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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2014, 11:55:53 PM »
Wow, created a poetic world
Of rhymes that unfurled

Everything is like a catchy tune
Now that we're half way to June

Still what day is it today
Still in the month of May

Ah yes moving out to a new place
Take your time, it's not a race

Move out, but stay close to family
When in trouble, they will come to see

And help they will
Cuz they love you still

Be good and take care
Your adventures write down to share

With the rest of us.  O0

Ahh...lol love this poem too thanks :D


June is coming soon
And where is my spoon

I’ve lost track of time
Is that a lime?

Finding a new place
While trying to tie my shoelace

I’ll forever be with my family
While listening to Miley

I know they will help
So does yelp

I will try to be good and take care
While writing down every little thing with nothing spare ;)





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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #16 on: May 20, 2014, 12:11:28 AM »
Villa, you are good.. I will quote along with you.

A world of poems
Written all in stone

Stay close to family indeed
In them you will need

You plant what you Sow
Don't sell your soul

Don't lose your face
Otherwise, you will lose your place

Don't become con placement
Or you will be living in the basement

Whenever in doubt
Never hurts to ask about

Ask for help
Don't keep it to yourelsf

We will always be here
Promise you, that we won't stare

Man you two are good

Words written down in poems
Feels like a roaring storm

Family I need
For I will forever be in their deed

Saying words of gold
Will be just right for the soul

My face I will treasure
Otherwise, it will get measure

By those who sneer
Instead of giving a cheer

Whenever in doubt
I promise not to get in a drought

Help I will seek
Until I can learn Greek

My friends are here
With a listening ear :D


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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #17 on: May 20, 2014, 06:41:02 AM »
Man you two are good

Words written down in poems
Feels like a roaring storm

Family I need
For I will forever be in their deed

Saying words of gold
Will be just right for the soul

My face I will treasure
Otherwise, it will get measure

By those who sneer
Instead of giving a cheer

Whenever in doubt
I promise not to get in a drought

Help I will seek
Until I can learn Greek

My friends are here
With a listening ear :D
Sorry I don't know how to quote two post into just one.
I combined the two into one answer. But I can only quote one.

The one thing that we all fear
It makes everyone aware

Clouds brewing from above
The calmness before the flood

We all once stare
Up and down these wary stair

Trying to riding on this mare
Only to end up bear

People who smirk
Will always be a jerk

This I will state
I don't like headache

A wife who cooks good meat
Will always make, her hubby eat

Like a knife that is sharp
It will always cut from the start

Like throwing a pair of dart
They both can not part

When you lend a help
There's no more need to yell

A good wife is like a slate
The best roof out of all the state

A house, if she doesn't sweep
A hubby, he will leap

I hope that I'm not being too bored
I'll try to write you some more



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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #18 on: May 20, 2014, 06:19:25 PM »
Sorry I took so long...

Some things that we hear
Can create lots of fear

Like strong wind outside
Can make a man hide

At the end of this stair
I know there waits a chair

Promising adventure
With no bullet proof denture

The smirks on their face
Will show off their brace

With this I state
Only show their bad trait

A husband who eats
Without missing a beat

Will have a good heart
Even from the start

If they play their part
We can say they are smart

By giving a helping hand
Even if it’s not planned

A husband should never be late
Or else they will never get things straight

A house, he cannot keep
A wife, she will bleep

Oh I am not bored
Please send me some more :D



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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #19 on: May 20, 2014, 07:53:21 PM »
Sorry I took so long...

Some things that we hear
Can create lots of fear

Like strong wind outside
Can make a man hide

At the end of this stair
I know there waits a chair

Promising adventure
With no bullet proof denture

The smirks on their face
Will show off their brace

With this I state
Only show their bad trait

A husband who eats
Without missing a beat

Will have a good heart
Even from the start

If they play their part
We can say they are smart

By giving a helping hand
Even if it’s not planned

A husband should never be late
Or else they will never get things straight

A house, he cannot keep
A wife, she will bleep

Oh I am not bored
Please send me some more :D
Tree of life
Your house will be like
The summer bee hive

You are the Queen
You need a King

The Baobab Tree
Your path, you will see

Follow a good hubby's trace
You won't have to use your Mace

He will always, take you out on a date
Everyday, he can not wait

A good wife, she will never stand
When she's at the house of fans
He is proud to be her man

I'm glad you enjoy
Go grab a cup of milk
And some chip ahoy



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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #20 on: May 20, 2014, 10:15:39 PM »
Hmm…cookies cookies
With some bookies
Treating me like a bunch of babies

I love my milk
Along with a little silk

Cloth that drapes
In a bowl full of grapes

I look outside
And ouu I spied

The Queen of bees
Hanging from that tree

A good wife, they say she will be
Wondering what’s under that Christmas tree

Grabs my blanket
Grabs my packet
Waiting to see if I can get off this planet



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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #21 on: May 20, 2014, 10:43:28 PM »
Hmm…cookies cookies
With some bookies
Treating me like a bunch of babies

I love my milk
Along with a little silk

Cloth that drapes
In a bowl full of grapes

I look outside
And ouu I spied

The Queen of bees
Hanging from that tree

A good wife, they say she will be
Wondering what’s under that Christmas tree

Grabs my blanket
Grabs my packet
Waiting to see if I can get off this planet

Cookies
Along with some nookie

Wow, 180 it has turn
On this ship's Bow and Stern

Like a male drake
Only to be call a fake

A hubby can cook a good steak
If willingly the wifey can make

A wife, can bake
Only if she knows the trait

Her goodie basket
So full with fantastic

You are from planet Venus
Surely you are not the meanest

As I'm from Mars
I only use soap bars



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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #22 on: May 20, 2014, 10:49:19 PM »
When you reply
No one will answer and say Hi

Going to hit the bed
I'll write you back tomorrow, instead

It was fun talking to you
I hope to see you soon

I will answer all your poems
When I  get back home




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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #23 on: May 21, 2014, 11:12:07 PM »
Advice I give you on the side
You can always count me to give you a high five

I won't tell you any lie
If I do, my heart will die

Choose your path wisely
Hold your head up highly

Carry yourself proud
Hold the Hmong Pride out loud

When you succeed
I will come visit, you will see

Don't be a freebie
Get toss around like a frisbee

Hold onto your dreams dearly
Life is full of scary

I'm out of Rhyme
Guess it's time

For me to part
I have no more art

This is all I can say
All in one day



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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #24 on: May 23, 2014, 01:28:44 AM »
Advice I give you on the side
You can always count me to give you a high five

I won't tell you any lie
If I do, my heart will die

Choose your path wisely
Hold your head up highly

Carry yourself proud
Hold the Hmong Pride out loud

When you succeed
I will come visit, you will see

Don't be a freebie
Get toss around like a frisbee

Hold onto your dreams dearly
Life is full of scary

I'm out of Rhyme
Guess it's time

For me to part
I have no more art

This is all I can say
All in one day

My journey has begun
Still waiting to see the sun

With all your bless
I will reach for success

I will take the only freebies
That the store offer freely

Even if life is scary
My dreams will still carry

Through the darken time
I will still climb

Climb up those walls
Until I stand tall

Thank you for your advice
From now I will think twice
Before rolling any dice.

Peace…. :D



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Shinta-san

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #25 on: May 23, 2014, 01:32:08 PM »
My journey has begun
Still waiting to see the sun

With all your bless
I will reach for success

I will take the only freebies
That the store offer freely

Even if life is scary
My dreams will still carry

Through the darken time
I will still climb

Climb up those walls
Until I stand tall

Thank you for your advice
From now I will think twice
Before rolling any dice.

Peace…. :D
Burning hot
So try not to stop

Hearts on fire
Don't end up being a liar

Like the red amber
For a free sampler

Follow your heart
Your goals, it start

Don't forget to tell and post
Otherwise your thread becomes cold

Remember to take a lot of stay-cation
No money for a vacation



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Jenlee9

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #26 on: June 09, 2014, 08:42:26 PM »
Might get my first interview tomorrow yay!!!



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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #27 on: June 09, 2014, 08:49:27 PM »
Might get my first interview tomorrow yay!!!

Yay!  I'm rooting for you!

Did you move out yet?



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The real villain is looking at you.  The last hero was just not true.  If everything works out in the end.  It's because all things make amends.

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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #28 on: June 09, 2014, 08:54:00 PM »
Yay!  I'm rooting for you!

Did you move out yet?

Thanks. I already did. But still go home too. Hehe



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Re: Creating a world of my own...
« Reply #29 on: June 09, 2014, 08:57:35 PM »
I'm sure you've got your interview q&a's up to snuff.  O0



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The real villain is looking at you.  The last hero was just not true.  If everything works out in the end.  It's because all things make amends.

 

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