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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: Dark Angel on June 02, 2015, 01:07:49 PM
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... to be continue
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You were so beautiful, I thought I could never have you
Then you came along and planted a seed in my heart
That seed grew into a precious petal rose
I knew I had fallen for you because I giggle_shyly
Whenever you're around
Your missterious character, I fell for
The man I never knew could be a VillainousHero
You told me that you were a ProudLao, I knew you're a minorcharacter
You weren't so innocent when you told me of your festishdream(s)
The stories you've told me, you must have been theking
From inanotherlife time
I knew we were unmatchable but I gave you a chance
Only to find out that you're just a malestranger
Believe_N_Me when I tell you that I still care about you
And that I'll always be yoursunrise4ever
Even if what we had was sumtingwong
Yet you disappeared into the darksyde
My dark angel, why did you lie?
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WOW, very creative indeed! O0
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Interesting piece yet creative. Nice. :)
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Thanks ladies. And DatJuanGuy, I was going to include you too but I don't know how a mexican guy will fit into my story. LOL
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There's so much chaos in my head
So I decided to write instead
For it gives me a peace of mind
Rightnow I'm not too kind
With my words nor my actions
All it does is gives me distractions
I rather not think or speak
Because it will show that I'm weak
Someday I will write why I'm in the dark
And I'll leave my mark
For you to find
Only then you'll understand my mind
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O0
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Thank you, my love.
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I agree with your poem. Sometimes it's easier to express ourselves through our writing and it relieves some of the tension we may get from our experiences or life, in general, if we don't want to talk about it. :)
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I don't know if I met you this lifetime or the last
Even in the present I still remembered the past
I can still feel you in my dreams
It takes me into another realm
I guess when two hearts fought for love that lost
Your path is bound to crossed
That's what happened between you and me
We were just too blinded to see
Fate brought us together only to depart
But I'll always carry you in my heart
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If I knew:
If I knew today would be our last day
I would have asked you to stay
If I knew today would be our last words
I would have put my words out there to be heard
If I knew today we would shared our last laugther
I wouldn't push you so much for an answer
If I knew today you would tell me your last joke
I would protect my heart from being broke
If I knew today would be the last time you write
I wouldn't put up such a fight
If I knew today you would say good-bye
I would have let you hear my last cry
If I knew today would be the end
I would have only kept you as a friend
Then today, I would still have you...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6m7JpQ-1o-4 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6m7JpQ-1o-4)
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In the dark, you sat
Waiting for an Angel
Searching for your soul
A soul you've already sold
Clouded mind, you're lost
Feels like the world is closing in
You prayed just for another day
If only God grant your wish
The night went silent
Not a single cricket sing
You looked up to the moon
The sky is overshadowed by darkness
There's not a single star twinkle in sight
You are all alone in your own demise world
Then an Angel heard your cry
Felt your lonely and empty heart
She pulled you from the darkness
Gave you the sun and the moon
Painted the night sky with stars
Granted your wish for another day
Then the day came when you no longer needed her
Casted your Angel aside
Wished for her disappearance
Sadly she became the Dark Angel
Dwelling back into the darkness
Where she will remain for eternity
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Nice and emotional pieces. I enjoyed reading them. O0
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Thank you tRouble. I've always enjoyed reading yours too. Just the fact that you have not put any up for so long. :-[
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Thanks. I haven't had much time to write nowadays but I try when I can..... :)
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I agree that it was pretty creative. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks PL. Yours are pretty good too. O0
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Dreaming of you in a place where we are free
Abandonning all desires and hopes
Reaching only into your eyes
Knowing that everything can fade away
Against the world just me and you
No need to try and understand
Gently holding eachother under the moonlight
Embracing little time we had left
Loving each moment like it's our last
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Dreaming of you in a place where we are free
Abandonning all desires and hopes
Reaching only into your eyes
Knowing that everything can fade away
Against the world just me and you
No need to try and understand
Gently holding eachother under the moonlight
Embracing little time we had left
Loving each moment like it's our last
I love your love motto. A true romantic! O0 O0
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I love your love motto. A true romantic! O0 O0
I guess you can say that I'm a romantic person by heart. Everything I do, it's out of love. NOT! hehe
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I love your love motto. A true romantic! O0 O0
I love it!
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~Crossed Star Lovers~
Like two crossed star lovers, we were doomed from the start
Our love has passed away among the glistening stars
Separated worlds apart through the galaxy
The dept of our loss is now my own world
Upon the million of stars we waited for that day
The first day when we met
If you saw and knew me, it was because we had loved once
From another life time ago
You were the beacon that lite the way
Yet on this fateful night no light shine
We'll always be two lonely souls roaming aimlessly
Two crossed star lovers that vanished into the dark
If it's to be said that you were taken away from me
I'll die to find you again
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~Crossed Star Lovers~
Like two crossed star lovers, we were doomed from the start
Our love has passed away among the glistening stars
Separated worlds apart through the galaxy
The dept of our loss is now my own world
Upon the million of stars we waited for that day
The first day when we met
If you saw and knew me, it was because we had loved once
From another life time ago
You were the beacon that lite the way
Yet on this fateful night no light shine
We'll always be two lonely souls roaming aimlessly
Two crossed star lovers that vanished into the dark
If it's to be said that you were taken away from me
I'll die to find you again
So deep! Dont make like you more than I already do! :D
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Thank you, my love. Glad you like it. Go write me some.
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So deep! Dont make like you more than I already do! :D
Don't make me jealous. I sense a strong connection btwn the two of you. hahahha O0 :D
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Don't make me jealous. I sense a strong connection btwn the two of you. hahahha O0 :D
She's my sister from another mom. lol
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We are all brother and sisters from different mothers :)
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We are all brother and sisters from different mothers :)
Koj hais yog kawg... but that is a true fact though among us hmong people.
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We are all brother and sisters from different mothers :)
Yes, we are all brothers and sisters under heaven. O0 ;D
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Yes, we are all brothers and sisters under heaven. O0 ;D
whatever.. I know what you're thinking Kenshin. :knuppel2:
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whatever.. I know what you're thinking Kenshin. :knuppel2:
Stop making assumptions about me. Whatever you are thinking, get that out of your dirty mind. LOL :2funny: :D :D
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I wasn't so look who was making assumptions. LOL
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I wasn't so look who was making assumptions. LOL
Didnt you say, "I know what you're thinking, Kenshin"? LOL :2funny: :2funny:
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Didnt you say, "I know what you're thinking, Kenshin"? LOL :2funny: :2funny:
Yes, but did you know what I was even thinking about? LOL Mr. Assumptions!
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Yes, but did you know what I was even thinking about? LOL Mr. Assumptions!
No, Miss Denial!!! :2funny:
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Dumb and Dumber. :2funny:
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Dumb and Dumber. :2funny:
At least, they are good friends for life. O0 O0
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Indeed... that's a once in a lifetime frienship!
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Indeed... that's a once in a lifetime frienship!
Which it's hard to find these days. Or perhaps it's personality conflict/issue. ;D :D
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Friendship is just like any other couple relationship.
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I'm the Angel that you shot from heaven
Fallen with broken wings
Into earth I was bounded
To be continued....
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To The Man with A Beautiful Mind:
Lonely nights we used to catch eachother's rhyme
Long ago, that was our time
You disappeared suddenly without a trace
I longed for your words and your face
You said that I was the rarest of gem
The most beautiful rose on a stem
The pearl that sparkled under the water
And that we were eachother's crossed star lover
I've waited for you for almost a year
Your words became clear
That you're never going to return
You became someone that I yearned
Our words were magical, how can you forget?
Was I just someone that you regret?
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No one knows the dept of my loneliness
Every night I'm sitting here staring at the screen
My only outlet to the world
The night is cold and lonely
No one is speaking a word to me
I'm lost in my thoughts
Wishing upon a fallen star
To take me far away
End my misery
So that I won't remember
The loneliness and isolation of my heart
Too much for me to bare at times
Where does it begin and stop?
Each day is like the same
Every night filled with emptiness
Hoping to talk to even a stranger
No one can hear my cries
Buried deep inside this coffin
I can't breathe
I can't speak
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Always on my mind...
Trying so hard not to think of you
Pushing every thoughts out of my head
Realizing that what we had could never be
Just a dream, a figment of my imagination
Punishing my own heart for falling in love with you
When a love could not be return
All hopes and dreams are doom to end
My feelings drown in my own tears
Like the wave crashing against my soul
Takes me into the ocean of despair
Drowning my heart deep
Impossible-Shontelle
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MFRZR_iGaQ (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MFRZR_iGaQ)
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"You're My Addiction"
You're my drugs and I'm your junkie
Everytime you're close, I just want you
Can't seem to shake this addiction free
You make me feel weak
You take me high but you also bring me down
Makes me forsake all the golen rules
Give me just enough to make it through the night
Yet, I begged you for more and more each time
You have a hold on me that is unbreakable
No matter what I do, I lose at the end
Trying so hard to quit you is impossible
You give me this high, I don't want to come back to reality
Everyday, I gotta have you, just one last time
I've broken all my promises to stay away
I've been lying to myself
I could never give you up.... :-[
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Today, I heard our song playing on the radio
It took me to a time when our love first born
We were so in love, only heaven knows
I was the apple in your eyes
But that spring our love die
I never heard from you again
Not a sound nor a gust of wind to bring back your voice
As if you had left this world
Sometimes when the wind is blowing against my face
I can still feel your undying embrace
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~Good-Bye~
Good-bye are never easy
Your time here briefly
It was never taken for granted
Your words in my heart, branded
Sadness flood my eyes
For we have to say good-bye
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:( i know right, good people hard hard to find.... especially ones who click well in comments 8)
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Yes, but in life, we must depart one day. Good people are hard to come by these days.
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Reaching into your soul
I've fallen from my own
Into the dept of no return
My heart burn in flames
As I watched myself die
Slowly burning into ashes
I am no more left in this world
Faded into the darkness
Somewhere buried alone
I am free at last...
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Some of my poems are very dark so read with discretions. I will begin to tell the story of my life which only poetries can expressed.
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~Frozen~
Let me take you to a time of frozen
Where hearts do not have feelings
And tear drops frozen like diamonds
Our words frozen in time
Hidden in a place that is deep
No more sleepless nights
No more counting the days
No more searching for your face
A time where memories erased
Just like waking up from a dream
You forget what you dreamed about
A new day, new memories
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In the dept of my lonely soul
Only you can see through
Hidden deep in the darkness
An broken Angel dwelled alone
My wings has been broken
My heart as been torn
My eyes has been blinded
Yet, you still loved me
You still accepted me for who I am
You saved me from myself
I am nothing, if I am without you
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Like a butterfly, you came into my life
Drank my sweetness until the sunrise
Then off you went flying to another flower
Don't know if I'll see you ever
The sun set in my eyes
I try not to cry
For you my beautiful butterfly
Don't leave without a good-bye
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Rest your sorrow in me
Let me drown in your tears
I will fight your demons
To the end is what an Dark Angel do
Let me melt your pain away
Even in the darkness there is light
Don't give up this fight
I'll always be your shield
Let me cast away your loneliness
Take you to a place of heaven
Even if you feel like you're in hell
In your heart I will reside always
You are not alone
I stand by you to the end
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Some of my poems are very dark so read with discretions. I will begin to tell the story of my life which only poetries can expressed.
I like them all! So deep and provocatively dark.
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Thank you. The best is yet to come...
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If I could turn back the hands of time
I would go back to that first day
The first letter we've written
My heart blindly read it wrong
My eyes was fooling my heart
Re-reading it now, I can see clearly
The clues was there but my heart refused
I am the fool, a broken girl
Who believed she was worthy
Little did I know it was only a dream
A dream made up in my lonely mind
My fault....my pain.
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When I heard the news
It felt like a bomb has exploded in my heart
The pain was so intense, I fell apart
Your words crushed me to my bone
Sadness engulfed my mind and soul
Trying to come back to this reality
Yet, I'm still dreaming of that perfect place
Where you and I can be together
Nothing in our way, only perfectness
I refused to wake up from that dream
When it was over and done with
I felt like I've died a thousand times
My heart bled like the nile river
My tears flooded my soul
Gone, I'll be... but I can never forget you
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My beautiful ghost, why are you still dewelling in this place?
I'm setting you free, now you can go roam with the wild
This is a place of no time and reality
Your lonely soul has been broken
Emptiness consumed your mind
I cannot give you life
A battle has started between heaven and hell
I'm only an Dark Angel fallen from grace
I am powerless and can't save you
I can't save you if I can't even save myself
This was written in my destiny
To walk on this road alone
Darkness is all I have left to call home
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Nothing makes me smile in the morning than to see a poem by you Dark Angel :) jump start of a good day!
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Thank you my lovely, it's always nice to share it with someone.
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~Unchained My Spirit~
You loved me with all your might
Yet you held me so tight
At times I felt suffocated
My soul, isolated
My spirit chained in prison
Soon, I began to lose my vision
I became submissive to your desires
All the while, my soul was burning in fire
You put your marks on my body
My body left bloody
The pain inked through my veins
I became numb to the point where I can't feel pain
Begging for God to take my life
I began to cut myself with a knife
The scars embedded in my wrists
What have I missed?
I've been living with a monster
You're only an imposter
So many nights I slept with pain
Released me from these chain
How can you say you love me?
When in your heart, I am not free
When times are bad
It makes me sad
I looked up to the stars
Yet my dreams, they seem so far
My spirit charter into another place
Wishing I can disappear without a trace
(http://i58.tinypic.com/2wgrvk7.jpg)
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Come to me baby
Lay down here beside me
Let me hold you
In this moment, I'm yours
Kiss me with stars in your eyes
I want to feel your love
My heart beat next to yours
Can you hear it thump?
I'm so in love with you
Every moments that I'm without you
I feel like dying..
I see your heart
Looking back at mine
You're mine to keep forever
I love you
I watched your world burn down
I watched your dreams shattered
But baby, I'm still here
I ached for your touch
Caress my body with your hands
I want to feel you deep inside
Blow my mind with your words
Hold me while the world disintegrate
In a millions years
Our love story will still hold truth
Because what we have can never be explain...
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"Twin Flames"
There is no doubt that you are my twin flame
How else would we have the same game
You see through me like no other
For you are my past lover
Many lifetime ago, we were separated
We were put here on earth to delegate
Learn from the people of the earth
So that we can rebirth
To find eachother again this lifetime
It has been written in the star that you are mine
My twin flame, in time we will ascend together
Then we will truly be ONE forever
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Like the wind of change you came into my life
In a time when I needed you the most
You played with my heart like a guitar
I've never heard such beautiful music before
The world is different since I've met you
My eyes can see the sunrise once again
Our time could vanish tomorrow
But for today, you are here
I ♥ u.
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There was a moment that overcame me
The thought of losing you forever
Then my heart began to beat really fast
Thoughts flooded my mind of the "What if"
My insecurity took the best of me
And I became very weak (the me I hated)
When I realized that my chance was dying
Right before my eyes before it even began
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I slept with you in my sleep
Are you for me to keep?
I toss and turn
As my heart burn
Missing you into the nights
When you are out of sight
Has it been for you?
If you miss me, give me a clue
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~I Miss You~
I miss you when you're not around
The days and nights are so long
There's an emptiness which can't be explain
Only you can fill that empty void inside
Your words bring laughter to my face
Each day is brighter because of you
I miss you when you're away
Even the blue clear sky can't make me smile
Birds chirping every morning just reminded me of you
The way you can pull the strings in my heart
I don't know how you do it
You have me hpynotized under your spell
I miss you when I closed my eyes
And realized that you are so far away
How will I ever reach out and touch you?
Moments like these break my heart into pieces
Because I miss you so much
And there's nothing I can do.... *sigh*
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Thanks for your contribute. I hope your dream come true for you tonight. ;)
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~UntamedHeart~
You like to float like a leaf with the wind
You are carefree like a bird
Your spirit is not bounded by this earth
You can soar to any destination if you wish
Your heart is untamed
You rise and you fall like the dominos
Yet you never show your weakness
A strong soul you possessed
Will I ever be able to penetrate through?
A heart that has never been tame before
You're young, wild, and free
No one could ever chain you down
You will go where the wind takes you
Even to death, if that is your calling
For you were born with an untamed heart
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Don't mind at all. Post anything you want. Is this dedicated to Hearts? It's beautiful.
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nope...just a general thought...it's a song actually. see music discussion/dedication.
Oh, I see.. I thought maybe you've written it. Who's the dedication for?
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for my special PH women!
Women? not woman? lolz
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Started work early today. About to get off rightnow. Time to relax. No need to clean since I got that done last night even though I said that I was tired. I can't stand messy place. Always have to be on my feet. :P
womEn! :D ;D
Yes, I can see.. cov neeg siab coob coob li koj, becareful nawb mog, vim there's many eyes-stalking you. ;D
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~Lost Inside Your Love~
When I look into your eyes
I see myself drowning in them
I feel weak when I'm around you
Words do not come out from my lips
I'm lost inside your love baby
What power do you have over me?
Cuz everytime I'm near, I can't breathe
Your words take me far away
I don't want to come back to reality
I'm lost inside your love baby
I'm trying hard to have control
But everytime, I lose it all at the end
You take me to a place of heaven
A place only in my dreams
I'm lost inside your love baby
The stars that twinkle in your eyes
I'm one of the fallen star
You caught me and now I've been found
Kiss me with your tender lips
I'm lost inside your love baby
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~Ntshai Tsam Kuv Raug Koj Dag~
Are you saying good-bye to me?
Just like the many times you've done
Why do I still continue to believe
That tomorrow there's still a sun
You came into my life like a dream
Then you disappeared in the morning
Is this one of your scheme?
Please God, give me a warning
If this is a game, I don't want to play
My heart has been broken by your lies
You are not mine to keep even if you stay
I won't ask you questions or why
This feeling is killing me inside
To love you without knowing
A part of me has already died
I never know when you're going
Ntshai tsam raug koj dag kuv
Dag kuv lub siab ua nyob tos koj
Txoj thaum kawg, kuv nyob tsis muaj tus
Zoo li tus Dark Angel ua tsis muaj hnub ploj
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For U:
Are you real or are you just an figment of my imagination?
You came to me during a time when I needed you the most
Did God hear my cry of prayers and he sent you down, my Savior?
You're so perfect in every way, I could never hate you
Night after night, you seem to be reaching deeper into my soul
Things that I've tried to hide, you uncovered them all
Sometimes I am scared because you seem to know me so well
Wake me up if I am only dreaming...I don't want to get lost in my dreams
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I'm afraid that when I wake up, you will be no more
I don't want to drift alone on this lonely shore
You have been the only light leading the way
Without you, I don't want to stay
Everytime I closed my eyes, I'm afraid to open them
To me, you are the rarest beautiful gem
You sparkle even when there's no light
I'm trying to hold onto you tight
My words come to you on this cloudy day
Bringing you much love from far away
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I am your sword and you are my shield
Together, nothing can stop us
Even in death, our hearts will beat as ONE
Our love is not of this world
It lives in our hearts where no one can touch
From a time of broken hopes and tear drops
We've found eachother unknowingly
To eternity, I will follow you
Even to a world of darkness
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Shhhh... let me feel your body
I'm not just somebody
Come to me baby
I'm your lady
Shhhh.. I wanna show you my paradise
Come here and close your eyes
Can you feel my burning thighs
I wanna make you high
Shhhh.. let me kiss you
Tonight I'm going to make your dreams come true
Feel the burning fire
You are my desire
Shhh... I want you to venture into my valley
Make me want you badly
It's tropical forest wet
Will my needs be met?
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You are my moon. ;)
You are my beautiful bright moon
Your light illuminate the night
Always shining down on me
Looking up, I feel you so close
Even if you are a billion miles away
Every night I sleep under your watch
My beautiful moon you are magnificent
You are the wonders of the world
You crossed the sun to be with me
Tonight I sleep in your arms
Under the moonlight kisses
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Smile for me, you have a heart of gold
I don't know if you've ever been told
You are my sunrise every morning
The foundation that keeps me from falling
Replace your loneliness with me in your heart
I promise you I'll never depart
You'll always have me here
Forever more throughout the years
I may not be able to fix everything
But my words come to you with something
In me, you'll always find a true friend
I'll be here for you always til the end
:)
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~Our Love Story~ I leave my story here so that someday you will read and know that it has always been you that I've been searching for all my life...
I've been chasing you like a butterfly
From flower to flower without ever stopping
Hoping to catch a glimpse of your beautiful heart
Words you spit on my screen had me mesmerized
Chasing you from world to world
From heaven to hell
From light to darkness
From lifetime ago to this lifetime
It's because my heart felt you
The moment my eyes met yours
I knew I've loved you before
No doubt I could ever be wrong
For I was dying as the day passed
Not being able to reach your heart
My world fell into a deep despair
Realizing my chance gone
You disappeared from my eyes
Back to where you came from
Sadness overcame my heart
I remained a lonely ghost drifiting among strangers
Then one day, I saw you again
You walked right by and didn't even notice me
I've been reborn with a different face
Patiently, I watched you from afar
Trailing your every threads
Interjecting my words into your posts
I thought to myself "How can I make you see?"
This was my only one chance
I could not live another day if I lose you again
I knew you but you didn't know me
My love, I passed by you so many times
Hoping you would recognize me
Like a past love, you never forget
I felt my chance slipping away once again
The moment you leave, I'll never know
My heart was aching to tell you everything
Even though I did not know you then
I've missed you every single day since you've been gone
Little did I know you've been searching for me as well
You came back for me but I was no longer the same person
I was reborn with a different face and name
Yet you were able to picked me from the rest
Our love was meant to me...
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~Our Love Story~ I leave my story here so that someday you will read and know that it has always been you that I've been searching for all my life...
Ic
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Like the ocean waves, I wished it would carry me out to you
I want to drift with the tides into your arms on this summer night
Wave after wave, my heart is dying of loneliness
Missing you is killing me inside and I can't hide from it
The sky is beautiful with million of stars but I can't find you
Where have you fallen to my beautiful star?
Save me from drowing in this ocean of broken dreams
Dreams upon dreams will I ever reach you?
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We found eachother when our hearts could no longer beat. We found eachother when time no longer count and matter. We found eachother when our souls was dying. We found eachother when we thought we could no longer love.
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I love you
These words I could only uttered to you
My heart has been blinded before
Loving someone when love could not be return
You make me see love for it's true meaning
I love you
So many times I held back my heart
Afraid to give it another try
Afraid of loving the wrong person
But you gave me a reason to love you
I love you
These words means more than just feelings
They give me a purpose to live again
I want to live to feel your love
To be loved by you this lifetime
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Into the darkness
I will hide this love
I carried deep inside
To never see the light day
Burning softly in my heart
Desiring you above all
Wishing I was by your side
Laying in your arms each night
Into the darkness I will hide
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BK, thank you for your contribution. Love it! Sometimes, it's better to hide in darkness than to feel pain.
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In the darkness you brought me out to the light
Showed me how beautiful the world is if you're by my side
You broke down all my walls
Ready to catch me when I fall
Your words built a bridge to my heart
Erased the sadness and prepared me for a new start
It was like a dream too real to believe
Then words came that you had to leave
Your words crushed my world apart
Killed everything inside of my heart
Now, I'm like a lost ghost
Chasing all your posts
Can't leave this world, can't go back into the dark
Like Moses lost Ark
Lost in the deep ocean sea
Drowning never to be free
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My feelings I tried so hard to hide
I kept them buried deep inside
Hoping in time they will all just die
Even when I was hurting, I lied
I could never face you
Cuz when I look at you, it makes me blue
Realizing your love isn't true
I should have seen the clues
Now it's too late for me
I already gave you the key
You've already stung me like a bee
Leaving me with all these memories hard to flea
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It was you that gave me new meaning in life
It was you that rescued me from my own demise
You mend my broken wings so I can fly again
In the darkness when I was dying
You reached for my hands
You wiped away my tear drops
You gave me reasons to live again
It was your voice that carried me out
It was your love that I've been living for
I don't want to live another day without you
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Here is where I'll leave my good-bye
Don't cry for me because I am leaving
You never loved me from the beginning
All you ever did was yelled and put me down
All the years taking in your cruel words
I was living like an prisoner
There are no more time for your words
So long ago, my heart already left
Maybe someday you'll realized
That I'm the best thing that you ever had
Well it'll be too late for us to restart
I can only hope happiness for you
Those lonely years I lived in misery
Lonely nights I spent without you near
I've come to accept that I'm not the one
I'm just your property and nothing more
You'll see that I do have feelings too
My heart has been tainted with sad memories
Good-bye, the one that never loved me
May you find the one that complete you
All those years blaming myself
Wishing that if only I could be better
Maybe you would love me
Realizing now that it's not me
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On a dark night, an Angel fell from heaven
Her broken wings unable to fly
She was abandoned to die
That night, heaven lost an Angel
All the animals in the forest cried
She was cursed into the world of darkness
Her beauty betrayed her heart
It was said that she would live alone
Until a worthy person can break the spell
Every night she waited patiently for that human
Who would be worthy of her heart
Night after night, there was no sign
Even the stars refused to shine
Her lonely heart was starting to give up
She was so lonely, all she can do is sing
She felt her life slipping away
Death would give her peace
Then one day, she heard the most beautiful voice ever
He was singing "Here Without You" from nearby
Her heart fluttered like a butterfly
Have someone come to save me?
She ran into the beautiful voice
Their eyes met for the first time
She saw a tear drop from his eyes
Standing before her was this beautiful hmong man
He said to her "I've been looking for you"
You're the one that has singing to my heart
Every night, I hear your voice but I can't find you
Your loneliness has swept across the forest
He took her and gave her a passionate kiss
She felt warmth all over her body
Her soul was coming back alive
He has broken the spell, a worthy man of her heart
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Do I still crossed your mind?
These days, my words don't rhyme anymore
Counting the day seems so long
I'm not crying but tears keep slipping from my eyes
It reminds me of my days in the darkness
The warmth of your words started to fade away
I don't make sense these days
It feels like I'm just dreaming
Always searching for your face
No where in sight, you're gone it seems
Why do I feel so alone in my dreams?
Missing you do not bring me closer
It just takes me further away from you
:'( :'(
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There are those that stands by our side
Yet night after night, day after day
Tears continue to fall from our eyes
Then there are those who are so very far away
Just one moment in their presence
Had chased away all of our dismay
Perhaps in life, we are destined to be lonely
For a broken heart is one that knows love
And that love is what creates true beauty
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I have missed you everyday since you went to war
Everything you took and including my love that can't be restored
Your words were so harsh that killed me alive
I wish I had another chance another night
To love you , love you oh I don't want to die
I have written to you everyday but you never replied
My heart have broken into pieces and I can no longer cry
I love you with all my heart whether you are dead or alive
I am yours and you are mine forever in this life time
I will wait until you come back to my arms crying
And told me you have missed me so much you fell like dying
Kiss me deadly my prince, I am longing for your pie
I love you and always will my love, my prince and my shinny armor knight
Sorry, I'm rookie tsi txawj sau li nej
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In the darkness I fumble to find you
Reaching only to find you gone
All our words stinged my heart
Tears rushed to my eyes
Afraid that I'll never see you again
Fear ate me from inside
I can't explain why
Only that I love you...
:'( :'(
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A good person is hard to find
Once you have it hold it tight
If you love someone set aside your pride
Tell that person before she found Mr RIGHT
Age and Time do not wait my my freind
Take a risk and be with the one you think highly
Can you imaging shes holding by another man tightly
It is still not too late to win her heart back even with pride
So try everything in your power to get her back
I will always love you, my handsome prince.
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Like the dark angel I will always keep watch over you. I will protect you under my broken wings. No matter how far you are my love has found a place inside of your heart. It will forever love you until the day comes when you killed me with your words. When you no longer want me. When I become nothing but a past memories. Everything Ive written they are all for you. All my songs. All my letters. Our time together has brought me nothing but joy. Happiness that Ive found you. I don't care about the world. I don't care about anything. I'm not afraid of anything except losing your love. I love and miss you always....
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The night is here and I can't sleep
I am thinking about our memories
You used to tuck me in every single night
and tell me you love me and to sleep tight
Oh how I miss those nights when you care so much for my mind
And didn't want me to suffer or cry
Good night mog.
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I felt my words slipping away
Trying hard to hold on today
Every words is coming out wrong
I don't know where to belong
I can't no longer feel your heart
Not like from the start
Did you hide your heart from me?
Why won't you let me see?
I can see the answers in your eyes
I'm just waiting for your good-bye
I'm trying to be strong but I failed
Now it's too late for me to bail
I've fallen deep into your heart
I don't want to return back to the dark
I'm living only in daydream
Floating on a nowhere stream
Its's so easy for you to toss me aside
Even when inside I already die
Sometimes your words hurt me
But I kept wanting to believe
That you're not that kind of a man
When you already have a plan
You don't have to hide anymore
I'm not the one you're looking for
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Once upon a time, there you were
Sharing your rhymes with me secretly
My sexy hands, why did you leave?
I put out the snow man for you
Only to find you already left with the winter flakes
That winter you never came back
Spring came and summer gone
Autumn leaves fell upon MN
Not a single words from you
My beauty faded with time
So did your admiration for me
One look at me and you left
I was not pretty in your eyes
A troll you only saw in me
It was my fate to be born ugly
:'( :'(
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I felt my words slipping away
Trying hard to hold on today
Every words is coming out wrong
I don't know where to belong
I can't no longer feel your heart
Not like from the start
Did you hide your heart from me?
Why won't you let me see?
I can see the answers in your eyes
I'm just waiting for your good-bye
I'm trying to be strong but I failed
Now it's too late for me to bail
I've fallen deep into your heart
I don't want to return back to the dark
I'm living only in daydream
Floating on a nowhere stream
Its's so easy for you to toss me aside
Even when inside I already die
Sometimes your words hurt me
But I kept wanting to believe
That you're not that kind of a man
When you already have a plan
You don't have to hide anymore
I'm not the one you're looking for
I love you silly
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Once upon a time, there you were
Sharing your rhymes with me secretly
My sexy hands, why did you leave?
I put out the snow man for you
Only to find you already left with the winter flakes
That winter you never came back
Spring came and summer gone
Autumn leaves fell upon MN
Not a single words from you
My beauty faded with time
So did your admiration for me
One look at me and you left
I was not pretty in your eyes
A troll you only saw in me
It was my fate to be born ugly
:'( :'(
.tell him mog. Hlub koj os ,sis.
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Please don't feel so sad
It will only make me cry
You know we both need to stay alive
So Oneday we can hold each other tight
Kiss deadly and madly thru out the night
I love you and miss you I feel like dying
When will I see you again luv of my life
Each night I look for your touch and your smile
Tucking me to bed and tell me you luv me and your mine
I will forvever remain faithful until our stars shines
Until then, I will remain yours and your mine
I won't cry ever again. .......good night my handsome.
I love you and think of you every second of the day, my only love. Nco nco koj li os. Koj puas paub, koj puas hnov, koj puas nco?
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Lost in your love, I was for a bit
But I've found my way back to the light
My conscience became clear
Why my eyes filled with tears?
It was because I felt too much
Always dreaming of your touch
I loved you completely
Giving myself wholeheartedly
I felt too much and I fell too fast
I should have learned from my past
I hated myself when you could not return
It is your love that I yearned
Every steps was to get close
Even if I was not the one that you chose
I will locked my heart away
So, there will never be a day
Like this ever again
Because I don't want to feel the pain
Not knowing when you're coming or going
Which you have been showing
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Nice. I miss my love today. :( I wanted to hear his voice and ask if he's ok.
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In your eyes, I see your heart baby
I saw my face reflected back at me
My images swimmed in your eyes
I'm the one you're thinking of
Your words of "I love you" broke my fortress
I can no longer pretend I don't love you
Your face is the only thing I see night and day
I'm crazy for your love
Thinking about you always brings me a smile
No matter how dark my day is
I closed my eyes and I see your face
Then everything becomes brighter
You win the best of me
Everything of me, you have
You've conquered my love
I will forever love you... This is my words for you. :)
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Lovely poem, sis. It touches my heart deeply....and brought tears in my eyes. Thank you!
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Yog tsis muaj koj
Ntshai yuav nco tsis ploj
Cov hnub qub yuav tsis ci
Ntiaj teb tsaus ntuj nti
Yuav muaj koj nco hauv lub siab
Tsis mus nhriav tus tsiab
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Yog tsis muaj koj
Ntshai yuav nco tsis ploj
Cov hnub qub yuav tsis ci
Lub Ntiaj teb yuav tsaus ntuj nti
Yog muaj koj nco hauv lub siab
Kuv yuav tsis mus nhriav tus tshiab
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Yog tsis muaj koj
Ntshai yuav nco tsis ploj
Cov hnub qub yuav tsis ci
Ntiaj teb tsaus ntuj nti
Yuav muaj koj nco hauv lub siab
Tsis mus nhriav tus tsiab
Good job sis!
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Thanks. I don't know how to write hmong that well so those are just some simple words that I know how to write. :)
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Thanks. I don't know how to write hmong that well so those are just some simple words that I know how to write. :)
Zoo heev lawm mas. You and I need to get together and drink sis. We might have similar story to tell and cry together. LOL
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Nco koj txhua hnub txhua hmo
Dej los tsi nqhi mov los tsi noj
WB txoj kev hlub tsi xav kom ploj
Xav kom tus hlub Kuv tshaj yog koj
Ntshe Dej los yuav nqhis mov los yuav noj
Kuv hlub koj mog
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Zoo heev li os. Yog kuv paub sau ntawv hmoob, ntshai yuav sua kuv cov poem in hmoob xwb. The american words are so limited when trying to express oneself.
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Zoo heev li os. Yog kuv paub sau ntawv hmoob, ntshai yuav sua kuv cov poem in hmoob xwb. The american words are so limited when trying to express oneself.
I will write them in Hmong for you to read sis. The more you read the more you will learn how to write mog.
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Kuv nug koj tias koj puas hlub kuv
Koj hais tias koj hlub ntau npaum cov hnub qub
Cas hnub no wb txoj kev hlub ho tsi zoo li thaum ub
Kuv hlub koj koj hlub kuv
WB kev hlub puas yuav muaj hnub zoo li qub
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Zoo siab hlo mog tus me niam hluas
Xav txog kev zoo thaum wb tseem muaj lub suab luag
Ua neej nyob xav ciaj xwb tsi xav tuag
Xav muaj tus hlub yus thiab tus Tshua
Ua siab ntev ua neeg zoo yeej yuav muaj tus yuav
Sis, tsi zoo lam sau kom koj xyaim read xwb nawb mog.
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Ntuj tso kuv los hlub koj ib zaug
Cas ntuj tsi pub wb los sib tau
Yuav cia wb ua lub neej sib nco dhau
Ua ntej kuv yuav tuag cia kuv kiss koj nqo koj qaub ncaug
Seb lwm tiam wb puas yuav sib tau
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Thanks.
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For my mini - you won't understand this one sis. Lol
Kuv nco koj heev os mini t tus zoo
Hnub tig ua hli hli tig ua xyoo
Yuav tos txog hnub twg mam tau tuav mini tus me zoojzooj
Ntshe kuv yuav tuag mus mam ua dab los yuj
Mam los pw hauv koj xub ntiag tuav raws mini tus zoo
LOL
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Thanks for allowing me to write on your wall sis. Feel free to delete them mog.
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Kev hlub zoo heev tiag thaum sib hlub
Thaum mob siab mob cuag Dej kub
Kuv tsi xav ncaim koj mus os kuv tus hlub
Koj nyob qhov twg koj puas hnov kuv hu
Cas mob kuv siab ua luaj tus hlub
Thov kiss kuv ib zaug koj mam li mus
Yog koj hnov kuv hu.....thov.hl ub thiab nco kuv
Tus uas tso tsi taus vim koj yog tus kuv hlub
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From FMC:
Once in a blue moon
I think of you
There may be million of stars,
but theres only one that shine the brightest
My heart settles like a long awaiting movie
yearning to watch it more than anything
Like the river that never dries up
The blood in my vein still flows greatly
The thought of you bring the critters all over my body
Many years of our memories engraved
the lovely rhymes of your words can still be heard echoing every time i think of you
when i see our posts, i missed every second of it
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You are more than the words I can speak
Every aching pain deep in my soul wishes for you
Even when I wanted to die, I wanted to live for you
Loving you has brought me so much pain
Yet it brought me so much joy at the same time
Every songs bring tears to my eyes
I sit here night after night just waiting for your words
Sometimes, my words go silently
I'm like a homeless person roaming in the night
Looking for a familiar face
Every faces that I see, they are not yours
I walked the street alone
In the dept of my lonely soul
No one can hear my cries
I learned to hide them well
There's a yearning that live inside
No matter, I'll never tell you
I will keep it hidden forever
Until you find me worthy....
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You said that you are here for me
But why do I still feel so alone?
It's so quiet because the world is asleep
While I'm still up thinking of you
In this midnight hours tossing
Wondering where you are at this moment
If you do not hear from me tomorrow
Know that I've disappeared back into the darkness
It is the only place that I belong
No more pain...
I probably will never return again this time
You will not be able to follow me into the dark
I was born to walk this lonely path
It is my fate to be alone forever
Even when I had you my heart was lonely
You could not fix even if you try
Maybe I will see you again, maybe not
But always remember I love you
These are the only words I can't denied
Our meeting was by accident only
It was never meant to be reality
We both knew it would end eventually
Our purposes has been served
Now its time to say good-bye
I'll always remember you
Forget me....
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On a clear blue sky my heart yearns for you
I woke up today with tears in my eyes
The longing for your words are just too much
Day after day, I feel trapped in this world
Not being able to express to you my feelings
Every minute that have keep on slipping away
No matter how hard I tried to hold on
This hollowness inside is too big to fill
Nothing can save me from falling deep
Into a world of no return I will go
Back to the place where you've found me... :'(
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For someone in my dream. I miss you so much. :'( why must you toture us this way?
Yog nco cas tsi qhia
Yuav khaws cia
Txog hnub tsi muaj txoj sia
Puas tsim nyhog ua ib zaug neeg yog zais siab
Kuv nco koj tshaj kuv txoj sia ...
Tim.sis kuv mam li ua ib siab
Mam hlub mam Tshua koj rau lwm tiam
Mus zoo koj mog tus me neeg zoo tus kuv nyiam
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(http://i57.tinypic.com/9jfwhi.jpg)
In the eve of July 4th, I will wait for you by the bay
Until then I will wait for that day
If you decide not to come and see me
Then please set my heart free
When the evening day turns into night
And I look but you are no where in sight
I will know that you are of no more
I will drop my last tear into the shore
Let the ocean carry my last tear away
In hopes that you'll find it someday
Only then you will know my love is true
Everything inside of me for you
One last chance to see your face
Feel your warm embrace
To know that you are real
I'll risk everything for this deal
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Waiting for you is like waiting for the stars to fall
Even when the heart is flooded with tears of heaven's rain
When there's no more room to contain these emotions
It just overflowed running into an endless stream of no return
Waiting for you is like waiting for winter to turn into spring
When flowers do not bloom soon enough to heal the winter bliss
And you're left with nothing but an unforgettable kiss
Every thoughts turn into pages of mounted sad memories
Waiting for you is like me always waiting here in PM
Hoping to catch a glimpse of your handsome face
To feel your words written deep in my soul
Loving you is all I can do, is to wait for you
I'll wait for you until the sea runs dry
Till the birds do not fly in the sky
When the stars no longer twinkle
I'll put out my candle
For you to find your way home
DarkAngel
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Like a Dark Angel
She will wait for the day
When Heaven opens up
To take her back
If so that heaven do not open its door
She will roam this world alone
She will continue to wait
At the same spot of hell
Where you've found her lost soul
She will wait for you to save her
Save her lonely heart from dying
If you truly love her
This is your last chance to save her
Before she disappeared forever
Into the darkness where you can never find her again
:'(
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(http://i57.tinypic.com/9jfwhi.jpg)
In the eve of July 4th, I will wait for you by the bay
Until then I will wait for that day
If you decide not to come and see me
Then please set my heart free
When the evening day turns into night
And I look but you are no where in sight
I will know that you are of no more
I will drop my last tear into the shore
Let the ocean carry my last tear away
In hopes that you'll find it someday
Only then you will know my love is true
Everything inside of me for you
One last chance to see your face
Feel your warm embrace
To know that you are real
I'll risk everything for this deal
Nice pic!!!! Hope he knows which Bay you are talking about. Hahaha. How do you post pic here sis? I wanna show you my dress last night. Lol
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I google the picture and I just uploaded it to tiny pic and post the image. It's very easy and simple.
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I google the picture and I just uploaded it to tiny pic and post the image. It's very easy and simple.
Sis u wanna see how I look last night
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I love you always and forever. Remember my words.
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I love you always and forever. Remember my words.
:love9: :love9: :love9: :love9: :love9: :love9: :love10: :'( :'(
I love you 0ne thousands times more.
:sign19: :sign19: :sign19:
mini's babies -yumyum
Smile sis, just wanna make u smile
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For you sis. :'(
Good night mog
https://youtu.be/oy0--FSNKF8
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Thanks. Its a very nice song.
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Without you baby, I don't think I can make it
The days would only be like a memory
There won't be any blue sky
I won't be able to smile even if I try
You came into my life and life became beautiful
Your love brought me back to life
From the darkness you saved me
You are everything to me, can't you see?
Like a beautiful painting hanging on the wall
Your face imprinted in my mind
For always and forever
We will be together
When the world is dark, I closed my eyes
I can see you inside
There's no others in my heart
We'll never be apart
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:'( :'( :'(
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Dark Angel is it tu siab Monday? :'(
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Hahahaha.... hauv hoob nas thiaj li hnov yus lub hlwb hais lus maj :P
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Peb ua neeg nyob tsi txhob siab phem
Thaum tsi muaj tus cem ces yog luag tsi k
Xyaum hais lus zoo thiaj tsi sib ceg
Thiaj sib nco tso tsi tau tseg
Thiaum pw ua ke kuv thiaj xav hniav koj ob ceg
Thiaj tsi mob mob koj ib ce
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Tailau ntshe Raug koj siab kawg pob?
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For you tailau
Me tais LAU koj puas txawj khaus
Noj ib zaug tag puas tau txaus
Koj laus lawm ntshe plawv thev tsi taus
Ua zoo koj cov me muam pab tsi tau
Ua zoo koj lo hniav poob thiab koj dim.pau
Vim koj yog me tais laus LAU Lol
Oh, koj tseem khav koj yuav nce kuv lub qhov rais
Ntshai tsam LAU lawm.ces khuam koj pob tais
Thaum ntawd yuav mob ob ceg yuav tau hu nai
Nai maum tuaj txog nws tseem yuav muab hlais
Es koj puas tshaj os kuv me tais
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Sorry, I'm not good at writing. I had to use the hmong dictionary. Correct my hmoob if it's wrong. :P
Nplooj siab nco koj tsis pom qab mus qhia rau leejtwg
Nyob hauv lub siab kuv lub muag ntwj
Xav tuag los tuag tsis tau
Thiaj muaj kuv txoj kev nco koj coj los sau
Saib puas muaj hnub koj los nrhiav tau yeem
Koj thiaj li puab hais tias kuv nyob ua tus neeg seem
Tseem nyob tom koj ib leej mus txhob hnub ntiaj teb ua av
Tuag lawm los lub siab yuav nplig mus ua tus kab
Mam rov los nrhiav koj nyob qhov ntuj tsuas
Tsawg tiam los kuv yuav tsis suav
As long as this lifetime wb tau nyob ua ke (sorry, dont know how to write this line in hmong)
Kuv mam li ua lub siab ntev
Yuav nyob tom koj mus txoj thaum lub hnub poob
Vim kuv nrhiav lub qab ntuj toob
Tsis muaj ib tus zoo li koj lawm
Xav qheb kuv lub siab qhia tawm
Rau koj puab hais tias kuv hlub koj
Cia kuv ua koj ib leej nplooj siab xwb os mog
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Sorry, I'm not good at writing. I had to use the hmong dictionary. Correct my hmoob if it's wrong. :P
Nplooj siab nco koj tsis pom qab mus qhia rau leejtwg
Nyob hauv lub siab kuv lub muag ntwj
Xav tuag los tuag tsis tau
Thiaj muaj kuv txoj kev nco koj coj los sau
Saib puas muaj hnub koj los nrhiav tau yeem
Koj thiaj li puab hais tias kuv nyob ua tus neeg seem
Tseem nyob tom koj ib leej mus txhob hnub ntiaj teb ua av
Tuag lawm los lub siab yuav nplig mus ua tus kab
Mam rov los nrhiav koj nyob qhov ntuj tsuas
Tsawg tiam los kuv yuav tsis suav
As long as this lifetime wb tau nyob ua ke (sorry, dont know how to write this line in hmong)
Kuv mam li ua lub siab ntev
Yuav nyob tom koj mus txoj thaum lub hnub poob
Vim kuv nrhiav lub qab ntuj toob
Tsis muaj ib tus zoo li koj lawm
Xav qheb kuv lub siab qhia tawm
Rau koj puab hais tias kuv hlub koj
Cia kuv ua koj ib leej nplooj siab xwb os mog
Awwww not bad at all sis. I cem jnderstjbd yeu rote will. Lol. *tease
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It took me almost all morning to find the words on the internet. :'(
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Kev hlub koj yog kev mob siab tshaj
Tsis muaj hnub ua lub siab yuav kaj
Mus txoj qhov twg los nco koj
Nyob hauv lub siab tsis puab ploj
Hnov koj lub suab sib twj yaj nrog hua cua
Ua rau kuv lub siab cia li xav tuag
Yaj ntshis mus nrhiav kuv mi leej nus
Coj koj los ua kuv tus
Tamsis tu siab vim koj muaj tus lawm
Thiaj li sawv tsab ntawm
Tuaj deev koj lub siab
Siab koj puab tij los ntsia kuv ib plia
Xav hlub nrog koj los ntshai yog npau suav lawm xwb
Thiaj li khaws cia nruab siab ua tus neeg vwm
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Kev hlub koj yog kev mob siab tshaj
Tsis muaj hnub ua lub siab yuav kaj
Mus txoj qhov twg los nco koj
Nyob hauv lub siab tsis puab ploj
Hnov koj lub suab sib twj yaj nrog hua cua
Ua rau kuv lub siab cia li xav tuag
Yaj ntshis mus nrhiav kuv mi leej nus
Coj koj los ua kuv tus
Tamsis tu siab vim koj muaj tus lawm
Thiaj li sawv tsab ntawm
Tuaj deev koj lub siab
Siab koj puab tij los ntsia kuv ib plia
Xav hlub nrog koj los ntshai yog npau suav lawm xwb
Thiaj li khaws cia nruab siab ua tus neeg vwm
Kav tsij sau thiaj txawj mog. Zoo kawg os
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You're going to be my teacher.
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You're going to be my teacher.
Ok sis, I will help you mog. The more you write and read the more you will txawj sau. Ntawv hmong tsi nyuaj.
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Ua cas kuv yuav nco koj ua luaj
Hnub twg koj mam li tuaj xyuas
Tuaj puag kuv rau koj hauv koj xub ntiag dua
Hniav koj puag koj tsi dhuav
Yeem pom koj yeem xav pom dua
Vim koj thiaj yog tus kuv hlub kuv tshua
Txhob cia kuv tos ntev tsam ho muaj tus tuaj xyuas
Ces koj quaj los tsi lo kua muag
Kuv xav tos koj kom txog hnub kuv tuag
Tim sis kuv nco mini xav tau nws tsaug tsuag
Hahahaha
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haha...good one!
hais rau kuv tus sweethoney paub
cov lus no los ntawm yawm saub
kuv yeej khaus thiab loj heev
koj yuav khuv xim tsis tau deev
tsis xav khuv xim ces los ntawm kuv
koj yuav tsum nav twm thiab nuv
los txhos caug ntawm kuv xub ntiag
kuv mam muab koj tuav ib pliag
kuv yuav pub rau koj noj thiab npuav
cia koj noj kom txaus, noj kom ntuav
noj tas nrho, kuv mam muaj koj xyua
khwv ciaj khwv tuag kom txaus ib plua
Yog tsis khaus ces tsis yog txiv neej
qhia rau koj paub kom meej meej
yog koj tsis tau pom thiab tsis tau deev
koj yuav khuv xim thiab yuav seev
xav mag lov?!?! :-* :knuppel2: :2funny:
Haib kawg Tim sis kuv tus prince tseem loj tshaj ntau
Kuv thiaj tseem tso tsi taus
****tease
Very nice tailau
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Carry me in your heart
I want to sleep inside
You can always carry me with you
Even when you are far, I'm close by
We'll always be together
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I'm re-reading all of our letters
The happy moments, the confused, and the sad ones
I think back to the time when we first met
Everything about you was so perfect
I couldn't believe that a man like you could love a person like me
I'm the Dark Angel, but you are the sweet Angel that saved me
We had our moments of happiness and sadness
We were two lost souls destined to meet
Yet, I was the luckiest one
Because you loved me for who I am
Even the bad, ugly, and good
Today, I sat here thinking about our time
It brought tears to my eyes how little time we have left
You could vanish tomorrow, for all I know
I could be gone, only a matter of time
In this little time that we have left
Please remember me always if you dont come back.... :'(
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Letters go unread
Flying with the wind instead
To where I dont know
There may never be a tomorrow
All has been said and done
And now you're gone
What can I say?
I had a dream about this day
I knew it was too perfect
You are my secret
The one ive been keeping
The one ive been dreaming
The end is here
Even if I refused to hear
The words coming from you
Secretly I keep wishing its not true
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I don't regret every moments that we spent
All the sleepless nights waiting for you
The nights staying up with you till morning light
Everything that I did, I did it with love
There hasn't been a moment of regret
The only regret that I have is, if only I could love you more
Than maybe you would still be here with me today
But now those words don't mean anything to you
I'm just talking in my head
I still keep on dreaming...
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u actually have the time of days and nights putting all this together? :idiot2: :2funny:
cas mob siab ua luaj li ;) :D
Mob siab tshaj.. es mob koj lub siab lov? Maybe vim kuv tsis include koj lub npe pob? ;D :P Actually, that poem only took me 5 minutes to write. :)
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tsis nim mob es.... nej cov neeg no quaj qw ntsaj nroo cuag lub neej twb kawg lawm... tsum thiab lau.... mus tso dag tso luag kom lub hnub ntev hmo kaj thiab
I have no idea what you just wrote. lol
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You pretty much lost me at cov neeg. The rest, I have no idea... Maybe it's better that I don't know.. cuz I always have a come back. LOL
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I stared into the sky but I see no stars
It seems like you took them with you
It's late and I can't sleep
Thoughts running through my head
Thousand words ripping my heart into pieces
Thinking back, everything you've told me were lies
Your words of "I love you"
It was never true to begin with
I yearned so much for those words
So I believe everything you told me
I am such a fool... :sad11:
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I can remembered everything as clear as the day and night
Even little things that did not matter
From the smallest details to all the nonsense stuffs
From our favorite colors to our favorite foods
My mind has taken photograph of your words
Kept locked deep inside of my heart
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A new day
A new way
To face
To embrace
The journey just begun
Over the horizon sun
A new life await
Must be fate...
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~Our Love Story~ I leave my story here so that someday you will read and know that it has always been you that I've been searching for all my life...
I've been chasing you like a butterfly
From flower to flower without ever stopping
Hoping to catch a glimpse of your beautiful heart
Words you spit on my screen had me mesmerized
Chasing you from world to world
From heaven to hell
From light to darkness
From lifetime ago to this lifetime
It's because my heart felt you
The moment my eyes met yours
I knew I've loved you before
No doubt I could ever be wrong
For I was dying as the day passed
Not being able to reach your heart
My world fell into a deep despair
Realizing my chance gone
You disappeared from my eyes
Back to where you came from
Sadness overcame my heart
I remained a lonely ghost drifiting among strangers
Then one day, I saw you again
You walked right by and didn't even notice me
I've been reborn with a different face
Patiently, I watched you from afar
Trailing your every threads
Interjecting my words into your posts
I thought to myself "How can I make you see?"
This was my only one chance
I could not live another day if I lose you again
I knew you but you didn't know me
My love, I passed by you so many times
Hoping you would recognize me
Like a past love, you never forget
I felt my chance slipping away once again
The moment you leave, I'll never know
My heart was aching to tell you everything
Even though I did not know you then
I've missed you every single day since you've been gone
Little did I know you've been searching for me as well
You came back for me but I was no longer the same person
I was reborn with a different face and name
Yet you were able to picked me from the rest
Our love was meant to me...
Wished I can turn back the hands of time.
Chasing your every words spoken
Not realizing my heart's broken
Like the wings on my back
Searching you to no avail
Only your footprints left on my wall
Gone you are from me forever
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Into the darkness..I go deep this time.
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~What you meant to me~
From death I was awoken
You raised my spirit back
From the ashes of darkness
You ignited my heart
Brought me back into the light
For a moment it felt like I was in heaven
I forgot what it feels to be living in hell
You saved me that day
A day tattooed into my memory forever
It is you that saved my lonely soul
Before I met you, all the flowers wilted and died
The sun never shine on my side
All the birds flew away
The music stopped playing in my heart
Night and day, it's all the same
Then you came along, as if an Angel sent from above
You were meant to save me
My lonely soul began to followed you around
Following your every footsteps
Every steps keeps bringing me closer to you
You opened your heart to me
And it was beautiful inside
All the flowers began to bloom once again
The sun came out and I felt its warmth
I heard music playing again deep in my soul
It was then that I've decided to opened up my heart
Let you entered into my dark world
A world that only you would understand
An commonality we both shared
No one could ever understand us
I knew that day, I would give you my heart
I promised my heart to only love you
For it has always been you I've been searching for
You were the missing piece to my aching void
I've longed for you even when I did not know of your existence
Everything about me, you know
My weakness
My struggles
My tears
My fears
I've loved you with no expectations
Because my love is beyond this world
It's more than the words I've said to you
It's more than the feelings growing inside of me
It has always been there waiting for you
Yet love itself is never enough
You had a changed of heart
Shot your poison arrow into my heart
Killed everything that was beautiful inside of me
As if I was nothing to begin with
:love9:
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Wow, that was so hard for me write... everything just poured from my heart. :'(
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:-[
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Good-bye Sweet November
A month etched in my heart
Crossed on my calender
Of two crossed star lovers
Waiting to meet again after a lifetime of waiting
The autumn leaves will have fallen off the branches
Yet, she will still be waiting for him who will never come
If it's not meant to be this lifetime, how many lifetime remain?
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As I sit here with my lonely thoughts
Reading all your letters
Tears run down my face
Remembering how sweet it used to be
Two butterflies chasing eachother
Then one day, the wind blew you away
I'm left here alone chasing your scent
From rainbow to rainbow searching for your pot of gold
Every where I looked, your memories and words remain
But no where your face reside.... I miss you.
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Your face is the only one I seek endlesssly
Among a million faces, I searched for only yours
I killed my time by talking non-sense everyday
Trying to numb the pain deep down inside
Trying to forget you even when my heart refused
It is the only way for me to move on...
Reliving those wonderful memories that hurt so much
Each day the pain gets harder to contain
Cutting me inside like a sharp knife
I'm bleeding but I can't die
The feeling of unable to die and unable to live
It is the worst feeling ever....
No matter who I talk to, it's just not the same as If I'm talking to you
Cuz when I talk to you, the world stopped
You make me feel complete in that small moment
I'm lost deep in you
You make everything alright, even pain could not be felt
When I'm with you...
You will always be the one that I love and miss
It doesn't matter who comes before or after you
You are the ONLY one that is capable of reaching my heart
The only one who can love and hurt me so much at the same time
I've never knew these feelings existed until I met you
Cuz no one has ever been able to turn my world around
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I look for your words, I look for your face
Our memories, I can't erase
It's because I love you too much
Everytime we do not touch
There's a burning flame inside
My feelings, I can't hide
Just waiting to explode
Enough to built a road
That leads to your heart
Don't leave me here in the dark
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Love me
Take me
Under your wings
Let's fly away
Under the clouds
We can float
Like two love birds
We can go anywhere
To a place in our dreams
Where time stand still
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When the world is falling on me
Your voice soothe my soul
It gives me peace
It calms my heart
Knowing that when I turn off the light
I'll have you in my dreams
I miss you today
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The light may not shine at your end
It may seem like the world is closing in
You looked and there's no one in sight
All you have is just your lonely self
Struggling to make it through the night
Half awake and half dead
Music is your only window to the world
Playing sad melodies into the dark night
Though I'm far my broken wings can stretched
Pulled you into my shelter where you are safe
Let me catch your falling tears
Give me a chance to paint a new picture for you
A picture with only sunshine and blue sky
Paradise might be far but we have it in our dreams
All you have to do is believe
Don't push me into the darkness
I've saved you once, I will save you again....
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Thanks for all the shares :) love your poems!
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Thanks for all the shares :) love your poems!
Thank you my good friend for reading and giving me thump up for my poems. It will probably be awhile before I have the motivation or will to write another one. Please contribute to my thread if you want. Thank you for being such a great online friend. I hope that we will be good friend outside of Ph one of these days. Take care!
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The day is done
and nights begun
The fake smile I worn
will now now be gone
I hid my sorrow deep inside
I shun myself from prying eyes
the darkness reign from deep within
will I ever know what it's like to hold your hand
I live my life of Shadows past
The darkness in will be my last
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:'( :'(
Even if darkness consumed your soul
I will find a way to save you
Because I am the Dark Angel
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Sorry guess you glimpse at the sorrow side of me.
It was that side that brought you to me..
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and I thank you, you were the dark Angel that saved me.
We saved eachother. The lonely souls always roam together.
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When will this sadness end
Why have this sorrow began
When did all these darkness come in
Why must I endure these pain
When will I finally close my eye
Why must my eye close my life
Will I know what it's like to love
From an angel who's up above
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No one can love this Dark Angel
She was born with no future
She was born with no fate
An fallen Angel from grace
Into the world she will roam alone
Forever until her time is up
Then she will return back into the darkness
Do not love her
Do not follow her
She will only lead you to death...
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I locked my heart for all to see
You came along and set it free
As much as I want us to be
Fate has delt a dirty deed
If deemed that we could never be
Let me hold you in my arms
This is the card that caused the harm
Separating us from each others arm
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I buried you inside my heart
My feeling unreleased
Locked away forever
No one will know
The love I harbored for you
I will never tell a soul
It will die with me
Alone my heart raced against time
Memories of late nights
Catching eachother's words
They are no more
The silence beating of my fingertips
Stroking letters and poetries of rhymes
For no one to see or hear
All faded with the hours of the night
When lovers are sleeping tight
Im still up looking for your face.... :'(
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Your Distraction
All along I thought I was more than just a stranger
Our books so similar, the written pages
The torn pages of our history missing
Trying to filled the blank pages with new memories
Only to realized that Im just someone's distraction
Like an old book, i was put back on the shelve
The pages of my life was not that interesting to be read
Alone I sat on the shelve waiting for someone to pick me
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Perhaps you should
Stop being a tumbleweed
Perhaps you could
Stop playing with the need
To slip away when it's hot
To be distracted and have not
The time to be available
Then be single and capable
Of being loved taken
Only love forsaken
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It protected me from everything
It confined all the pain within
It closed my eyes from everyone
It gave me the power to become someone
You took that protection from me
Released the pain that should not be
Made me see what I never wanted to see
And now I'm weAK from being set free
I want to return to the protection
To hide all the pain again
I want to close these eyes again
I want the power to hide these pain
You hid my cloak from me
The dhadow of the other me
I ask one favor out of all
Will you pierce that dagger into my heart
Release the me from me
For my eternity
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I was just a lonely Angel roaming in this dark place alone
I was not looking for love nor wanted anything from anyone
Just passing by like the ghost on a dark night
Then out of no where our words collided as if it was meant to be
The words I've been longing for coming into reality
I quickly realized you penetrated a part of me I was trying to hide
Uncovering everything that was hidden deep inside
How can this be, something I've protected all my life
I guarded my heart like an unforbidden fortress
Yet, you managed to break down my walls in a second our eyes met
I was so scared so I started to run as fast as I could
Pushed you aside and scared you with all the things that I could never be
I could not accept that a person like you could ever love a person like me
The one who has the ability to set me free
The truth is that I'm just a plain girl with no hopes and dreams
All my life people come and go without a notice
I've failed in life as I've failed in the love department
Once they read the book of my life they casted me aside
I never had the chance to shine through like the bright sun
I'm really good at pushing people away, my best trait
It was not meant to be for me in this lifetime, it's my fate
I will set you free because I'm not the one for you
You will come to see that everything that I told you is the truth
Everything about me, nothing hidden from you
You will see the ugly colors in me soon as you get closer
I'm not a beauty queen nor do my heart posssesed any roses
Inside, it's all dead like the wild flowers on a summer day
All my dreams and hopes, they all faded away
-DarkAngel
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I promised you that I will follow you into the darkness
Even if you choose to roam in hell, I will go with you into the fire
I was willing to sacrafice everything that I've ever known
Whether our moment was only for a few seconds or a lifetime
My promises stand true even through the test of time
But you could not delivered what was promised
Our love quickly disappeared into the sunrise
When you got close you felt too much of my love burning through
You could not take what was growing inside of me for you
One minute you said you loved me, next day you tell me good-bye
You gave me one hell of a coaster ride through it all
Do I regret it? No, not for a second of my life
I saw a part of you that no one could ever see
Even if it's hard for you to believe
What I saw was more beautiful than I could ever imagined
Even when you were hiding it all, I still saw through you
There's not an ounce of ugliness that you speak of
Your flaws was my beauty
Among the glistening stars my love once waited for you
In the dark night, you shine the brighest of all
I'll follow you to where you fall
When you explained that you could no longer love me
You broke everything inside of my world
The love I felt for you became an enemy of my soul
That love now resides in a dark place
No more will I ever succumb to your words
Even if my heart burst into flames
I have no one to blame
-DarkAngel
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Heaven deposited a little bit of sunshine into my eyes today
As I watched the world faded with time, I can see the beautiful clouds of hope
Entering into heaven like the birds that fly so high your eyes no longer can see
All the sadness and sorrows departing from my heart and soul
Have I been given a second chance?
I took a walk down into a path that I onced took 10 years ago
Among the tall grass, I spotted your footprints set in stone
Still engraved as if they never been stepped on
A footprints frozen in time as it appears
We took this trail many times in the past life
A thought occured to me that you were the only one who ever loved me
You protected me with all your might as a man and everything you've known
The love that you've shown me is never hidden from your actions
I felt so safe and protected when I'm with you
As if the world is in the palm of my hands
I'd give anything to feel this one more time
A second chance at love and life
Even if it's for a brief moment that we had to part again
I remembered the day when you had to say good-bye
You told me that I was the most beautiful woman you've ever known
In the turbulance of our love, I had to set you free
For your search was not within me but with someone else
No matter how much I loved you, I could never give you what you seek
The emptiness inside of your heart was hurting me silently
Good-bye was the only solution to salvation
We bid our good-byes at the airport that lonely cold autumn day
I watched as your plane took off and disappeared into thin air
I felt a part of me died with you that day
The man that I love leaving me behind in this lonely world
I wiped my tears as I walked away forever
-DarkAngel
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I miss us
The days and nights
Our words to eachother
I miss the talks
The way you joke
The laughter on my face
I miss the hours
The nights smiling
From ear to ear
I miss your voice
Songs you sang to me
The funny missed verse
I miss your face
My handsome man
In my mind you sleep
I miss what could have been
All lost but not forgotten
Forever in my heart you rest
I miss.....
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This smile is fake
The real me is trying to break free
Show you a part of me
The part that misses you
Trying to escape from my heart
Let me tell you before its too late
My words which you avoided
Hurting so deep I can't hide it
Is it the same for you as for me?
Give me a sign..... :-[
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~Insecurity~
When you had me you didn't know how to love me
Your insecurity only destroyed us
It only pushed me further away from you
Into the brink of darkness
I was falling apart like broken glasses
My world was so dark I can barely breathe
Light became an impossible dreams to reach
Every turn and twist broke me down
My mind and heart was running away from you
Every chances that I get I was drifting away
The more you moved toward me, the more I ran
I kept on running until I fell into a dark pit
You robbed me of my freedom
You robbed me of my hopes and dreams
Your constant accusations drown me in the river of no return
I became only an property with no face
Every words echoed from you is a stabbed to the heart
I was bleeding inside but I was alive
I felt trapped by your insecurity
This insecurity has put a wall between us
A wall so hard and high unable to break free
I don't hear a thing you say to me anymore
I've learned to blocked it all
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Broken Wings
My broken wings even though you were broken
You took me to many places I've never seen
You flew me to a place of heaven in my dreams
You sheltered me from the rain and pain
You were with me through every journey
Though you were bleeding with broken seam
You still gave me warmth during the cold nights
With you on my back, I felt strong
But you were slowly dying from being broken
Even love could not save my broken wings
No matter how much I tried to fixed you
It was time for you to leave me
My broken wings clipped from me
No longer belong and a part of me
I will set you free so you can be reborn
To protect another Angel
I will roam in this darkness without my wings
Never will I ever forget the wings on my back
Broken Wings, yet it was you that flew me out of the darkness
I will miss you, my Broken Wings... :'( :'(
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Alone
I walk this road alone
Passing by everyone, one by one
My demons eating at my soul
Destroying me til I am no longer whole
You found the single piece of me
Put me here so none could see
You mended all the wounds in me
Give me a new reason to be
Now the sorrow of being set free
Leaving me for the demons to feast
I walk this road alone
Passing by everyone, one by one
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Alone you are no more
The black clouds casted away
The road become clearer
Night become day
No longer just a stranger
You have been set free
Pain do not chained you down
Open your wings and fly away
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I don't want to write anymore sad poems. :-[ Every single one of them as been for only one person. I would like to change my style and write more happy and love poems. But I just have so much sadness in my heart and soul that everytime my fingers get to typing.. the words just come out. :-\
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Good-bye. I will no longer write anymore poem in "Into The Darkness". Once a upon a time, it was dedicated to someone special that meant alot to me and it was a way of me expressing my thoughts/heart for him to read but that page is in the past. I am finally able to set all my feelings free from the darkness. Therefore, feel free to write but I will not longer inked in this page.
Thanks everyone for reading and contributing to my poetry journal.
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Don't feel sad. It's amazing when you finally know the truth. Everything that you ever felt just vanished into thin air. That love that you once felt for this person no longer resides anymore. Why keep loving someone who do not love you? This is where alot of us failed in relationship because we don't know how to stop ourselves from loving someone even when they already left us for someone new.
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Thanks for sharing your poems/pieces with us. I hope you'll continue to write, but for yourself. :)
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Thanks for sharing your poems/pieces with us. I hope you'll continue to write, but for yourself. :)
Thank you, tRouble. I appreciate your kind words.
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Thank you, tRouble. I appreciate your kind words.
You're welcome, DA. As one door closes, another opens. Take advantage of it. O0
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The darkness is free
The darkness that is me
Now I can be free to be me
The emotions are dead
The light is timid
My demons are livid
Now you know who I am
The darkness that came
The demons full reign
I'm free to be the demon inside of me
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~Dag Tsis Tau~
Koj pom kuv lub siab vim kuv muaj qheb rau koj
Ib puas tsav yam ua zoo thiab phem
Koj yeej pom tag nyob hauv kuv lub siab
Koj pom tag koj thiab li hloov siab ntsws
Tsis xav hlub tus neeg zoo li kuv
Koj ua rau kuv lub siab tawg tag
Koj lo lus hais thiab hlub thiab nco
Koj Dag tsis tau
Vim nyob hauv koj lub qhov muag nws qhia
Koj tseem dag los koj zais tsis tau koj lub siab
Kuv yeej tsis tau ntsib ib tus neeg zoo li koj
Tus ua muab tau lub hnub thiab lub hli rau kuv
Tamsis muab tsis tau nws txoj kev hlub
Koj cov lus koj hais rau kuv
Koj dag tsis tau kuv mog leej nus
Yam li cov hnub qub nyob puag saum ntuj
Nws niaj hmo ci ntsa iab rau lub ntiaj teb
Thaum i kuv pom koj zoo npaum li cov hnub qub
xav cev tes tuaj muab koj nyiag kiag
Coj los pw ntawm kuv lub xub ntiag
Cia koj ci nyob hauv kuv nraub siab mus ib sim
Hmoov tsis txog kuv plam koj txoj kev hlub
Kuv txoj kev ntshaw poob mus rau koj tsaus ntuj
Kev hlub ua kev mob nyob hauv kuv lub siab
Ntshai yuav tsis hlub leejtwj mus tag kuv ib sim neej
Koj cov lus zoo dag tsis tau kuv...
-DarkAngel
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LMAO!! Is this the google translator that you read? Google definetely need some work. lol
You see me because I have opened for you
A everything good and bad
You can see in my mind
You see all your and emotional changes
No need to love people like me
You make my heart broken
Your word and love and memories
Fraud
Because in your eyes it
You are lying or you can not hide your heart
I never met a person like you
The sun and the moon to me
Now it's love
If you told me
You can not lie I'm naked
Like the stars in the heavens
It every night illuminate the world
I see you as much as the stars
want to be stolen
Or sleeping on my lap
Let your light on my back to a
Unfortunately for me to lose your love
My expectations fell to night
Love in my heart
Fear will not leejtwj to my life
Your best not lie
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Bing is just as bad LOL
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Bing is just as bad LOL
I think it only recognized the simple terminology.
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I think it only recognized the simple terminology.
I think so, like when I want to check on a four letter sounding beginning of a Hmong word, it total displays something else LOL
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Yeah, I wouldn't depend on google to translate a love letter to someone. LOL I had my sister checkspelled everything for me. hahaha
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Yes, not dependable, I bet it was created by men :2funny: jk jk...
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Yes, not dependable, I bet it was created by men :2funny: jk jk...
:2funny: :2funny: Must be.. only they use such terms. :-X Like this? Naked? :2funny:
I never met a person like you
The sun and the moon to me
Now it's love
If you told me
You can not lie I'm naked
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I came back to this place
I searched for your face
I can't feel your embrace
From the darkness you escaped
This used to be my hide away
My words inked every day
In here is everything I wanted to say
Still I couldn't make you stay
From time to time
I still searched for your rhymes
For a short moment you were mine
But loving you was a crime
We refused but had to say our good-byes
Some nights I still cry
My hope born but die
Only time will tell me why
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(http://i59.tinypic.com/mljt08.jpg)
~Into The Darkness~
My lost Angel I came to set you free
Fly away from this place
Never return back into the darkness
You were never mine to keep
Your broken wings unable to fly
I mended your wings
Lost in the dark you felt my touch
I gave you light
I sheltered your heart from pain
Gave you what I thought was love
Yet love alone was not enough
You still wanted to break free
Into the darkness you were broken
I found you when you were vunerable
I put back your pieces
Now I'm setting you free from this place
There's another Angel waiting for you
Fly to her and forget about me
Into the darkness is where I will remain
My home for eternity
From today I will no longer look for you
My broken angel
The angel of my dreams
Fly away from my heart forever..
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Wow, that blew my mind!
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Thank you. I think that's pretty much all I wanted to say on this thread.
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Wow! You've become so good at writing poems, now.
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Wow! You've become so good at writing poems, now.
So, are you saying I wasn't before? ;D Thanks for stopping by my autumn love.
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Yep, stay away from this Dark Angel if you still want to live. lol
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So, are you saying I wasn't before? ;D Thanks for stopping by my autumn love.
I'm saying that you're at your very best, now, my Angel Love.
A dark Angel
Beautiful and tall
A leather suit
Strapping on with the hottest look
A leather whip
Compliment her angel lips
Ready to strike
Any man with desire
I'm willing to follow you to the dark side
If you'd agree to be my bride
You're the one I've been searching for
Long before I was born into the world
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Thank you my autumn love for the nice compliment. ;)
Here you are on my page
Coming to set me free from this cage
My hero, cwjmemdub
The one kuv xav hlub
I've been waiting for you
All the planted clues
You finally found them
I left you a rose with a stem
Now that you are here at last
I want to make you forget the past
Let's make a new start
Just you and me, my autumn heart
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My angel of all angels
This is our moment
My mind has been filled with sorrow
Though it's worth the patience
I've loved you in my heart
From a glimmer distance
Even in the dark
You shine like the sun's radiance
You still look the same
As then, a long time ago
It's worth the pain
I've endured and never a moment thinking of letting you go
Now, I just want the world to stop
Crystalize this very moment
We're so in love
I can feel the fire in side my heart burns
We will light up the altar
Makes everyone go merry
I will carry you as high as my shoulders
Go into the limo with the sign " NEWLY MARRIED "
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I wrote this many years ago. Didn't realized that someday I would become the Dark Angel... funny
(http://i58.tinypic.com/14d0js5.jpg)
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I wrote this many years ago. Didn't realized that someday I would become the Dark Angel... funny
(http://i58.tinypic.com/14d0js5.jpg)
Wow, to be able to see that far to the future is amazing.
https://youtu.be/jqMG3VR5PP4?t=114
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Beautiful
Thank you, SweetHoney.
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SweetHoney
Or whether it's sour
I will be
In love with you forever
If you could love someone
Without a heart to love
The Scary Crow with chlothes all torn
From the Wizard of Oz
No heart to change
No heart to cheat
This orange
Will always be sweet
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Sure, this is from SweetHoney to CMD... :D
I am the sweethoney on a summer days
When you have a taste of me you won't want to go away
I bring to you the sweetness of my nectar
The sweethoney in a flower of pleasure
The sweetness of me will live inside of you forever
Everytime you think of me, you'll remember
Just one taste and you'll be in paradise
So you better recognize
When your heart is in sorrow or in pain
Let my sweetness color you like paint
I'll paint your soul with my sweetness
You are my weakness
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Here without you
The mystery man I made up in my head
I envisioned you to be perfect in every way
In the darkness I waited for you to become real
Here without you
My deepest thoughts tremble inside of my heart
Words locked deep inside of this dark mind
Aching to be set free from this place
Here without you
Loneliness dwelled in my every being
Reaching only to find emptiness above
Ascending back into the darkness forever
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SweetHoney
On Spring or Summer
Wasps or bees
As long as you're a lover
Even in Indian Summer
I know you're still sweet
It's almost Winter
You're still pollinating all the flowers to carry seeds
I'm so lonely
I need you to relief my pain
If you could make me happy
I'll pour out my love to you by as much as the grains of the sand
If SweetHoney
Lives inside me forever
I will let you be
My only lover
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SweetHoney, you are on your own from here on. Copy and past your poem for him. :2funny:
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Awww so sweet of you. Sorry I dont write poems.
Thank you so much. You don't have to write anything.
Your words already reduced my pain in half.
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Darkness is calling me home
A place only I know of
A place no one can see
In here is where i feel safe
My walls closed off to the world
No one can look inside
I do not belong to the light
Darkness is where I reside
Forever until my time comes
I buried my heart and soul here
I buried my words of longing here
Everything of me, died with this darkness
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Wow! I thought you didn't know how to write poem.
That's a great piece.
SweetHoney
I can understand
You want to guard your heart
Most people would wish us to be lame
Cause our hearts to scar
If your heart is given to me
I'll guard it twenty four seven
That doesn't mean you won't be free
In fact, I will take orders from you like a servant
My IQ is below average
So a player I'll fail
I still like the way of the savages
Use only sign language to show and tell
Taking people for granted
Is on the top of my most hated list
I'll worship you just to be able to plant
The most beautiful love that will cause me to be missed
We'll follow each other everywhere
Even to heaven together
I'll comfort your wary heart to have confidence to share
What will be our most beautifully written love letters
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I wasn't good either when I started writing. I'm sure you will get better because you're already so good.
SweetHoney tus mi neeg ntxim hlub
Yog kuv ua tau li lub siab xav ces kuv yuav ua koj lub hnubqub
Ntawm txoj kev hlub yeej muaj rau koj tiag
Tabsis vim twb muaj lwm tus pw hauv kuv xubtiag
Tus neeg ntawd tuav kuv ruaj npaum zia
Tsuas yog nws tsis txawj hlub es kuv ho tsis txawj qhia
Thiaj kho siab ua luaj no
Seev npaum cas los zoo li tus dej ntshiab tsis yeej qhov nro
Yog lam tau tus neeg qabzib li koj los ua kuv tug
Ntshe yuav nco nco nruab hnub hmo ntuj tsis xav nrug
Tes khi taw khi lawm ces yuav ua ib siab
Txawm tias yuav niaj hnub nyob nrog lub kua muag iab
Neeg ib lub siab ces yuav ua tsis taus siab phem
Tiamsis tau nrog tus neeg muaj kev hlub li koj tham ces ua rau kuv tsis meej pem
Xav tas los xav thiab tias kom koj yog kuv tus hlub tiag
Tus npau suav no ntshe yuav ua rau kuv quaj nco koj xyov yuav txog thaum twg mam ntsiag
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Yog tias tiam no wb ua nkauj muam nraug nus
Lwm tiam koj tau los ua kuv tus
Kuv mam khaws nkaus koj cov lus zoo
Puag pw thiab ntsaws rau hauv qab hauvncoo
Nco ntsoov tsis pub ploj
Txog ntua rau lub hauv toj
Tias kuv mi SweetHoney qabzib
Lub siab yog hav kab tsib
Nws tau hais dabtsi lawm
Yeej yuav ua kom tawm
Lwm tiam kuv yuav tos ntsoov
Seb thaum twg nws yug los rau kuv txoj hmoov
Yuav qawm lias nws puag rau xubntiag
Qhia rau nws tias " tiam tag los wb kev sib hlub muaj tiag"
" Tiam no tau koj lawm seb lub suab quaj puas yuav ntsiag "
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Bravo.. It took me a whole hour just to read the hmong words.. .Oh, I love it!! Thanks! O0 :smitten:
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Sorry tijlaug cwjmemdub, kuv tsi keej sau poem li koj nawb.
Koj nyuam qhuav pib sau xwb es koj twb sau tau zoo npaum no
Yog tias koj sau ntev mus koj hajyam yuav ua rau kuv siab kho.
Kuv mi leej muam zoo lus
Cov lus koj hais no tsis yog lus nkauj muam nraug nus
Koj tej lus koj muab hais pub
Yog lus rau cov nkauj cov nraug sib sib hlub
Lo lus lwm tiam ces lam muab hais deev siab kom txhob lwj
Kom lub plawv txhob ua aws ua rwj
Qhov zoo tshaj ces cia wb sib hlub rau tiam no
Wb tau ua txij ua nkawm li luag lwm tus thiaj yuav tsim wb txoj kev sib nco
Tiamsis yog muaj lwm tiam tiag
Txhua txhua tiam tom ntej kuv yuav thov yug los pw hauv koj lub xubntiag
Mloog koj lub plawv dhia wb txoj kev sib hlub
Kom tsim nyog wb rov los sib nrhiav los ua khub
Txawm tias koj yuav tuav kuv ruaj npaum zia
Kuv txaus siab nrog koj nyob mus ib txhis kom tag kuv txoj sia
Ncaim mus ua dab ua tsov lawm los
Tseem yuav mus ncig toj roob hauv pes tos
Vim yuav hlub tsis taus leej twg ntxiv lawm
Thiab yuav khaws lub zoo sij hawm
Rov rau kuv mi muam qabzib ib leeg
Nov yuav yog txhua tiam ntawm wb txoj dabneeg
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Koj yog luag tus
Kuv yog luag li
Lub siab ua kaus ntsus
Lub plawv quaj dhi
Yog tsis sib tau tiam no
Lwm tiam los ntshe Tswvntuj yuav tsis pub
Kom kuv tau los nyo
Rau koj lub xubntiag hlub
Cia tsis txhob sib pom yuav zoo dua
Vim pom tag ntshe lub siab yuav uv tsis taus
Kuv txawm tsis zoo li nraug Mab nraug Sua
Los yeej zoo li tus mi nraug Hmoob phim nrog koj kwv ib lub kaus
Cwjmem tsis muaj duab nyob social media
Pebhmong tsis pub tso cov nyob personal pc
Thiaj tsis tau tshawb cia
Los rau SweetHoney tau pom thiab nco kom tag ib txhis
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Kuv mi SweetHoney
Cas koj yuav hais tau lus tu siab ua luaj
Kuv xav pom koj happy
Tsis xav pom koj quaj
Kuv tsis xav muab kuv duab mus tso rau social media
Txawm koj pom los koj yuav tsis ntseeg xav tias yog tso ntxias
Ntshe yuav tau kom PebHmong pub upload directly from personal pc
Muaj neeg xav pom cia li attache rau pc ris
Tib pliag xwb koj yeej pom lawm
Saib tag mam muab rho tawm
Ces twb zoo li wb sib ntsib lawm tiag
Tiamsis thov tsis txhob nyiag
Muab coj mus tso rau lwm qhov
Rau lwm tus pom ua kev kub ntxhov
Vim hom neeg tsis easy
Yog muaj teebmeem ces lub siab yuav khis
Ua li koj tso koj li pub kuv saib puas tau
Kom kuv khuvxim koj thiab raug koj hau
Kuv nyiam ua neeg nyob nrog kev kho siab
Yog koj kam no xav rau kuv koj tus ntxhiab thiab
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Sorry for hijacking your thread, dear Sweet Angel. ;)
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Sorry for hijacking your thread, dear Sweet Angel. ;)
I don't mind it at all.. Use it.. I don't even post in this thread anymore. LOL
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If I was to give a little more
If I was to not show so much
What if I was to hide a little bit
What if I didn't demand so much of your time
Would this bring you back?
If I was to show you only strength
And hide all my weakness
If I was to console you and forget about myself
Even if I was also dying inside
Would this make you see?
If I was to pretend that I am fine
If I was to mend your broken heart
What if I was to give you the stars
Have the ability to make you forget
Would you see that my love is true?
If I was able to bring you out of the darkness
Give you the light to see
If I gave you my broken wings
What if you were able to fly out of here
Would you fly back into my heart?
Forever you flew out of this darkness...
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SweetHoney
Txhob tu siab mog mi leej muam ntsuag nos
Leej twg lub neej los yeej tsis sib dhos
Kev ua si laug hnub laug hmo tsis yog kev plhom moj
Nws yog kev lam hlwb lam cua kom txhob dhuav txoj kev khwv noj
Kev hlub kuv yeej muab tau rau koj kawg
Muaj muam coob zoo dua qhov muaj tsawg
Kuv mam txais koj los ua kuv tus mi muam ntxawm
Vim txoj kev hlub twb muaj rau koj lawm
Yog hnub twg kuv mi muam kho siab
Xa xov rau nws mi nus es mam so nws lub kua muag iab
Yuav tsis pub nws raug thuam los raug tsim txom
Yuav tiv thaiv nws ntawm luag lub ntsis ntaj ntsis phom
Yuav raug mob raug ntsaj cia rau tijlaug ib leeg
Tijlaug mam ris koj tej hmoov phem thaiv kom txhob zeeg
Kuv mi muam thiaj tau noj qab haus huv
Nyob ua lub neej nplua nuj muaj qoob loo muaj tsiaj muaj txhuv mog
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No matter where I go.. I keep coming back to this place. In here I feel safe. No pain can penentrate my heart...
Darkness falls over me
So dark I can't see
No stars in the sky
No one can hear me cry
Lost forever in this darkness
Nothing but blackness
In here is where I belong
It will prevent me to do any wrong
The stars has faded from my eyes
It's time to say good-bye...
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Tijlaug, while I was driving to work, I was thinking of a poem to write for you about my parents and I was crying and couldn’t’ see the road clearly LOL
Kuv tus me nus cwjmemdub tus zoo lus
Koj puas paub thaum yus niam yus txiv tuag tag tsi muaj tus hlub
Kuv txiv yogi b tug coj plaub hais ntug nws lub tsev kwvtij neej tsa niaj hnub tuaj tsuj
Thaum nws tuag tag nws lub tsev nyob txias to tsi muaj tus tuaj txog
Yus tej neej tsa hu yus mus noj ib pluag los yus tsi nrog luag muaj lub ntsej muag luag
Vim tias thaum twg yus pom yus txiv tej neeg ua rau yus lub siab quaj
Kuv tej neej tsa hlubhlub kuv kawg yog kuv hais ces kojyeejpaub lawv
Tim sis cia wb sib paub li no xwb thiaj tsi sib ncawg
Ua tsaug koj tseem lees kuv ua koj me muam ntxawm
Txawm wb tsi sib paub los kuv zoo zoo siab tsi paub kawg
Thaum twg koj me muam ntxawm muaj kev nyuaj siab mam nco ntsoov qhia kuv me nus ntxawg Cwjmemdub tus zoo zoo lus
Sweethoney hlub nws me nus cwjmemdub os.
Kuv mi muam ntxawm tus mi siab zoo
Txoj kev ua ntsuag yeej tsis yoojyim
Tsis muaj niam muaj txiv ces zej zog yeej nroo
Ntshai tsam yus thov luag noj luag haus mus ib sim
Koj txiv ncaim lawm
Koj tseem ho tsis yog ib leeg tub
Thiaj tsis muaj neeg xav cawm
vim luag tej niam tsev ntxub
Ntshai tsam koj mus
Thab luag tej txiv
Tej nyab tej nus
Muab tsis tau lub ntsej muag tiv
Luag thiaj li saib
Koj tsis rau nqi
Cia koj mus ua dab ua tsov luag tu npua tu qaib
Niaj hnub niaj hmo quaj pos muag nti
Li cas los
Koj twb ntsib koj mi nus lawm
Nws yeej zoo siab txais tos
Koj txhua lub sijhawm
Yog koj tsis muaj kev
Nyuab siab ntxhov plawv
Rau rau siab taug kev
Txhob quav dej quav cawv
Ua lub neej
Kom xws luag
Thiaj tsis muaj neeg pheej
Saib tsis taus ntsuag
Yog koj ho
Nyuab siab ntxhov plawv
Tus mi nus koj nco
Mam tuaj tuav koj tes rawv
Rub koj mus
Rau lub neej kaj
Kom koj siab tus
Txhob mob txhob ntsaj
Nco ntsoov
Koj mi nus hlub koj heev
Txawm tsis yog wb hmoov
Los koj mi nus yuav tsis pub koj seev
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I spread my wings and fly to heaven
It is my time to leave this world
No longer bounded by earth
Where I'm going it's beautiful
No more suffering and pain
My broken one, good-bye
Someday I will search for you again
I will come back to you
I may not be the one you've searched for
But you've been the one for me
Somewhere in time I know we will meet
This is not our time
Our love was doom from day one
It was not meant to be
I'm sorry for hurting you...
Forget about me..
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In the darkness I hide
I buried your face
I buried the memories
Forever in the darkness it remain..
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I felt a moment of happiness
I felt love for a moment
I felt a moment of tranquility
Then that moment slipped away
And I'm back in the darkness
You see my smile
You hear my laughs
They are just for show and tell
Deep inside, I'm already dead
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~Once Upon In a Dream~
Our fate collided
In the star, it has been decided
Feelings which can't be denied
Life formed even when hearts died
So I took a chance on love
Based on what I was feeling of
A love born out of desparation
A time of realization
My journey to a world of unknown
Even when I was traveling alone
A chance I took upon myself to see
Once my heart was set free
Only to realized it was in my mind
I was never your rare find
You had plans, it was never with me
Somehow I wanted to believe
I felt like the last resort
My dreams cut short
When I knew of your plans
You became the man
Once Upon In a Dream
A love fading it seem..
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Darkness consumed my heart
Tearing everything inside apart
The light no longer glow
I have nothing to show
Everything inside all dead
Will this be my last thread?
:-[
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Darkness consumed my heart
Tearing everything inside apart
The light no longer glow
I have nothing to show
Everything inside all dead
Will this be my last thread?
:-[
My Angel, why are you so consumed with grief? :'(
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My Angel, why are you so consumed with grief? :'(
Grief is eating me inside out like a parasite.
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When the ocean beat in my heart
I felt the raging storm crashing in
Carrying me away into the night
Far away I will ride these waves
To a place not of this of world
A place of no time and memory
I want to leave my identity
Which is lost in time
Never to be remembered
Into the darkness I sailed away
The sunset dissapeared out of sight
Only the waves bouncing back and forth
To where I go will not matter
There's no destinations or plans
Just riding forever on these waves
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Moments when I felt weak I had to be strong
So I bottled everything and hide it away
Into a place so dark it can never escape
In the darkness I know it will be safe
Away from reality
My immortality
Losing the past of me
Myself forever dead
My heart bled
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Into the darkness, my bleeding heart locked away
The scorching pain lingering deep inside
Burning inside is the flame of love
Burning out of control
Wishing for words I could not say
Frozen in a place of no time
Gone forever are the beautiful smiles
~DarkAngel
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Our love grew like the vines tangled inside of me
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Darkness folded my eyes
I don't want to die
Yet everything is dead inside
I felt my heart crumbled
Torn into pieces
of you and me..
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In the street I walked with broken wings
The night is dark and cold
No signs of you anywhere
From the darkness you flew away
She stole you from under my wings
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Into the darkness I hide my heart
Never will anyone tear it apart
The very piece of me stayed hidden
Like a fruit that is forbidden
My heart will never show
The me only a shadow
The pieces Im trying to mend
A fake smile I will pretend
The world will never know
Waiting for the wind to blow
Blow my heart into another place
A place I can never feel your embrace
Into the darkness I will killed my love
Once upon I dreamed of....
~DarkAngel
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Fallen into darkness
My broken wings bled
Trying to break free
Unable to break these chains
Forever chained by fate
No one can save me
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Into the darkness I fell deep
These feelings do not sleep
Burning inside is the pain
It makes my eyes rain
All I have are my words
Which you have heard
Now I'm bleeding
Down on my knees pleading
Unworthy of your love
I cursed the heaven above
Why did he send you to me?
Only to make my heart bleed
The pain is eating me away
Trying to bring back the day
Knowing I could never
You are gone forever
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In starvation of your love
i found myself going back
into the darkness where I've been found.
You came to me in my dreams
standing there in flesh
yet disappeared when I reached for you.
So many nights, I hid my heart
afraid to show you
beneath this smile, tear drops.
Why must I followed you like a ghost?
when a part of you already died
trying to escape my thought.
In silence I mourned our love
once a upon a beauty
now faded into the darkness.
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Your love came like the wind
It wrapped around me so tight
Embracing every part of me
Drowning in my heart
When it left, It took all of me
Everything inside could never be found
It's never going to be the same
From the first "Hello"
I'm left here still standing at the same spot
Thousand miles away, you've moved on
So many miles washed away between us
Still I'm trying to catch up but could never
My dreams shattered around me into pieces
One by one, all broken into nothing
Loneliness engulfed my soul into the darkness
Where I will die
~DarkAngel