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Tseem Nco
« on: December 19, 2019, 04:27:43 PM »
ntseem nco txog wb yav thaum ub
Nyob rau lub vaj loog hu ua NplaimHlub
Nco txog kuv tus mi Nkauj Hmoob thaum i
Uas nws muaj lub npe hu ua SiabQuajDlhi

Yog koj ncig txog lub teb chaws no
thov kom koj xav tias kuv nco koj txhua hmo
Nco thaum wb taug kev uake luag ntxhi
uas yog koj kuv wb li yav thaum i

kuv niaj hnub saib koj li duab
nco txog koj ibleeg tus mi tibneeg kuv tshua
Koj khiav kuv lawm ntev
los kuv tseem tos txog hnub koj ua kuv sev



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Re: Tseem Nco
« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2019, 08:29:52 PM »
I don't get the girls because I don't know how to write such romantic verses like that.

I know they capture women's hearts. But I'm not comfortable and not skilled in writing them.


« Last Edit: December 22, 2019, 10:39:58 PM by Reporter »

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