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Into The Darkness
« on: June 02, 2015, 01:07:49 PM »
... to be continue



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2015, 01:33:08 PM »
You were so beautiful, I thought I could never have you
Then you came along and planted a seed in my heart
That seed grew into a precious petal rose
I knew I had fallen for you because I giggle_shyly
Whenever you're around
Your missterious character, I fell for
The man I never knew could be a VillainousHero
You told me that you were a ProudLao, I knew you're a minorcharacter
You weren't so innocent when you told me of your festishdream(s)
The stories you've told me, you must have been theking
From inanotherlife time
I knew we were unmatchable but I gave you a chance
Only to find out that you're just a malestranger
Believe_N_Me when I tell you that I still care about you
And that I'll always be yoursunrise4ever
Even if what we had was sumtingwong
Yet you disappeared into the darksyde
My dark angel, why did you lie?



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2015, 01:34:33 PM »
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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #3 on: June 02, 2015, 01:38:14 PM »
WOW, very creative indeed! O0



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #4 on: June 02, 2015, 01:40:01 PM »
Interesting piece yet creative.  Nice.   :)



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #5 on: June 02, 2015, 01:44:19 PM »
Thanks ladies. And DatJuanGuy, I was going to include you too but I don't know how a mexican guy will fit into my story. LOL



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2015, 09:17:22 PM »
There's so much chaos in my head
So I decided to write instead
For it gives me a peace of mind
Rightnow I'm not too kind
With my words nor my actions
All it does is gives me distractions
I rather not think or speak
Because it will show that I'm weak
Someday I will write why I'm in the dark
And I'll leave my mark
For you to find
Only then you'll understand my mind



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #7 on: June 02, 2015, 10:02:19 PM »
 O0



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #8 on: June 02, 2015, 10:03:05 PM »
Thank you, my love.



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2015, 08:40:18 AM »
I agree with your poem.  Sometimes it's easier to express ourselves through our writing and it relieves some of the tension we may get from our experiences or life, in general, if we don't want to talk about it.   :)



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2015, 03:36:47 PM »
I don't know if I met you this lifetime or the last
Even in the present I still remembered the past
I can still feel you in my dreams
It takes me into another realm
I guess when two hearts fought for love that lost
Your path is bound to crossed
That's what happened between you and me
We were just too blinded to see
Fate brought us together only to depart
But I'll always carry you in my heart



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #11 on: June 03, 2015, 07:36:09 PM »
If I knew:

If I knew today would be our last day
I would have asked you to stay
If I knew today would be our last words
I would have put my words out there to be heard
If I knew today we would shared our last laugther
I wouldn't push you so much for an answer
If I knew today you would tell me your last joke
I would protect my heart from being broke
If I knew today would be the last time you write
I wouldn't put up such a fight
If I knew today you would say good-bye
I would have let you hear my last cry
If I knew today would be the end
I would have only kept you as a friend
Then today, I would still have you...


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6m7JpQ-1o-4



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2015, 11:53:57 PM »
In the dark, you sat
Waiting for an Angel
Searching for your soul
A soul you've already sold
Clouded mind, you're lost
Feels like the world is closing in
You prayed just for another day
If only God grant your wish
The night went silent
Not a single cricket sing
You looked up to the moon
The sky is overshadowed by darkness
There's not a single star twinkle in sight
You are all alone in your own demise world
Then an Angel heard your cry
Felt your lonely and empty heart
She pulled you from the darkness
Gave you the sun and the moon
Painted the night sky with stars
Granted your wish for another day

Then the day came when you no longer needed her
Casted your Angel aside
Wished for her disappearance
Sadly she became the Dark Angel
Dwelling back into the darkness
Where she will remain for eternity



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #13 on: June 04, 2015, 09:07:35 AM »
Nice and emotional pieces.  I enjoyed reading them.   O0



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #14 on: June 04, 2015, 09:11:23 AM »
Thank you tRouble. I've always enjoyed reading yours too. Just the fact that you have not put any up for so long.  :-[



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