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Online Journal / Re: Fighting For My Life
« on: May 29, 2015, 01:37:30 PM »
Kids are having their school Field day today. Hope the rain stays away.
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Outdoors & Recreational Hobbies / Re: Wild Turkey!
« on: May 29, 2015, 09:07:12 AM »
Mama turkey has nine chicks of various sizes. I'm guessing maybe two weeks difference between oldest and youngest.
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Hmong News / Re: Operation Popcorn Documentary Film
« on: May 29, 2015, 06:25:46 AM »
Hmm...have some relatives who were involved in this whole thingamathing. I wonder if they were interviewed.
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Online Journal / Re: Fighting For My Life
« on: May 29, 2015, 02:31:07 AM »Such an achieverNope again too poor for a camera. I never got into the habit of taking pictures. Just that no one ever was around to take pictures so its all memories. Even to this very day, I don't think of taking pictures at all.kudos Hero, but at least you played, that is what counts
you have old movies you can show, I would very much enjoy a flashback of your youth...
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Online Journal / Re: Fighting For My Life
« on: May 28, 2015, 08:53:08 AM »Did you have a tramatic childhood or as a teen you didn't play well with others?I only average two fights per week, maybe like ten pissing matches a week. And about one adult a year will try to kick my arse.
I don't play well with others because I'm usually better than others in most games. It's not my fault for having the longest standing jump or being able to beat the checkers champion. I can't help if I'm the fastest at sit-up or pushups. Didn't matter if I can pitch better or was able to quarterback more pass completions. And all because I barely even tried... So it pisses others off. So that's why they want to fight me to prove that they can beat me.
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Online Journal / Re: Fighting For My Life
« on: May 28, 2015, 07:12:26 AM »
So I was asleep and had me another fighting dream. How weird it is to dream about falling asleep and dreaming of another dream. It appears I was in middle school fell asleep in one class, dreamt about working in college. Had an altercation with another student with directions, then it turns out to be where to find the best places to eat. Then woke up from that dream.
Notice there was no one in class. I vaguely remember going to class in the morning and now its afternoon. Ah as I became more coherent about my surrounding area, I somehow found myself walking the hallways towards my locker. As I got closer to my locker location I got stopped by a janitor. He says, "Watch out for thieves or other suspicious individuals. There's been a lot of locker thefts."
I continued onwards to my locker location just down this stairwell and then I had this heighten alertness feeling. I noticed my locker was wide open and nothing was left in it. There were two guys in close vicinity with their own lockers open. Why are they hanging around? Then they started to inspect other lockers, somehow spinning the lock combos and proceeded to take out valuables. I confronted them and told them I will call out security. They laughed without any worries. At last the janitor responded as part of security. Somehow he was acting a bit odd.
The janitor was part of the scandal. He started to aggressively take me down. He was laughing insidiously. Now he's taking up a fighting stance with intentions of inflicting physical harm. I found myself engaged in a fight for principles that conflicts. I didn't want to hurt the janitor but I don't know what else to pacify him. So we end up fighting.
Notice there was no one in class. I vaguely remember going to class in the morning and now its afternoon. Ah as I became more coherent about my surrounding area, I somehow found myself walking the hallways towards my locker. As I got closer to my locker location I got stopped by a janitor. He says, "Watch out for thieves or other suspicious individuals. There's been a lot of locker thefts."
I continued onwards to my locker location just down this stairwell and then I had this heighten alertness feeling. I noticed my locker was wide open and nothing was left in it. There were two guys in close vicinity with their own lockers open. Why are they hanging around? Then they started to inspect other lockers, somehow spinning the lock combos and proceeded to take out valuables. I confronted them and told them I will call out security. They laughed without any worries. At last the janitor responded as part of security. Somehow he was acting a bit odd.
The janitor was part of the scandal. He started to aggressively take me down. He was laughing insidiously. Now he's taking up a fighting stance with intentions of inflicting physical harm. I found myself engaged in a fight for principles that conflicts. I didn't want to hurt the janitor but I don't know what else to pacify him. So we end up fighting.
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Outdoors & Recreational Hobbies / Re: toothy fish
« on: May 27, 2015, 09:18:14 AM »
Giving some 40# fluorocarbon leader a try instead of using steel leaders. So far just a few little hammer handles. But I'm just surprised at how quite invisible this stuff is underwater. I can barely see a line.
Product: Pline Shinsei fluorocarbon leader material #40 .
Product: Pline Shinsei fluorocarbon leader material #40 .
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Arts & Photography / Re: a few pics i took with my new Nikon D750
« on: May 26, 2015, 08:51:18 PM »
Wow how many multi focus points is this running on?
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Jokes & Riddles / I'm tired of going to church - jokes
« on: May 23, 2015, 01:38:36 AM »
I'm tired of going to church...
The preacher told me to bare all to the Lord. So I did. Then they curse me for baring naked as I was shouting, "Praise the Lord!"
The preacher told me to bare all to the Lord. So I did. Then they curse me for baring naked as I was shouting, "Praise the Lord!"
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Creative Writing / Re: How is my story so far?
« on: May 21, 2015, 03:22:14 PM »One more thing...I don't get what you mean by 'Multi-plot and Multi-concept translated?'You have multiple characters with their own short stories as part of the whole story, and time line isn't linear, since multiple characters are recounting from their perspective.
Your multi concept crosses known religion mostly Christianity and some Jewish. There's the multi dimensional allusion to Aliens, Angels, and devils. Then your other worldly powers and even the concept of multiplane existence of flesh, mind, and soul. You're creating an entirely different world with different sets of laws that most anime works wouldn't do. Its like combining all the Final Fantasy worlds together.
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Creative Writing / Re: How is my story so far?
« on: May 21, 2015, 02:31:05 AM »
I'm reading it like a multi-plot multi-concept translated anime. I take it you're getting used to that word processor, since the compounded sentences weren't present in your latter chapters. Your contradictory descriptions has been greatly reduced, so your imagery is getting better.
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Creative Writing / Re: Attempt at descriptive writing
« on: May 20, 2015, 10:11:23 PM »I know what you mean by writing out an example of how you would have written R's story. But, from reading your phrase and R's story, I hear two different voices and they are quite different. R's is more descriptive whereas yours is straight to the point.LOL you're right, it's not required.
That aside, in editing your writing, I would have left out the word "of." It's not necessary. But, some might say, it's preference...o r even my voice.
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Creative Writing / Re: Attempt at descriptive writing
« on: May 20, 2015, 08:54:04 PM »Not a bad fix, VH, but it then becomes your story. Your voice.True in a way I kind of only suggest this methodology for flow for emphasis on the tree branch. Mostly because I was coached this method. While I had attempted many times to flow it in a similar method like reporter's.
Overall I think it has a good balance between the squirrels and tree branch. A sort of relationship that is observed from the window. Yet the tree branch gets the final acknowledgemen t.
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Anything Goes / Re: a daily thought
« on: May 20, 2015, 03:21:21 PM »
Darn it...je ne sais pas.