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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: kbox on July 22, 2015, 12:14:40 AM
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I hide my poetic side from the world for many years somehow, someway, someone got me writing again so I will rant the other side of me here.
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I hope you will share many more with us. :)
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I hid this part of me from the world to see
Too scared the world will make fun of me
I blame myself for all my weakness
Always asking myself for forgiveness
Never asking what the world see of me
Always wondering if I would ever be free
To some they see of this as weak
To me I see this side is sweet
An now my doors are opened wide
I spread my arms as if i can fly
Free to express this side of me
Free for all to see that this is me
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I don't want to hide this part of me
I want you to see and believe
That my words are true
I'm every part of you
Whether you leave or stay
I'll always remember this day
I get to travel this road
Our poems we wrote
Don't hide yourself away
Like wearing an mask in a play
Let your heart shine
You will be fine
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I closed the real me off to the world
I put myself in my own little world
I walk through life an empty shell
Longing to climb out of this well
I lost track of time and of me
Years gone by for me to see
Yearning for this coming day
Slowly climbing to get away
When I heard her crying call
I know I will scale up the wall
Now I’m free to wipe the tears
No more crying because laughter is all I hear
One day true I will see you
To take away all of your blues
You were hurt so deep inside
I want to be there by your side
I want to take you away from all these pain
But first I must fight me within my brain
One day true I will see you
To take away all the blues
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As a journey comes to an end
I will look ahead never to waiver, never to bend
I walk unto a new beginning
I challenge this path never yielding
No matter how big, no matter how tall
I’ll climb those wall and conquer them all
I face this path given to me
I’ll stand up tall holding this degree
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I hope so. O0
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ME
I detest this side of me
The side that everyone wants to see
Be the good and proper son
So the community can see you as one of their own
Accept their philosophy and belief
Forget all about you and your own personality
You are the fair child that is all you can be
Your life is not for you to see
Your ambition and dreams will never be your call
For you are one of them that is all
Shatter yourself to be rebuild
In the image of all their guilt
To follow the footsteps of those before me
Shackled to these tradition never to be set free
An empty she'll for them to fill
Forget who you are and bend to their will
The life of a caged bird
All the cries never to be heard
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A history that you can't escape
The future they want you to shape
I know it's hard on you sometimes
You feel like you've commited a crime
Locked in prison like a good son
It has been decided and done
It was long before you were born
Your parent has sworn
The oath to your clan
Your futured already planned
Hard living with expectations
When you are their only foundation
Be patience and the time will come
Soon they will succomb
To all the new changes of today
Then you will be set free and you can fly away
-DarkAngel
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Can I ever be free from this dream
The me you see is a figment of everyone's dream
I lost myself in this chaosity
This me has lost all of its purity
The eye you see is not the true me
The smile I make is to fake thee
I search through time to find the real me
All I see is the real me can no longer be
Finally finding the bed
The real me is there eternally dead
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Sorry you got to see this part of me that I want be free from.
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:'( :'(
I see you when I look into your eyes
The man I want to see is standing in front of me
You are more than just a man, the soul inside
I'm trying to bring the you outside
I don't want you to hide anymore
Come with me, we'll watch the shore
Catch the waves crashing against the rock
Forget the time on the clock
It's just you and me here together
We'll watch the surnrise forever
The real you is the one inside my eyes
So please don't try to hide
I see through your heart a thousand times
The one I've been sharing my rhymes
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MY ANGEL
You are the light that has guided me
Through all my roughest and toughest time
Because of you I will forever be set free
You comfort me no matter when or time
I wish to give you all you've given me
This will be me who sets you free
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I closed my eyes and I felt the pain
When I opened my eyes I saw you
You were standing there with a smile
Everything became worthwhile
When the night becomes dark
I looked up and see no stars
I closed my eyes and I see your face
Shinging the way to a heavenly place
The storm raged inside of my heart
I'm drowing with out a life jacket
You became the anchor
My prayers has been answer
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You were my dream, my eternity
Gave you my time, my infinity
You held me near but push away
As we talk you sound dismay
You hid so much from me
Have you wonder how things would be
You lied directly to my face
I was your substitute in his place
My eyes are now opened
After my heart has been broken
Deuces
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Told you that I was a cow but you didn't believe me...moo moo.. ::)
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Told you that I was a cow but you didn't believe me...moo moo.. ::)
LOL you my sexy cow. LOL you can mooo all you want. LOL :2funny:
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LOL you my sexy cow. LOL you can mooo all you want. LOL :2funny:
Im just a hippo... :-\
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Im just a hippo... :-\
then I'm the elephant for you. LOL
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then I'm the elephant for you. LOL
Great! :2funny:
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Great! :2funny:
LOL should edit that last line. LOL
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Why?
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Why?
LOL it kinda sound weird now that I'm rereading it. LOL
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Put vow in it.
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I fought this war for far to long
Blood, sweat and tears now I have none
I sit upon this shattered wall
Wondering if I will ever walk the heavenly hall
As I sit here my breath draws shorter
I just watch the reaper coming closer
the war long fought will now be over
This side of me has now grown colder
The other side of me will be stronger
I leave my heed unto me
Never waiver for I can no longer be the savior
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Why do I put myself through all this
The pain of everything crushing me
Can I shoulder all these pain again
To cover everything with my smile
No one will know that I'm still bleeding
The wound is hidden from everyone's eye
How many daggers are still embedded in me
How am any sacrifice must I make
To free myself from all this pain
How long must I bleed before I can see
That my demons are eating me from me
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At the end of a tunnel there's always light
Believe in yourself even if you lose sight
The end is nearer than you think
Maybe even within a blink
Your heart is bleeding with stain of blood
You feel like you're drowning in a flood
Sleepless nights you stayed awake
Waiting for the demons to take
You feel traped inside this urge
The pain feels like an agony surge
Fear not my good friend
You're almost to the end
Once you reach the light
You will take your flight
You will fly away from this darkness
This I promise
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I'm sorry that I could not save you
I'm just an Angel with broken wings
I wanted to take your pain away
I wanted to mend your broken pieces
All I did was pushed you away
My beauty is not what you looked for
I'm just a troll underneath this Angel cloak
In the darkness is where I belong, under the bridge
You imagined me to be the beautiful Angel
Yet the moment our eyes met, you saw the darkness
The ugliness of me crawled out underneath
I couldn't hide my true self from you
All that beauty you imagined disappeared
Into the sunset my beauty faded away
I was nothing but just an ugly Angel
I saw it in your eyes, I felt it in your voice
This is the dark part of me I tried to hide
You didn't believed me when I told you
You broke down my walls only to find
An broken Angel badly bruised
I'm sorry that I could not mend you
Every part of me wanted to hold you
Our moments seared forever in my heart
You are free to search for your Angel of Beauty :-\
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Your beauty is true to me
All you are is what I see
Your loving touch has set me free
You will be forever part of me
You held me near
Your beautiful beat I hear
Your embrace forever I will take
I never want to wake
My time with you is forever true
My heart is yours forever more
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:'( :'(
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:'( :'(
don't worry, the day will come.
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The part that you're trying so hard to hide
I want to pry and come inside
I want to break down your pride
Take you on this journey ride
The part that you do not speak of
I want to erase the bad and filled it with love
I am the Dark Angel sent from above
I came to set you free like a white dove
Soon.. I will penetrate through that part in which you tried so hard to hide.. In your heart, I will reside..
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Best of luck...hehe no one has broken it yet. Lol
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Best of luck...hehe no one has broken it yet. Lol
Yes, perhaps.. it is only my wishful thinking but it's okay to wish and dream. Though I may not be the right person who can break free of you. I hope that some day, there is a special girl that will be able to destroyed every little pieces of that darkness and blast it into outter space. Filled it with only sunshine and happy memories. The moment when you reflect back and could not remember the agony pain. You will know that she has conquered that part of you. That is my wish for you, my good friend.
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Best lof luck to all who will try. O0 just becareful of the repercussion. ;D
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Best lof luck to all who will try. O0 just becareful of the repercussion. ;D
LOVE is about taking chances... even knowing that nothing will come out at the end. Even if it means getting your heart broken. LOVE is worth it.
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LOVE is about taking chances... even knowing that nothing will come out at the end. Even if it means getting your heart broken. LOVE is worth it.
just a hint...you will encounter...my darkness
https://youtu.be/E2L8BMv7028
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You've seen my weakness
You've seen my darkness
The things I tried to hide
They are locked deep inside
I dare not to show them
Like a rose with broken stem
I am full of hidden thorns
This is who I am when I was born
Into the fire, my heart is lost
A path I was meant to crossed
You've seen the devil
My ilfe is lethal
I don't want to hide anymore
I want to love you, I swore
Find me baby
Don't let me die in this dark valley
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Into your eyes, I will hide
Into your heart, I will die
Just to be inside
To feel your loving tide
I searched for your face
I missed your embrace
You left without a trace
I felt displaced
Your words I chased
Your name erased
I am lost in space
I missed this place
Our words stand still
Reading it gives me chill
You had me with your skill
My style you had to killed.. :nono:
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Here I am in front of you
Looking into your eyes
I see stars inside
Your smile is soft
Handsome under the sunlight
The time is right
Your voice carried me away
I drowned in your kiss
You are the one I miss
You held my hand
You captured my heart
I don't want to part
Our eyes locked in time
No words need spoken
I am no longer broken
The side you hide
I broke through your wall
I won't let you fall