A PH Valentine

[Json]

For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter

What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour

Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract

So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory

[tRouBLe]

It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom.   

Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... ..      

[Json]

It's very nice but full of sadness and gloom.   

Maybe our poem should be something happy instead of revelation.... ..      

I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.

We can to a happy piece together.  Your call. 

[Json]

What a beautiful poem.

Thank ya generously ma'am.

[proudlao]

For you, I don’t have a Valentine card or a single flower
All I have is me, a poetaster
My attempt to draw your attention, a failure
So I hide behind a facade, the laughter

What can I do to be yours?
Just when I think I’m close, I’m ignored
Feels like I’m an eyesore
Tears fall like a downpour

Between us, there will never be any contact
When I approach, you’re quick to retract
I follow thinking you’re fronting an act
I can’t figure you out, you’re abstract

So I’m setting myself free
Within a few days, I’ll be a ghostly entity
In weeks, I’ll seize to be
Months, a forgotten memory

 
Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.

But a nice piece indeed.

[Json]

 
Don't give up that easily, only walk away with your head held high once you have talked to this person, and it's a definite no. If you pursue, she ignores keep trying. You may never know. Wish you the best json.

But a nice piece indeed.

I hear you PL. I appreciate your insight.   

[tRouBLe]

I intended this piece to be joyous but it came out differently and Im wwondering why.

We can to a happy piece together.  Your call. 

Was that a clue?  Hehehe.   

Sure.  That's fine.   

[Json]

Was that a clue?  Hehehe.   

Sure.  That's fine.   

That was not a clue.  I told you already. 

[Wi_sweetguy]

I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym 

[Json]

I miss her so much
Going to push, hold and lift
Wait for me miss gym 

A date with the gym.  Me too. 

[tRouBLe]

That was not a clue.  I told you already. 

I know.  I was just joking.      

[Json]

I know.  I was just joking.      

You hurt my feelings again.   Why I ought to

[lilly]

+1.  Very nice, Json!  If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her.  But I really like your poem.  So much emotions flow from it.  I love it. 

[Json]

+1.  Very nice, Json!  If you're not sure how she really feels, it doesn't hurt to ask for an honest answer from her.  But I really like your poem.  So much emotions flow from it.  I love it.

Thanks Lilly.  Maybe one day I'll ask but I'm kinda sure of the answer already from the non verbals. 

[Json]

Json, you can ask through me again. 

What are you implying and what do you mean "again"?  Why I ought to