprouts,
I'll be back without a doubt
When the time comes
Wait for me
I'll be back like the breeze




 



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Re: Somewhere over the rainbow
« Reply #44 on: December 22, 2014, 03:08:19 AM »
Maybe once in a blue mood
I'll get a call from someone like you
The wind already change my direction
Hoping for the best

When you look to the east, the house is still there
The old fire still burns for one day to hear your voice
To reminisce the long waited friendship
The old familiar words

Maybe before the wind never comes again
She'll emerge at the end of the last breeze
Before land becomes a desert
Even before the frozen tundra

To have heard you
I'll know
A voice with a face
remembering the amazing grace

I'll wait, never moving
Hope she finds me
Saying a good "Hello"

I'll wait for that day
To hear a friends voice
Life is too short
Live to have known then to have not known

All i can do is hope one day, to come back and read
To live again in time
To laugh and cry
Wondering in this mind

Maybe if there was a day when you feel the leap of faith
I would love to hear you before the last light burns out...



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