Fine.
Try #2:
I was a homeless young teenager at the age of 18 living under the bridges of Madison County. One night, it was extremely cold with temperatures in the single digits and wind chills of -24. I shivered under my newspaper blanket and attempted to sleep. In something like a dream state, a young man appeared and offered me a real tent, one of those made for camping in the Alaskan wilderness. I looked up at him and said, "Will u marry me?" He said, "Sure." He was 22.
Does that answer ur question?