Revelation

[J-a-s-o-n]

That's a nice and sad poem, Json.  Hopefully you don't really feel that way.

I do feel that way, honest.  How am I suppose to feel.  The evidence is there. 

[tRouBLe]

I do feel that way, honest.  How am I suppose to feel.  The evidence is there. 

You could always discuss it with the person.  At times, action may speak louder than words BUT other times, words need to be spoken.

[J-a-s-o-n]

sounds all too dejavu. sorry to hear json. people should just be honest with their feelings and not be afraid to hurt someone.

Right.  How hard is telling the truth?   

[J-a-s-o-n]

I would discuss it with the other person but all forms of communication were cut.  No msg and no number.  So how am I suppose to speak
to that person.   

You could always discuss it with the person.  At times, action may speak louder than words BUT other times, words need to be spoken.

[J-a-s-o-n]

I understand what you're saying.  Closure would be nice though.  Maybe one day that person will contact me in the future and say "goodbye". 

Json, if someone doesn't know your worth than it's just too bad. Don't waste your time chasing or waiting on hopes/dreams. The way I see it is if someone was interested in me. I don't have to put in that much efforts. It will be a mutual thing.

[J-a-s-o-n]

I'm not counting on it.  Its been awhile since I heard from that person. 

Yes, I understand the feeling of not knowing what happened or what went wrong between a relationship or a friendship. I do hope that person will find the courage to at least let you know.

[tRouBLe]

I would discuss it with the other person but all forms of communication were cut.  No msg and no number.  So how am I suppose to speak
to that person.   

If on an online forum, then pm? 

[J-a-s-o-n]

If on an online forum, why pm when its disabled?  What if the attempt has been done in the past?   What then? 

If on an online forum, then pm? 

[J-a-s-o-n]

Even though we are separated by miles
We share the same smiles
I know you're close to me
As if we're cheek to cheek

The days have gone and became the past
I hold on to the memories with a firm grasp
I've weathered the four seasons
And have yet to be given a reason

I cast off my pride
Showed you a different side
Bare and naked
Beaten and blooded

When I start to fade from your memory
What's the one thing you'll remember about me
Maybe you've forgotten already
Remembering you, it came naturally

 

[tRouBLe]

Nice poem.  Is this a revelation piece or just reminiscing... ....or maybe even neither.   

[J-a-s-o-n]

Well, it is in Revelation and involves the past.  If its neither then what is it? 

Besides, you need to catch up.  You're two poems behind.  Can't keep up with me?  .  Too slow, vaub kib. 

Nice poem.  Is this a revelation piece or just reminiscing... ....or maybe even neither.   

[tRouBLe]

Neither can mean just "an idea" that you decided to write about.   

What's wrong with a vaub kib?  They can be cute and it did win the rabbit.      

[J-a-s-o-n]

Maybe its all three or one more 

They're slow and not cute.  It won because the rabbit let it win.  It was being nice. 

Neither can mean just "an idea" that you decided to write about.   

What's wrong with a vaub kib?  They can be cute and it did win the rabbit.      

[tRouBLe]

One more?  Hmmmmmm.

They can be fast and cute.........i f we draw/make them that way.   

[J-a-s-o-n]

There are 4 stanzas. 

Or they are slow and ugly because they are.