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Offline Griffith

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The long journey
« on: July 24, 2021, 07:49:46 AM »
It's not what we thought when we first began
We both started as a friend
All those roads that we bend
In marriage I once held your hand
Every journey has an end
When one can not stand

Sure when you're in love
It feels like turtle dove
No one can break our bond
When we both are having fun
But all those can still be un done

Every chance we got
We enjoyed every flock
The voices we moan
As we started having kids of our own
Then they all wanted to have their own phone

Life was great
Better then our first date
Remembered when we bought our first house
That same night I removed your blouse
From every room
We played the game of doom
And now we have so much hate
For twenty-five years you were my soul mate

If I were to write it all in here
I don't think I can bare
To have anyone other then you to hold my beer
And people don't want to hear

I am happy that I've met you
But our love has been feeling blue
Every day
The love we can not save

Someday I will see this old poems
In a new home
As we close this chapter in our lives
We both can now see with our own eyes

A new journey awaits us
I'm glad that you stopped by
I must now say my goodbye

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Offline Dok_Champa

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Re: The long journey
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2021, 01:05:15 PM »
Very nice.  It seems like you have been with this person for a long time, is there a chance for reconciliation?  Sometimes we focus so much on the small thing we forget the big thing - LOVE.  If you love her and she loves you, forgive each other's mistake and start anew.  I can tell you that the grass is not greener on the other side.  Different people different problem and on top of that, that person may not love you as much as the one that you let go.  You have a lot to gain.

Wish you happy journey.

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But true love is a durable fire, In the mind ever burning, Never sick, never old, never dead, From itself never turning.<br />               --Sir Walter Raleigh

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Re: The long journey
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2021, 12:58:17 PM »
Nice piece.

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