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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: Json on May 20, 2014, 07:08:02 PM

Title: Bonfire - The Final
Post by: Json on May 20, 2014, 07:08:02 PM
A collective of  bright souls
Burning together like hot coals
Each unique with distinct roles
Individuals aiming for the same goals

Casting their flames in the biggest fire
Ensuring that their own won't expire
Viewing the bonfire from afar, I deeply admire
I face the fact, that is what I'll never acquire

My light is not meant to be among them
A candle in the torrential wind
Flickering and going dim
I've kept my promise and it's time to end

I'm warming myself before leaving
The forecast is always freezing
Still, I keep walking
The final destination unknowing

 :)
Title: Re: Bonfire - The Final
Post by: tRouBLe on May 20, 2014, 07:23:13 PM
Nice but so sad.......it's like the video you posted......    :-\
Title: Re: Bonfire - The Final
Post by: Json on May 20, 2014, 07:26:48 PM
(http://i1153.photobucket.com/albums/p509/kittybrigan/tojson_zps45f7508a.jpg)

Always.

Nice but so sad.......it's like the video you posted......    :-\

This piece has been in my mind since February.
Title: Re: Bonfire - The Final
Post by: NtsesHnub on December 12, 2021, 08:14:55 PM
Berserk O0