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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #240 on: August 05, 2015, 03:47:40 AM »
I wasn't good either when I started writing.  I'm sure you will get better because you're already so good.


SweetHoney tus mi neeg ntxim hlub
Yog kuv ua tau li lub siab xav ces kuv yuav ua koj lub hnubqub
Ntawm txoj kev hlub yeej muaj rau koj tiag
Tabsis vim twb muaj lwm tus pw hauv kuv xubtiag
Tus neeg ntawd tuav kuv ruaj npaum zia
Tsuas yog nws tsis txawj hlub es kuv ho tsis txawj qhia
Thiaj kho siab ua luaj no
Seev npaum cas los zoo li tus dej ntshiab tsis yeej qhov nro
Yog lam tau tus neeg qabzib li koj los ua kuv tug
Ntshe yuav nco nco nruab hnub hmo ntuj tsis xav nrug
Tes khi taw khi lawm ces yuav ua ib siab
Txawm tias yuav niaj hnub nyob nrog lub kua muag iab
Neeg ib lub siab ces yuav ua tsis taus siab phem
Tiamsis tau nrog tus neeg muaj kev hlub li koj tham ces ua rau kuv tsis meej pem
Xav tas los xav thiab tias kom koj yog kuv tus hlub tiag
Tus npau suav no ntshe yuav ua rau kuv quaj nco koj xyov yuav txog thaum twg mam ntsiag



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #241 on: August 05, 2015, 07:30:56 AM »
Yog tias tiam no wb ua nkauj muam nraug nus
Lwm tiam koj tau los ua kuv tus
Kuv mam khaws nkaus koj cov lus zoo
Puag pw thiab ntsaws rau hauv qab hauvncoo
Nco ntsoov tsis pub ploj
Txog ntua rau lub hauv toj
Tias kuv mi SweetHoney qabzib
Lub siab yog hav kab tsib
Nws tau hais dabtsi lawm
Yeej yuav ua kom tawm
Lwm tiam kuv yuav tos ntsoov
Seb thaum twg nws yug los rau kuv txoj hmoov
Yuav qawm lias nws puag rau xubntiag
Qhia rau nws tias " tiam tag los wb kev sib hlub muaj tiag"
" Tiam no tau koj lawm seb lub suab quaj puas yuav ntsiag "




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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #242 on: August 05, 2015, 07:47:01 AM »
Bravo.. It took me a whole hour just to read the hmong words.. .Oh, I love it!! Thanks!  O0 :smitten:



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #243 on: August 05, 2015, 10:52:16 AM »
Sorry tijlaug  cwjmemdub,  kuv tsi keej sau poem li koj nawb.
Koj nyuam qhuav pib sau xwb es koj twb sau tau zoo npaum no
Yog tias koj sau ntev mus koj hajyam yuav ua rau kuv siab kho.


Kuv mi leej muam zoo lus
Cov lus koj hais no tsis yog lus nkauj muam nraug nus
Koj tej lus koj muab hais pub
Yog lus rau cov nkauj cov nraug sib sib hlub

Lo lus lwm tiam ces lam muab hais deev siab kom txhob lwj
Kom lub plawv txhob ua aws ua rwj
Qhov zoo tshaj ces cia wb sib hlub rau tiam no
Wb tau ua txij ua nkawm li luag lwm tus thiaj yuav tsim wb txoj kev sib nco

Tiamsis yog muaj lwm tiam tiag
Txhua txhua tiam tom ntej kuv yuav thov yug los pw hauv koj lub xubntiag
Mloog koj lub plawv dhia wb txoj kev sib hlub
Kom tsim nyog wb rov los sib nrhiav los ua khub

Txawm tias koj yuav tuav kuv ruaj npaum zia
Kuv txaus siab nrog koj nyob mus ib txhis kom tag kuv txoj sia
Ncaim mus ua dab ua tsov lawm los
Tseem yuav mus ncig toj roob hauv pes tos

Vim yuav hlub tsis taus leej twg ntxiv lawm
Thiab yuav khaws lub zoo sij hawm
Rov rau kuv mi muam qabzib ib leeg
Nov yuav yog txhua tiam ntawm wb txoj dabneeg




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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #244 on: August 05, 2015, 11:51:46 AM »
Koj yog luag tus
Kuv yog luag li
Lub siab ua kaus ntsus
Lub plawv quaj dhi

Yog tsis sib tau tiam no
Lwm tiam los ntshe Tswvntuj yuav tsis pub
Kom kuv tau los nyo
Rau koj lub xubntiag hlub

Cia tsis txhob sib pom yuav zoo dua
Vim pom tag ntshe lub siab yuav uv tsis taus
Kuv txawm tsis zoo li nraug Mab nraug Sua
Los yeej zoo li tus mi nraug Hmoob phim nrog koj kwv ib lub kaus

Cwjmem tsis muaj duab nyob social media
Pebhmong tsis pub tso cov nyob personal pc
Thiaj tsis tau tshawb cia
Los rau SweetHoney tau pom thiab nco kom tag ib txhis



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #245 on: August 05, 2015, 05:34:15 PM »

Kuv mi SweetHoney
Cas koj yuav hais tau lus tu siab ua luaj
Kuv xav pom koj happy
Tsis xav pom koj quaj
Kuv tsis xav muab kuv duab mus tso rau social media
Txawm koj pom los koj yuav tsis ntseeg xav tias yog tso ntxias
Ntshe yuav tau kom PebHmong pub upload directly from personal pc
Muaj neeg xav pom cia li attache rau pc ris
Tib pliag xwb koj yeej pom lawm
Saib tag mam muab rho tawm
Ces twb zoo li wb sib ntsib lawm tiag
Tiamsis thov tsis txhob nyiag
Muab coj mus tso rau lwm qhov
Rau lwm tus pom ua kev kub ntxhov
Vim hom neeg tsis easy
Yog muaj teebmeem ces lub siab yuav khis
Ua li koj tso koj li pub kuv saib puas tau
Kom kuv khuvxim koj thiab raug koj hau
Kuv nyiam ua neeg nyob nrog kev kho siab
Yog koj kam no xav rau kuv koj tus ntxhiab thiab





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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #246 on: August 05, 2015, 06:14:12 PM »
Sorry for hijacking your thread, dear Sweet Angel.    ;)



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #247 on: August 05, 2015, 06:39:21 PM »
Sorry for hijacking your thread, dear Sweet Angel.    ;)

I don't mind it at all.. Use it.. I don't even post in this thread anymore. LOL



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #248 on: August 05, 2015, 07:25:53 PM »
If I was to give a little more
If I was to not show so much
What if I was to hide a little bit
What if I didn't demand so much of your time
Would this bring you back?

If I was to show you only strength
And hide all my weakness
If I was to console you and forget about myself
Even if I was also dying inside
Would this make you see?

If I was to pretend that I am fine
If I was to mend your broken heart
What if I was to give you the stars
Have the ability to make you forget
Would you see that my love is true?

If I was able to bring you out of the darkness
Give you the light to see
If I gave you my broken wings
What if you were able to fly out of here
Would you fly back into my heart?


Forever you flew out of this darkness...


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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #249 on: August 05, 2015, 09:42:48 PM »
SweetHoney

Txhob tu siab mog mi leej muam ntsuag nos
Leej twg lub neej los yeej tsis sib dhos
Kev ua si laug hnub laug hmo tsis yog kev plhom moj
Nws yog kev lam hlwb lam cua kom txhob dhuav txoj kev khwv noj
Kev hlub kuv yeej muab tau rau koj kawg
Muaj muam coob zoo dua qhov muaj tsawg
Kuv mam txais koj los ua kuv tus mi muam ntxawm
Vim txoj kev hlub twb muaj rau koj lawm
Yog hnub twg kuv mi muam kho siab
Xa xov rau nws mi nus es mam so nws lub kua muag iab
Yuav tsis pub nws raug thuam los raug tsim txom
Yuav tiv thaiv nws ntawm luag lub ntsis ntaj ntsis phom
Yuav raug mob raug ntsaj cia rau tijlaug ib leeg
Tijlaug mam ris koj tej hmoov phem thaiv kom txhob zeeg
Kuv mi muam thiaj tau noj qab haus huv
Nyob ua lub neej nplua nuj muaj qoob loo muaj tsiaj muaj txhuv mog



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #250 on: August 06, 2015, 09:14:14 AM »
No matter where I go.. I keep coming back to this place. In here I feel safe. No pain can penentrate my heart...

Darkness falls over me
So dark I can't see
No stars in the sky
No one can hear me cry
Lost forever in this darkness
Nothing but blackness
In here is where I belong
It will prevent me to do any wrong
The stars has faded from my eyes
It's time to say good-bye...



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #251 on: August 06, 2015, 12:11:04 PM »
Tijlaug, while I was driving to work, I was thinking of a poem to write  for you about my parents and I was crying and couldn’t’ see the road clearly  LOL

Kuv tus me nus cwjmemdub tus zoo lus
Koj puas paub thaum yus niam yus  txiv tuag tag tsi muaj tus hlub
Kuv txiv yogi b tug coj plaub hais ntug nws lub tsev kwvtij neej tsa niaj hnub tuaj tsuj
Thaum nws tuag tag nws lub tsev nyob txias to tsi muaj tus tuaj txog
Yus tej neej tsa hu yus mus noj ib pluag los yus tsi nrog luag muaj lub ntsej muag luag
Vim tias thaum twg yus pom yus txiv tej neeg  ua rau yus lub siab quaj 
Kuv tej neej tsa hlubhlub kuv kawg yog kuv hais ces kojyeejpaub lawv
Tim sis cia wb sib paub li no xwb thiaj tsi sib ncawg
Ua tsaug koj tseem lees kuv ua koj me muam ntxawm
Txawm wb tsi sib paub los kuv zoo zoo siab tsi paub kawg
Thaum twg koj me muam ntxawm muaj kev nyuaj siab mam nco ntsoov qhia kuv me nus ntxawg Cwjmemdub tus zoo zoo lus

Sweethoney  hlub nws me nus cwjmemdub  os.

Kuv mi muam ntxawm tus mi siab zoo
Txoj kev ua ntsuag yeej tsis yoojyim
Tsis muaj niam muaj txiv ces zej zog yeej nroo
Ntshai tsam yus thov luag noj luag haus mus ib sim

Koj txiv ncaim lawm
Koj tseem ho tsis yog ib leeg tub
Thiaj tsis muaj neeg xav cawm
vim luag tej niam tsev ntxub

Ntshai tsam koj mus
Thab luag tej txiv
Tej nyab tej nus
Muab tsis tau lub ntsej muag tiv

Luag thiaj li saib
Koj tsis rau nqi
Cia koj mus ua dab ua tsov luag tu npua tu qaib
Niaj hnub niaj hmo quaj pos muag nti

Li cas los
Koj twb ntsib koj mi nus lawm
Nws yeej zoo siab txais tos
Koj txhua lub sijhawm

Yog koj tsis muaj kev
Nyuab siab ntxhov plawv
Rau rau siab taug kev
Txhob quav dej quav cawv

Ua lub neej
Kom xws luag
Thiaj tsis muaj neeg pheej
Saib tsis taus ntsuag

Yog koj ho
Nyuab siab ntxhov plawv
Tus mi nus koj nco
Mam tuaj tuav koj tes rawv

Rub koj mus
Rau lub neej kaj
Kom koj siab tus
Txhob mob txhob ntsaj

Nco ntsoov
Koj mi nus hlub koj heev
Txawm tsis yog wb hmoov
Los koj mi nus yuav tsis pub koj seev



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #252 on: August 06, 2015, 04:04:00 PM »
I spread my wings and fly to heaven
It is my time to leave this world
No longer bounded by earth
Where I'm going it's beautiful
No more suffering and pain

My broken one, good-bye
Someday I will search for you again
I will come back to you
I may not be the one you've searched for
But you've been the one for me

Somewhere in time I know we will meet
This is not our time
Our love was doom from day one
It was not meant to be
I'm sorry for hurting you...


Forget about me..



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #253 on: September 05, 2015, 06:23:30 PM »
In the darkness I hide
I buried your face
I buried the memories
Forever in the darkness it remain..



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Re: Into The Darkness
« Reply #254 on: September 05, 2015, 06:41:59 PM »
I felt a moment of happiness
I felt love for a moment
I felt a moment of tranquility
Then that moment slipped away
And I'm back in the darkness

You see my smile
You hear my laughs
They are just for show and tell
Deep inside, I'm already dead



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