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General Category => Hmong Culture & History => Hmong Stories => Topic started by: fOrEvEr_sUn_76 on October 03, 2015, 07:36:09 AM

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Post by: fOrEvEr_sUn_76 on October 03, 2015, 07:36:09 AM
no subject here, this story has been discarded.
Title: Re: Old Lady That Lives in the Creek
Post by: DRTYLUVN on October 05, 2015, 03:50:46 PM
this is a good story, very americanized but good
now you need to get a cast and make a short film of it
Title: Re: Old Lady That Lives in the Creek
Post by: fOrEvEr_sUn_76 on October 05, 2015, 06:53:36 PM
Quote from: DRTYLUVN on October 05, 2015, 03:50:46 PM
this is a good story, very americanized but good
now you need to get a cast and make a short film of it

Was going to write a Hmong version of it but writing all of this in Hmong is overkill so I put everything in English instead.
Title: Re: Old Lady That Lives in the Creek
Post by: Lyn Song on October 05, 2015, 09:18:43 PM
Very good story bro and wow you manage to include hnyav (cannibals), nyab laj liab (Viet Cong), me nyuam ntsuag (orphan) thiab niam tais poj dab (ghost lady) all in one story. Usually a typical Hmong story would only involve one if not two of those but here you involve all four of them in their own significant role, very creative. O0