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Creative Corner => Creative Writing => Topic started by: Pineapple on November 04, 2010, 01:36:47 PM
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Once upon a time, long before who knows when, there lived a man named Darkplanetasia . He was a skillful artist whom the PH villagers admire. Everyone was always so fascinated about his drawings and character. He was always so cheerful and dandy.
One day during the late afternoon, while he was walking down the PH forest, he stumbled upon a small creek. This creek was never been seen before. Darkplanetasia was quite surprised and yet afraid for he had walked through PH forest for since he was able to walk and yet never stumbled upon this very creek before.
Very excited about his new found creek, he dropped his bag from his back. Took out his drawing pad and pencil. Sat down on the ground and sketched out what his eyes was able to see. He was such a skillful artist, he did not need to look at his sketch for whatever he sketched would come out exactly looking the same as what his eyes see.
He did not care to look at what he completely had drawn. Before he knew, it was dark. He packed his belongings and ran home to sleep in hopes that he can cath the sunrise tomorrow at the same place where he found the creek.
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Darkplanetasia woke the next morning, before the sun rose up. The way he did this, was not by alarm clock, since they did not have alarm clock in that era. He had to drink 10 cups of water before he went to sleep, so he can wake up every so often to use the restroom. As Darkplanetasia woke, First thing he did was run straight out the door and to the nearest tree to take a nice long leak. He ran back inside, pack his drawing board and drawing equipment into his bag. Headed right out the door and started to hurry towards the the place where he saw the creek. As He walk toward the creek, he started realizing that the sun was coming up soon, so he ran towards the creek. Right when the sun rose, was when he got to the creek, So he took out his drawing equipment and board and started drawing the sun coming up from where the creek had, seem to start from the Distant. The more he drew the more he realized that the creek had gottan bigger. so he finish drawing the Creek with the beautiful sunrise and Compared this drawing with the one he had made the day before.
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Darkplanetasia was so happy he had completed the his drawing. As he took out the other piece from last night to compare, he was so amazed at his artistic skills.
Then something caught his eyes. In the drawing from last evening, there was a beautiful womanly human figure in the background but kind of a blur. He didn't recall seeing anything like that from last night. Darkplanetasia closed his eyes tightly trying to remember what exactly he saw. There was no form or shape of any spieces. Nothing.
He opened his eyes and glimpsed over to the drawing he just did with the sunrise. There was no creature but the creek flowing along the trees. As his eyes followed the creek in his drawing through the trail of forest, he found himself staring at the rays shining through the treetop. He followed the rays down as it touched the tree trump on the side of the creek...he found what he thought some sort of entrance.
Then it hit him hard in the head. He looked up quickly to view the creek where he found the entrance in the drawing but there was nothing. He couldn't believe it. There must have been something. His artistic skills is so awesome, everything he sees and draws looks exactly the same....but why is his drawing not coming out right.
What is it that is not right...he couldn't figure. He was so devastated that he is starting to lose his artistic skills. He went back home to drown himself to sleep so that time would move by faster and he'll be able to wake up during the afternoon in hopes of finding out what could it be that is secretly hidden in the creek of the PH forest that evening.
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DarkplanetAsia reached home and walked into his room and layed down on his bed. He started to drift off and then fell into a Deep sleep. As he layed there sleeping, he had a dream. In his dream was a Woman. The Women wore leaves as clothing, the top was just a few leaves that coverd her chest and the bottom, was mini skirt like dress. In his dream the women was crying out help me and falling down a deep dark hole. She cried out help all the way unitl he couldn't see her anymore. Then the dream change dramatically, with balls of fire falling from the sky and his village was being burn down to the ground with fire and the PH villager running around helplessly. In his dream Darkplanetasia, Ran to the creek to get water to try to kill the fire. As he got to the creek, he saw the same women, he had saw earlier, running towards the creek and straight to the entrance that he had drawn the night before. She open the entrace and crawl through. He ran towards the entrance and open it and he could see her fallling and crying out for help! He started to yell out to the women, but Right at that moment, He woke up and was in cold sweet, breathing heavily.
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Darkplanetasia woke up with a migraine. The right side of his head was throbbing horribly. Yet his determination to find out the mysterious PH forest wasn't over and that migraine was not going to stop his curiousity either. He jumped off his bed, pour water over his face, snatched his bag and hurry out the door.
Upon arrival to the same place he usually goes to, there was a brush of hard wind. It was so windy, Darkplanetasia lost his balance and had to fall to the ground to hold himself. However the wind was too powerful, it blew him off to the side of the road. He couldn't stand anymore, so he slowly crawl himself away into the PH forest to find shelter. He wasn't looking at where he was crawling to but he saw the sparking creek not too far away. He knew that if he followed that creek, he wouldn't get lost, as most river always has a river bank. As he followed the creek he finally found a large giant tree where he held onto tightly so he wouldn't fly away.
Soon after the wind died down a little, Darkplanetasia finally lifted up his head. In front of his eyes there was three trees marked with significant symbols not too far away from where he was. The creek was gone. He had no idea how or where the creek was anymore. He picked himself up quickly and walked over to the four magnificant trees. These trees were huge and different than any other trees surrounding the area.
One of the trees was carved with a rock with some stars glittering down to some spiral looking gene. One of the tree was carved with weird looking eyes and spiky hair growing from the top like a fruit. The last one was the most intriguing one for Darkplanetasia . It was carved with a beautiful white gown flowing as if the wind was blowing by it...and lots of bird-like pigeons twirling around in it like a magical swirl.
Darkplanetasia's eyes was totally locked down on that tree as his feet started walking towards it. He couldn't help but wonder why anyone would carved such beautiful gown to a tree. He couldn't take his eyes off it. As he got closer, he reached out to carass the beauty mark on the tree.
(rockstargenes, the spotlight is on you to introduce our second character...LO L)
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wth guys!!?? hahahahahahaha funny! :idiot2: :2funny:
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As DarkplanetAsia Went to Caress the Beauty mark, he heard a Beautiful voice calling his name. Darkplanetasia .... Darkplanetasia .... he turn around and no one was there. So he Went back to Examine the markings and right when he touch the markings a beatiful woman Suddenly appeard in midair Saying Dark, please help us... Darkplanetasia was soo Shock.. It was the same women From his dream. She Said to him, "my name is Yes.. The pigeon Spirit of this Forest.. These other marking, on the other trees are also Spirits of the forrest. they no longer sparkle for they are weak and the edge of dying. I need your help to save them. Will you Come to the spirit world with me to Save them." Darkplanetasia was speachless.. he couldn't Say a word... So he decide to Run.. he turn around and was about to start running but she was in human form, right infront of him. He couldn't Stop But admire her beauty.... She ask him once again would you help me save them? he didn't know what to say, so he started to say her name Yes and The pigeon Spirit took that as an answer yes to her question and Started to teleport them to the Spirit world.
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wth guys!!?? hahahahahahaha funny! :idiot2: :2funny:
You know your in this story!
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Please continue. You two are quite imaginative writers.
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Please continue. You two are quite imaginative writers.
I suck at writing and story telling.
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As DarkplanetAsia Went to Caress the Beauty mark, he heard a Beautiful voice calling his name. Darkplanetasia .... Darkplanetasia .... he turn around and no one was there. So he Went back to Examine the markings and right when he touch the markings a beatiful woman Suddenly appeard in midair Saying Dark, please help us... Darkplanetasia was soo Shock.. It was the same women From his dream. She Said to him, "my name is Yes.. The pigeon Spirit of this Forest.. These other marking, on the other trees are also Spirits of the forrest. they no longer sparkle for they are weak and the edge of dying. I need your help to save them. Will you Come to the spirit world with me to Save them." Darkplanetasia was speachless.. he couldn't Say a word... So he decide to Run.. he turn around and was about to start running but she was in human form, right infront of him. He couldn't Stop But admire her beauty.... She ask him once again would you help me save them? he didn't know what to say, so he started to say her name Yes and The pigeon Spirit took that as an answer yes to her question and Started to teleport them to the Spirit world.
:2funny: :2funny: you should become a fairytale writer!!! cuuute!
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Yes started flopping her arms like a chicken. Then she put her right foot in, she put her right foot out, she put her right foot in and she shake it all about...she does the Hokey-Pokey and she turn herself around cause that's what it's all about teleporting Darkplanetasia into the PH world of spirit...the world as Darkplanetasia knew had turned upside down and he went blank....
*splash*
Darkplanetasia woke up with water dripping down his face. He looked around and saw an old lady mumbling to herself walking away with a bowl to get more water. He was confused of his whereabouts. The old lady dipped into the small ceramic pot and scooped up some water.
Darkplanetasia got up right away so that the old lady is aware he has woken up. Right when the old lady turned around, Darkplanetasia had his eyes wide open staring straight at her and gave her a fright. She threw the bowl of water hard straight into Darkplanetasia's face. Darkplanetasia tipped over and fell back into the bed. It was hot water and had burned his the side of his face. Yes popped through the entrance door and quickly grabbed a cloth, hurried over to Darkplanetasia's side and wiped his face.
He was overly insecure about his meeting with Yes, he tried to push her over, but when his eyes met hers...time stood still.
*splash* *splash*
"You two, stop being gay and get over here! There are things that needs to be explain and we need to hurry!" cried the old lady.
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Yes started flopping her arms like a chicken. Then she put her right foot in, she put her right foot out, she put her right foot in and she shake it all about...she does the Hokey-Pokey and she turn herself around cause that's what it's all about teleporting Darkplanetasia into the PH world of spirit...the world as Darkplanetasia knew had turned upside down and he went blank....
*splash*
Darkplanetasia woke up with water dripping down his face. He looked around and saw an old lady mumbling to herself walking away with a bowl to get more water. He was confused of his whereabouts. The old lady dipped into the small ceramic pot and scooped up some water.
Darkplanetasia got up right away so that the old lady is aware he has woken up. Right when the old lady turned around, Darkplanetasia had his eyes wide open staring straight at her and gave her a fright. She threw the bowl of water hard straight into Darkplanetasia's face. Darkplanetasia tipped over and fell back into the bed. It was hot water and had burned his the side of his face. Yes popped through the entrance door and quickly grabbed a cloth, hurried over to Darkplanetasia's side and wiped his face.
He was overly insecure about his meeting with Yes, he tried to push her over, but when his eyes met hers...time stood still.
*splash* *splash*
"You two, stop being gay and get over here! There are things that needs to be explain and we need to hurry!" cried the old lady.
hahahhaa im shaking it all about now!!!! thanks pineapple! you're good !!
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The Old Lady Yelled Out to both Darkplanet asia and Yes to Come to the table that she was near by. They Both walked Over there and the Old lady said " sit, both of you. I have to explain the plan to both of you." Both of them started to sit down on some old wooden chair, that didn't look to sturdy. Yes sat down with no problem, but darkplanetasia, was a different story. Right When he sat down the chair some how magically Moved and he fell striaght down to the ground, hitting his ass on the ground. The Old lady Bursted in laughter. yes Said at thtat moment sorry just had to do that once. She moved that chair with her magical powers. DarkplanetAsia got back up Grab the chair and this time he made sure he sat down on the chair, by watching yes and hold on to the chair. After he sat down the old Lady Started to Explain the Plan but Darkplanetasia interuppted her and Said " who the hell are you, old lady?"
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"There's no time for that right now!" retorted the old lady. She turned around and walked over to a coner of the room. Kneeling down, she grabbed a small shovel nearby and started digging on the ground.
*what is she doing* thought Darkplanetasia . Yes sat still.
After digging awhile, the old lady put her hands inside the whole and took out a piece of paper. Quickly grabbed a cloth and started wiping down the peice of paper. "Here it is..." she whispered quietly.
Darkplanetasia rolled his eyes. He thought to himself about an old lady buring a freaking paper, why would an old lady bury a paper..?
She walked over and sat next to Yes. She took Yes's hand and placed the paper in her hand. "This my dear child, is PH's salvation." Yes was confused, she did not know what the old lady meant. The old lady continue, "it is through you, that this young man will wield the the power to help keep PH world in peace."
*this old lady is one crazy woman* thought Darkplanetasia *what the heck is that piece of paper*
Yes slowly opened the old ragged piece of paper in her hands. There were stick people walking around. Lots and lots of names over those stick people. They were moving all around the paper. Seems almost like watching drama and people bashing one another. Then her eyes rolled over to the top and it read "In Your Control."
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Yes Started to ask the old lady, what the paper was used for and what does You Are in Control means, but right at that moment Darkplanetasia Started panicking. he said " what the hell is going on here, First I see river that is not supposed to be there in the Forrest. then i Meet Girl that i dreamt about and Then I wake up Some Where and have no idea where the hell i am at. Next he said, " hell with this!" And ran out the door. Out side you can see two moons, one slighty larger than the other. Stars all around and Mist of Clouds in some area where the stars was shinning bright thourgh. these stars shine brighter than the one he was used to seeing.. DarkplanetAsia stop right as He reached out side and look all around him in amusement. It was one the greatest things he had ever seen.
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As Darkplanetasia was all confused and shocked at his surroundings and at the same time lost in this magical world of whatever it was, a house was on fire close by. Darkplanetasia could see the smoke coming out. He quickly rushed back inside the house where Yes and the old lady was. He cried out to them that there was a house on fire.
Yes and the old lady didn't care much about what Darkplanetasia was saying. Suddenly a fired arrow flew through the top of the house and landed on the table. It was burning the wooden table. The old lady got up and grabbed the bucket. She hurried over to the vase full of water and scoop some water to get rid of the fire.
Yes was too scared to get close to the fire, she pushed Darkplanetasia to grab the piece of paper. Darkplanetasia was scared himself and pushed Yes over to the fire. While they kept pushing eachother to the fire, the old lady was on fire. She was burning hot and crying out "....you...cont rol...PH...pap er...." then she died.
They did not hear the old lady clearly but finally Yes made up her mind. She pushed Darkplanetasia hard. He flew over and tripped and fell onto some fire. While he was burning, Yes fetched the paper and ran out.
Darkplatnetasi a was burning. He couldn't believe Yes left him. As his clothes was burning, he started to move in slow motion, and everything around him was burning down. The house was falling apart and definately going to fall on him. Then he heard a voice...callin g out to him in a serene voice
"stop...drop... shut em down open up shop...oh...no ....that's how ruff ryders roll..."
Darkplanetasia finally awaken. He stopped, dropped, but there was no time to roll so he quickly ran himself over to the vase and jumped inside the water while the house all fell down immediately. Everything black out for a few minutes...
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When darkplanetasia Came too.. he saw the house was Still on fired and took a look around and all around him and Saw trees and Burning high to the sky. yes yelled out to Daekplanetasia, "Stop soaking in water and Lets get back to your world, I must find the PH Hunnaydew spirit to help me with this paper the old lady left behind. We can get to he easier by finding a hunnaydew fruit in your world." Darkplanetasia slowly worked his way over to Yes and trip and fell Striaght to to the ground hitting his face first knocking him out cold again. Yes started flopping her arms like a chicken. Then she put her right foot in, she put her right foot out, she put her right foot in and she shake it all about...she does the Hokey-Pokey and she turn herself around cause that's what it's all about teleporting Darkplanetasia back into the real world.
In the human PH world it was day time, calm and with a cool Wind breeze. Yes Sat down next to Dark planet asian and SCREAMED WAKE UP!!!!!!!!! Dark planet asian woke up With a quickness and gave yes a strange But Amusing look and Yes couldn't help but fall for this look. She quickly turn around Blushing and said back to your house and started to walk towards dark planetasia house. Dark Sat for moment and then got up and chased YES.
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Can you guys also inlcude the part where i did an sho-du-ken to DPA?
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Can you guys also inlcude the part where i did an sho-du-ken to DPA?
We can't do that yet, where still working on the way you and him fall for each other. Gosh!!!!
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We can't do that yet, where still working on the way you and him fall for each other. Gosh!!!!
:2funny: oooo kay and then i dump him, right? ekekeke
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:2funny: oooo kay and then i dump him, right? ekekeke
If that happens it will have to be in the sequel.
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If that happens it will have to be in the sequel.
lol dorko!!!
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lol dorko!!!
YES: ;D ;D
Pineapple where you at? :'( :'( :'(
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As Darkplanetasia started to chase Yes back to his home, Yes kept peeking back and forth making sure that Darkplanetasia was really after her. Darkplanetasia could see her blushing each time she turned around. He started to smile as he can feel the small affection arouse in the atmosphere.
Darkplanetasia started creeping up in his own thoughts as the chase went on pretending about how they were in the fields of sunflowers. The sun is up high with a clear blue sky. Mountains in the faraway scenery. A beautiful waterfall over head. Dressed in beautiful Hmong clothes, sweet young summer love dancing around in the open.
*slap*
Darkplanetasia awoke with the side of his cheek burning like hell. “What the…”
“Look, over there,” Yes whispered. “There’s a farm over there.”
“So what? You just ruined a perfectly romantic sweet moment I just had with myself and …”
“YUCK! You perv…”
“ What, can’t I just have…”
“NO! We don’t have time for your stupidity thoughts. There’s a farm over there, we might possibly find a Hunnydew spirit laying around.”
“Fine then, go find your spirits and I’ll do my…”
*slap*
“Dang it, what the…”
“Get a hold of yourself and stop being a retard, let’s go now.” Yes lowered herself as if she sneeked into the field.
Darkplanetasia slowly touched his red-hot cheek and quickly followed her whispering to Yes, “Better watch yourself before I punch you in the ovaries…”
Yes turned around and smack him in the head then sneeked back intot he field quickly.
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:o :o ::) :o
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Sorry for the delay on the story. been really busy at work. Will continue once i get some free time. ;D
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You mofos are obesses with Darkypussasian---no matter how much you talk about him and write about him homie aint coming back to PH, he got banned along with the rest of the other hmoobers, koumoua, fabio, apod :2funny:
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You mofos are obesses with Darkypussasian---no matter how much you talk about him and write about him homie aint coming back to PH, he got banned along with the rest of the other hmoobers, koumoua, fabio, apod :2funny:
:o :o :-X :o
why did they get banned?...
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evil-in-deed why you so nosey mang? :o
DPA --got banned because his gf found out he was having a cyber love affair with another dude (me) so she reported him.
Koumoua --for making his wife post under his account
fabio--for pretending to be a girl when he's really a guy
apod--for showing his wang all over PH :2funny:
and honest to God I don't know who the fock these dudes are, but all I know is that they work for FREE and Free is a douche and if I ever meet him in person he's seeing the back of my hands...bietch slap that hmoob qhig tauv kiag ;D :knuppel2:
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evil-in-deed why you so nosey mang? :o
DPA --got banned because his gf found out he was having a cyber love affair with another dude (me) so she reported him.
Koumoua --for making his wife post under his account
fabio--for pretending to be a girl when he's really a guy
apod--for showing his wang all over PH :2funny:
and honest to God I don't know who the fock these dudes are, but all I know is that they work for FREE and Free is a douche and if I ever meet him in person he's seeing the back of my hands...bietch slap that hmoob qhig tauv kiag ;D :knuppel2:
u don't like free either? wow...that's a lot of free-haters.
just observing....
....carry on.
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u don't like free either? wow...that's a lot of free-haters.
just observing....
....carry on.
Uh, people hate him because he likes to make enemies? :idiot2: snoop thru people's files and post up their private stuff online? :knuppel2:
Personally don't really know the guy but he's justa little squirrel behind his monitor that just "keng keng kao computer su"...he prob wouldnt like it either if someone hacked his shiets and put it online.
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Uh, people hate him because he likes to make enemies? :idiot2: snoop thru people's files and post up their private stuff online? :knuppel2:
Personally don't really know the guy but he's justa little squirrel behind his monitor that just "keng keng kao computer su"...he prob wouldnt like it either if someone hacked his shiets and put it online.
luv ur hmonglish! O0 O0 O0
yes, no one likes nosy squirrels! I sure don't.
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evil-in-deed why you so nosey mang? :o
DPA --got banned because his gf found out he was having a cyber love affair with another dude (me) so she reported him.
Koumoua --for making his wife post under his account
fabio--for pretending to be a girl when he's really a guy
apod--for showing his wang all over PH :2funny:
and honest to God I don't know who the fock these dudes are, but all I know is that they work for FREE and Free is a douche and if I ever meet him in person he's seeing the back of my hands...bietch slap that hmoob qhig tauv kiag ;D :knuppel2:
because i can ask... and because i know you were dying to tell me too...
win win... nothing wrong with that...
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all you who are debating..argu ing please stop it. This was just a story me and pineapple decided to write to pass the time during work. we didn't have names for charactors so we used nicks from PH thats all!!!!
Pineapple... Now i will contniue our story.. sorry for the delay.
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yes, please continue...it's been a while...
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As they started walking towards the farm, Darkplanetasia trip over three time day dreaming about him and Yes. Each time he fell, Yes would slap him, once he got up. They finally made it to the farm and started looking around for a Hunnaydew. They first saw some tomatos, and then some potatoes, the went deeper and kept searching, but no hunnaydew. The closet thing was a watermelon. So they decided to keep heading towards the darkplanetasia house. They Started their walk again. Five minutes into their walk, it started getting darker and darker. Soon It was Pitch Black and all they could see was Fire flies flying around. They stop for amount and gazed at the fire flies with confuse looks on their face. "What is going on?" asked DarkplanetAsia right at that moment a Fire fly Spoke. He was a lilttle hard to hear but he said, "Turn back now, Danger only awaits you up a head."
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OMG Rockstargenes, didn't know you came back to update on the story. Sorry, didn't notice!
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The little firefly repeated again, "Turn back now, danger only awaits you up ahead!"
While Darkplanetasia was still concentrating on the little firefly, he hadn't notice that Yes was already gone from his side. He got up only enough to still be hidden and peer across the field to look for Yes, but she was no where to be found. He felt danger inside. He needed to find her as soon as possible before she gets herself in danger. His heart felt a bit of pain...a bit of affection for Yes...where was she?
As Darkplanetasia scope around looking for Yes, he stumbled upon a sickle laying around in the dirt. He picked up the sickle as he's probably going to need it for protection. As he move forward and forward, he heard a woman screaming not too far away from his home. He knew that voice. It was Yes.
Darkplanetasia got up and stood as a noble warrior. He rushed across the field over to where Yes's scream came from. Darkplanetasia ran straight to his front door, right when Yes came out of the door and they both crashed into eachother.
Yes was so afraid she held onto Darkplanetasia tightly. Darkplanetasia comforted her. "What's wrong?"
"They're in there...they're in there...everyw here" cried Yes.
“What’s in there? Who’s in there?” asked Darkplanetasia .
“Those things, those little things, they’re small and…and…” Yes was panicing.
Darkplanetasia got up and went to look inside his home. It was pitch black, he couldn’t see anything but he felt something was present. Then he saw all the little ones crawling around and laying everywhere. All of sudden, all those turned into a spirit at the sight of Darkplanetasia .
It spoke “Please do not be afraid.”
Darkplanetasia and Yes was confused.
“Princess Hunneydew had sent me here to fetch you two. I am to be in the form of which you saw awhile ago so no one knows of my presence. My name is Kreepykrawler…of PH. “
Darkplanetasia and yes looked at eachother and wondered.
Yes spoke, “If you are Kreepykrawler of PH, then Hunneydew is the Princess of PH?”
Kreepykrawler nodded.
Yes was so intrigue now. Darkplanetasia was still pondering and wasn’t giving in because he remembered what the fireflies told him. But there was not much he can do because Yes had mention that she needed to find Hunneydew to help with the PH paper. If Kreepykrawler knew something about Hunneydew, the he might be the key to getting to Hunneydew even if it may bring danger.
“Gather around me Darkplanetais and Yes, and I shall take us to the palace of PH to meet the Princess of PH.” Spoke Kreepykrawler.
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Pineapple Every Chance i get to come on i will try to update
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As They Both went near kreepkrawler, Darkplanetasia could Sense that something was not right. he looked at kreepykrawler and he saw a conniving smirk as they started to transport... then at that moment it went pitch black again and they Both got Knocked out during the Transport.
DarkplanetAsia started to come too after smelling an awful smell like some one had just threw up after a long night of drinking. As he open his Eyes, he can See he was in a jail cell with wooden Bars Which had thorns on them and next to him was an open area with nothing else but dirt and bed made of stone where Yes was laying. He got up from his bed of stone and Walked towards Yes and try to wake Yes up. As he shook Yes gently, Yes, right hand flew at his face with a open hand. SLAP!!!!!!!! Darkplanetasia Yelled out OUCH!!!! The moment Darkplanetasia yelled out, Yes awoke with a confuse look at her face. She then said, I had a dream of my Ex boyfriend, he was being an Azz hole so I slap him and when i came to.. you were yelling out. sorry for slapping you. It was ok with darkplanet asia, he was use to yes slapping him now. yes looked at darkplanetasia and ask where are we? last thing i remember was meeting kreepyKralwer and everything went black. Darkplanetasia Replied back" not sure but something smells awful though."
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Darkplanetasia got up and looked outside the bars. There was another man sitting across from them inside another jail room. That guy was dressed in old ragged and torn cloths. He was dirty, long beard and he looked ill. Darkplanetasia looked back at Yes, then look back at the man. This time Darkplanetasia saw something falling off of the man’s pocket. It looks like an old Dirty Socks. There was noises coming not to far from them and Darkplanetasia went back to cuddle next to Yes.
“There’s another man in jail with us,” wishpered Darkplanetasia . “But he looks ill.”
Yes looked into Darkplanetasia’s eyes with sincere…”I’m sorry Darkplanetasia…I’m so sorry!”
Darkplanetasia shook his head gently and wrapped his arms around Yes. “Don’t worry, it’s nothing to be sorry about.”
“I’m so sorry I got you into this. We shouldn’t have come. We should had just stayed back. I shouldn’t even gotten you into this. “ Yes cried quietly. “Maybe I can try to hokie pokie ourselves out.” She got up to dance but was too weak, she almost fainted.
Darkplanetasia held Yes closer to him. Yes felt his warmth. This time it wasn’t just any warmth…she felt sheltered. She felt protected. She thought about all those slap she had given him and yet at moments when she feel weak, he was there…holding her. She felt horrible.
Footsteps noises got closer to them. “Where are the prisoners” shouted a low deep voice.
“Over here master.” Kreepykrawler raised his arms directing the way.
Arrived at the jail door entrance. Yes noticed Kreepykrawler. She gave him an ugly eye stare. “Here master, here they are.” Spoke Kreepykrawler.
“I see.” Looking at a guard…”you there, take the girl out into the hallway.”
The guards opened up the jail gate and entered. They grabbed Darkplanetasia and threw him down as he was struggling to fight. They took hold of Yes. Yes was struggling, trying to get away from their hold.
“I’m not going anywhere with you” screamed Yes.
“Don’t worry, you’re worthless to us anyways. You just happen to have something we want.”
While Yes was struggling against the guard, the PH paper fell off her. Kreepykrawler and his master had already foot away. The guards took Yes away.
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i miss dpa.
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Man.... We didn't ever finsh this story and i don't have time any more to write. I wonder where pineapple is.