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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: Json on February 10, 2014, 05:27:02 PM
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For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter
What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour
Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract
So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory
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It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom. :-\
Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... .. ??? ^-^
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It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom. :-\
Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... .. ??? ^-^
I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.
We can to a happy piece together. Your call. O0 :)
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What a beautiful poem. :)
Thank ya generously ma'am.
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For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter
What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour
Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract
So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory
Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.
But a nice piece indeed.
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Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.
But a nice piece indeed.
I hear you PL. I appreciate your insight. O0
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I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.
We can to a happy piece together. Your call. O0 :)
Was that a clue? Hehehe. :D
Sure. That's fine. ;D
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Was that a clue? Hehehe. :D
Sure. That's fine. ;D
That was not a clue. I told you already. O0
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I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym :-*
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I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym :-*
A date with the gym. Me too. O0
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That was not a clue. I told you already. O0
I know. I was just joking. :2funny: :P
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I know. I was just joking. :2funny: :P
You hurt my feelings again. :'( Why I ought to :knuppel2:
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+1. Very nice, Json! If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her. But I really like your poem. So much emotions flow from it. I love it.
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+1. Very nice, Json! If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her. But I really like your poem. So much emotions flow from it. I love it.
Thanks Lilly. Maybe one day I'll ask but I'm kinda sure of the answer already from the non verbals. O0
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Json, you can ask through me again. ;D :D
What are you implying and what do you mean "again"? Why I ought to :knuppel2: ;)
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Oh, please do ask me! I want to play cupid! :D :D
Seems like you already know the question I want to ask. So give me an answer. ;D O0
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Let me sharpen my arrows. ;D :D
:2funny: If I could, I would hug you. I don't blame you if you miss. O0 ;D
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U can try hugging your screen. What the... hey now, it's a two way street here. :2funny:
My screen is flat. I rather hug my fluffy pillows. You can do the same, you've seen my picture. Imagination yo :D
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Love is cruel and it laughs in your face
It makes you learn the hard way
You’ll end up walking alone in disgrace
A memory in which you want to erase
If you feel your heart going under
Don’t let it wander
Don’t give in, keep it together
Stay flat, keep yourself anchored
Don’t expect to play by the rules in this game
You can try but you’ll end up a fool with yourself to blame
I know from experience and I learned from the pain
So I vow to never fall in love again, I refrain
I tried many times before
Every time I take a chance my heart ends up on the floor
I’m tired, I can’t take it anymore
I’m destined to be alone, this I’m sure
It’s not worth the heartache
It’s all give and no take
It’s not worth the hearbreak
It’s all fake
Who needs love?
I need love :sad11:
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Maybe I'll tell you one day. Thanks for the warm words. :)
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Json, don't let no woman or a heartbreaks stopping you from finding the special gal because once you do it's worth it. Trust me on this.
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Saibadee. Di Di... Proudlao! O0
Json is Jai noy and hum noy nor ST ;D
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Love is cruel and it laughs in your face
It makes you learn the hard way
You’ll end up walking alone in disgrace
A memory in which you want to erase
If you feel your heart going under
Don’t let it wander
Don’t give in, keep it together
Stay flat, keep yourself anchored
Don’t expect to play by the rules in this game
You can try but you’ll end up a fool with yourself to blame
I know from experience and I learned from the pain
So I vow to never fall in love again, I refrain
I tried many times before
Every time I take a chance my heart ends up on the floor
I’m tired, I can’t take it anymore
I’m destined to be alone, this I’m sure
It’s not worth the heartache
It’s all give and no take
It’s not worth the hearbreak
It’s all fake
Who needs love?
I need love :sad11:
Very nicely written, Json. So sad. :(
Never give up on love
It can occur at any time
Can happen at any place
When love is discovered
It can be magical and wondrous
Yet painful and cruel
What you decide to do with it
Is all within your hands
Just follow your heart
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Thanks for the kind words y'all. It means a lot to me and I'll keep them in mind. O0 I think my slump has passed but a relapse may occur. :2funny:
Very nicely written, Json. So sad. :(
Never give up on love
It can occur at any time
Can happen at any place
When love is discovered
It can be magical and wondrous
Yet painful and cruel
What you decide to do with it
Is all within your hands
Just follow your heart
Thanks for the poem tRouBLe. I'm at ease now and :2funny: O0
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Love is cruel and it laughs in your face
It makes you learn the hard way
You’ll end up walking alone in disgrace
A memory in which you want to erase
If you feel your heart going under
Don’t let it wander
Don’t give in, keep it together
Stay flat, keep yourself anchored
Don’t expect to play by the rules in this game
You can try but you’ll end up a fool with yourself to blame
I know from experience and I learned from the pain
So I vow to never fall in love again, I refrain
I tried many times before
Every time I take a chance my heart ends up on the floor
I’m tired, I can’t take it anymore
I’m destined to be alone, this I’m sure
It’s not worth the heartache
It’s all give and no take
It’s not worth the hearbreak
It’s all fake
Who needs love?
I need love :sad11:
Goodness, Json. Your poems are always so full of emotions. Contrary to the poem, don't give up on love.
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Goodness, Json. Your poems are always so full of emotions. Contrary to the poem, don't give up on love.
Thanks Lilly. I won't give up. O0
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Thanks for the kind words y'all. It means a lot to me and I'll keep them in mind. O0 I think my slump has passed but a relapse may occur. :2funny:
Thanks for the poem tRouBLe. I'm at ease now and :2funny: O0
Yeah, I can see that. :knuppel2: ;D
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I know Valentine’s Day has passed without giving me a glance
So I’m writing this to you in advance
Next year on February 14, give us a chance
You and I to engage in romance
My heart, you have stolen
It thumps louder with you, just listen
You’re my missing piece, I’m no longer broken
I’m still alive so this can’t be heaven
:love4:
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Awwwww......ho w romantic, Json. Did you find love or are you dreaming of it? :)
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Awwwww......how romantic, Json. Did you find love or are you dreaming of it? :)
I haven't found love or it hasn't found me. I do dream about it but dreams dont come true. Thanks for reading. :)
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I haven't found love or it hasn't found me. I do dream about it but dreams dont come true. Thanks for reading. :)
Whatcha talkin bout Willis. :D :P Dreams come true all the time. ;D
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Whatcha talkin bout Willis. :D :P Dreams come true all the time. ;D
I'm picturing you saying that and you sound like Darth Vader. :2funny: If dreams come true, you would of made an appointment, sing to me, showed me your drawings, and most of all spoken hmong to me. See, dreams don't come true. :D :P
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I'm picturing you saying that and you sound like Darth Vader. :2funny: If dreams come true, you would of made an appointment, sing to me, showed me your drawings, and most of all spoken hmong to me. See, dreams don't come true. :D :P
Darth Vader, huh? I can actually visualize that. :2funny: Dreams occur everyday, whether in a person's sleep or reality. ^-^ :P
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Darth Vader, huh? I can actually visualize that. :2funny: Dreams occur everyday, whether in a person's sleep or reality. ^-^ :P
Dreams and reality don't coexist. Two different realms. I rarely dream when I sleep anyways. :P
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Dreams and reality don't coexist. Two different realms. I rarely dream when I sleep anyways. :P
It can depending on how you view what a dream is. ;D ;)
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It can depending on how you view what a dream is. ;D ;)
How do you view what a dream is then? :2funny:
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How do you view what a dream is then? :2funny:
The term "dream" can have a few different meanings depending on the person. What's yours? ^-^
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The term "dream" can have a few different meanings depending on the person. What's yours? ^-^
I Asked you so ladies first. O0
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I Asked you so ladies first. O0
And I asked second so if you were a gentleman, you'd answer first. >:D ;D :P
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And I asked second so if you were a gentleman, you'd answer first. >:D ;D :P
If you're not a lady then I'll asnwer. :evil6: :glasses13:
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If you're not a lady then I'll asnwer. :evil6: :glasses13:
Would you say I'm a lady, I'm ladylike, or both? :D
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Would you say I'm a lady, I'm ladylike, or both? :D
There isn't enough evidence. If you answer the question then you maybe a lady. O0
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There isn't enough evidence. If you answer the question then you maybe a lady. O0
There are plenty of evidence...... .unless you're blind or choose to not see it. :D :P
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There are plenty of evidence...... .unless you're blind or choose to not see it. :D :P
Evidence you say? Plead your case then. ;) ;D
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Evidence you say? Plead your case then. ;) ;D
How about you prove what you say? :D :P
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How about you prove what you say? :D :P
You didn't answer the initial question. :D
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You didn't answer the initial question. :D
You didn't answer mine neither. ;D :D
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You didn't answer mine neither. ;D :D
I asked you first. :knuppel2:
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I asked you first. :knuppel2:
And I replied with a question. Hehehe. ;D
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And I replied with a question. Hehehe. ;D
And I answered your question with a question. :D
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And I answered your question with a question. :D
And my response to your question was a question. :2funny:
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And my response to your question was a question. :2funny:
And my reply to your question is a question of an answer. :D
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And my reply to your question is a question of an answer. :D
And to that, I replied that if you're a gentleman then you'd answer my question first. :P
:2funny: We really are becoming silly here.......and the cycle starts over again. ;D
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And to that, I replied that if you're a gentleman then you'd answer my question first. :P
:2funny: We really are becoming silly here.......and the cycle starts over again. ;D
My solution to your query is that ladies go first. :P
You're the silly one that started with the questions. :D
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My solution to your query is that ladies go first. :P
You're the silly one that started with the questions. :D
But do you not recollect what I said about being a gentleman as well? Hahaha. ^-^
Admit it, it's more fun to be silly at times. :P
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But do you not recollect what I said about being a gentleman as well? Hahaha. ^-^
Admit it, it's more fun to be silly at times. :P
I don't. :2funny: A gentleman let's the ladies go first, such as opening the door for them. So I'm letting you answer the question first. I'm nice like that. :)
At times, yes it is fun to be silly. O0
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I don't. :2funny: A gentleman let's the ladies go first, such as opening the door for them. So I'm letting you answer the question first. I'm nice like that. :)
At times, yes it is fun to be silly. O0
And when the lady asks the gentleman to go first......if the gentleman were a gentleman then he would be obliging and answer the lady. >:D ;D :P
I knew you'd agree with me. ^-^
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And when the lady asks the gentleman to go first......if the gentleman were a gentleman then he would be obliging and answer the lady. >:D ;D :P
I knew you'd agree with me. ^-^
I recalled asking you to go first then I would but you're being stubborn as usual. If asked first I would of answered because I'm a gentleman. :P
I think the agreement is mutual. :D
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I recalled asking you to go first then I would but you're being stubborn as usual. If asked first I would of answered because I'm a gentleman. :P
I think the agreement is mutual. :D
You're stubborn as well.....even if asked second, you can still go first. Hehehe. ;D :P
I think so too, but I said it first. Hahaha. ;)
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You're stubborn as well.....even if asked second, you can still go first. Hehehe. ;D :P
I think so too, but I said it first. Hahaha. ;)
I'll be the first person to go after you once you answered the question. :P
You may have said it first but I instigated it first. :D
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I'll be the first person to go after you once you answered the question. :P
You may have said it first but I instigated it first. :D
Or you could be the first person to answer period. Hehehe. ;D :P
Oh yeah......I caused you to instigate it. >:D :D
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Or you could be the first person to answer period. Hehehe. ;D :P
Oh yeah......I caused you to instigate it. >:D :D
I'll be the first to answer after you. Of course I'll be the only one though. :D
No, I did it on purpose because I kinda know how you think. :D
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I'll be the first to answer after you. Of course I'll be the only one though. :D
No, I did it on purpose because I kinda know how you think. :D
But you won't be the first to answer between us. :D :P
And how do you know that I didn't lead you to think that way.... >:D. ;D
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But you won't be the first to answer between us. :D :P
And how do you know that I didn't lead you to think that way.... >:D. ;D
Ohh really? Answered the question and let's see what happens. :P
So you maliciously planned it out? I already know how you avoid answering questions with questions. :2funny:
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Ohh really? Answered the question and let's see what happens. :P
So you maliciously planned it out? I already know how you avoid answering questions with questions. :2funny:
But if I answer then I would be answering first, and not you. ;D
Malicious? You know I'm not so :P. Hehehe.
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But if I answer then I would be answering first, and not you. ;D
Malicious? You know I'm not so :P. Hehehe.
Then the other one can answer on your behalf. :D
Yes you are. You're abusive and a deviant. :knuppel2: ;)
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Then the other one can answer on your behalf. :D
Yes you are. You're abusive and a deviant. :knuppel2: ;)
Grrrrrr....... that's not how it works. Hehehe. :P
Look who's talking. Have you looked at yourself lately? :D :P
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Grrrrrr.......that's not how it works. Hehehe. :P
Look who's talking. Have you looked at yourself lately? :D :P
It does since the other one knows you well enough. Or both of y'all can answer then I'll answer. O0 :D
I have never ever punched you in the face or kicked you down there. You also threatened to kick my ass. :knuppel2: :2funny:
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It does since the other one knows you well enough. Or both of y'all can answer then I'll answer. O0 :D
I have never ever punched you in the face or kicked you down there. You also threatened to kick my ass. :knuppel2: :2funny:
But then again, you wouldn't be the first to respond.....an d i was saying you go first. ;D :P
Hahaha. You have to admit, it was surprisingly funny. ;D ;)
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But then again, you wouldn't be the first to respond.....an d i was saying you go first. ;D :P
Hahaha. You have to admit, it was surprisingly funny. ;D ;)
Of course I would be the first to respond since both of y'all are twins. :D. I said asked you first. :knuppel2:
You caught me off guard by saying that. I would of never expected to hear you say that since you don't like to cuss. :2funny: ;)
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Of course I would be the first to respond since both of y'all are twins. :D. I said asked you first. :knuppel2:
You caught me off guard by saying that. I would of never expected to hear you say that since you don't like to cuss. :2funny: ;)
The point is you wouldn't be the first to respond between the two of us though. ;D
I didn't only catch you off guard that time.......I can think of a few others. >:D :D
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The point is you wouldn't be the first to respond between the two of us though. ;D
I didn't only catch you off guard that time.......I can think of a few others. >:D :D
Of course I'll be the first to respond to each of y'all. No one besides you reads this thread anyways. :2funny: So answer away. O0
You do everytime with your impromptu actions. I do specifically recall one moment and that shadows all the others. :2funny: :)
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Of course I'll be the first to respond to each of y'all. No one besides you reads this thread anyways. :2funny: So answer away. O0
You do everytime with your impromptu actions. I do specifically recall one moment and that shadows all the others. :2funny: :)
No. You don't get it.......if I respond first then you wouldn't be the first between the two of us. :P
Really? Which is? I want in on the joke too. ;D
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No. You don't get it.......if I respond first then you wouldn't be the first between the two of us. :P
Really? Which is? I want in on the joke too. ;D
You weren't specific. Between you and I or between the two of y'all. :P So go ahead and answer if you're a lady. O0
:occasion14: :smiley6600: :tickedoff: :sad2: :puke: remember now :2funny:
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You weren't specific. Between you and I or between the two of y'all. :P So go ahead and answer if you're a lady. O0
:occasion14: :smiley6600: :tickedoff: :sad2: :puke: remember now :2funny:
Yes, I was. I kept repeating myself and felt like a broken record. Hehehe. :D
Darn. I was hoping that wouldn't come up. :2funny: ;D :P
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Yes, I was. I kept repeating myself and felt like a broken record. Hehehe. :D
Darn. I was hoping that wouldn't come up. :2funny: ;D :P
A person can perceive it differently. You are broken. I told you last time. :2funny:
Is that why you're so mean and abusive towards me? Just be thankful I didnt interrogate you. :)
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A person can perceive it differently. You are broken. I told you last time. :2funny:
Is that why you're so mean and abusive towards me? Just be thankful I didnt interrogate you. :)
Or my reiterations fall on deaf ears........or should I say eyes. ;D
No, dork. Hehehe. I'm not even mean to you and you know it. :P
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Or my reiterations fall on deaf ears........or should I say eyes. ;D
No, dork. Hehehe. I'm not even mean to you and you know it. :P
I did point at the moon yesterday and I'm not wearing my glasses. :2funny: :P
You verbally assault me by calling me a whale's penis. :'( :D
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I did point at the moon yesterday and I'm not wearing my glasses. :2funny: :P
You verbally assault me by calling me a whale's penis. :'( :D
But pointing at the moon doesn't make you deaf, I thought it just cuts your ear. ??? ;D
Well, you know the way I say it, it doesn't mean that. ;D :P
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:'(