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r3b1rth

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Freestyle Feels
« on: June 30, 2016, 08:38:23 AM »
I'm creating this thread to help me freestyle off the top of my heaFd without much editing--only important things and only special effects :P. (SPELLING). I'll try not to anyway. That means there will be a lot of mistakes and things that don't make sense :P Whatever. Lol. Feel free to contribute. All I ask is to be respectful of each other. Thanks!

Where do I start?,

First off there's too many thing to say,
Too many mixed emotions,
Mostly anger and love,

Ultimately I want you to accept me,
But right now your pissing me off,
By the way you're handling this situation,

I want to say that I don't care,
I want to say that you 'ain't' shit,
But those are all lies,
Anything I say that's a negative,
Is the negative image get it?

There's no need to convince you,
What kind of person I am,
You should already know!

Unfortunately that skull of yours is too thick to let any kind of words pass through,
Look in the mirror,
You look like a fool,
Spare me the ignorance,
I might be fcking pissed,
I might be fcking angry,
But damn, I'm human too.

Okay... hahah that was my first. What do you think ? Round 2?



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Re: Freestyle Feels
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2016, 02:35:37 PM »
Definitely feels like some real raw emotions involved.









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Re: Freestyle Feels
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2016, 01:00:48 PM »
I was listening to eminem and tupac, lol. And the anger at a friend fueled it so it was great inspiration. Round 2:

My frieND... I used To,
But seriously,
Do you think I'm going to--miss yoU?

When you open your loud dirty mouth,
Spitting sentences instigating,
Airing your dirty laundry like you hate me.

You act like you don't know-
when your arm brushes up against your foe,
Like it was an accident--
I'll murder you with your mouth open,
Look me in the eyes when you meet me,
If you're going to greet me,
Bow down 90 degree and do it properly

You began a silent showdown,
Now I'm going to end it with a roundhouse,
Quite a shame that it came down to this,
There ain't no other way around it.
If someone's going down,
I'mma crucify the clown.


Got distracted I can't finish, lol, until next time. I don't really hate my frienemy... I'm just using the raw emotion for inspiration. I'm sure we'll be friends again another time another place another life lol.



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