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General Discussion / Re: David Yangs a whole lotta song
« on: October 24, 2019, 11:12:03 AM »
David yang, if you are reading this,
Hey man, just take this as a learning point. Maybe you can learn from my writings.
You can take alot away from this, how to be more creative, not leaving yourself open easy comebacks, not being so corny, etc etc.
Im not trying to be mean or anything but lets be honest, im not sure you see it or not but with that song you leave yourself wide open.
Anyways the track is coming along, putting some of those lines together
You say you know we all not cut from the same cloth,
Maybe you don't know becuase you dating from the same cloth,
All your listening fans for seven years riding your d.ick,
Its a shame you aint given them anything yet to know what hard is
Hey man, just take this as a learning point. Maybe you can learn from my writings.
You can take alot away from this, how to be more creative, not leaving yourself open easy comebacks, not being so corny, etc etc.
Im not trying to be mean or anything but lets be honest, im not sure you see it or not but with that song you leave yourself wide open.
Anyways the track is coming along, putting some of those lines together
You say you know we all not cut from the same cloth,
Maybe you don't know becuase you dating from the same cloth,
All your listening fans for seven years riding your d.ick,
Its a shame you aint given them anything yet to know what hard is