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TSAV PIB PIB

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #15 on: June 26, 2010, 09:17:32 PM »
it's cool.. just as long as it's on friendly grounds
and no heart felt with your rounds
just as long as you use poetry in motion
I'll be gentle and not rule it out w/o emotion..
 ;)
So let my page be the battle ground
Ha, ha... Kids! bring on the fun, mic n music sound
Lucky Ly's here to regulate
U 2 boyz can battle it out n find ur own 2 fate
I'll be fair n neutral
Just make sure ur rhyme's good n end with the right syllable
Mlle Tsav Piv Piv dont U delete this thread
Just because BigBoi1 n DPA are acting like 2 big freak!



K!... good enough for me!... Cant rap like u 2 boys! Hey BigBoi1, are from PA?!... Good stuff!... Im out for the day... Just watch out for mlle Tsav Pib Pib  :)  :)  :)



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TSAV PIB PIB

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #16 on: June 28, 2010, 01:49:56 PM »
 O0 O0 O0 O0 O0
WOW.. lucky.. spiting it out like nothing at all
your poems stand tall like the great wall
poetry is in your blood that I can see
5 stars for you from mlle tsav pib pib.. lols

 :)

just remember guys.. keep it under control  ;D


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Darkplanetasia

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #17 on: July 28, 2010, 10:12:19 PM »
POETRY MATTERS


They say Poetry heal the mind, soul and spirit
I hope it is true, that way I would not want any limits
 
Its gentle words feel like a breeze throuhout your body
Like floating in Heaven, always so bright, always so sunny
 
Put your thoughts on a piece of paper
It will get rid of a lot of your negativities, a lot of your angers
 
Either it is a message from them... You... Or me
It is priceless, it is always free
 
You will be coming at peace with yourself and able to let it go
A great reward for oneself, because you will become your own true hero
 
No more pain, no more sorrow
March forward always looking for a better tomorrow
 
Poetry does matter
Poetry does do wonders.

O0 poetry does matter

OVER!



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Darkplanetasia

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #18 on: July 28, 2010, 10:45:49 PM »
How u coming along with urs DPA?!... Talking about ur song/demo... Post it up when it's ready mang!...
gonna take a while, not sure if i should really take my time and get my equipment up or should i just revised it, tighten some lines up here and there...i got an idea i've been wanting to do so i might put this aside and do it first, gotta come up with the lines first though. i'm excited about it though man.

OVER!



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Darkplanetasia

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« Reply #19 on: July 28, 2010, 10:59:58 PM »
Cool!... Keep us posted then... Oh, n I hope ure gonna include ur famous word from here, in there too: "over", over!  O0
i got one coming haha seriously, been thinking of something serious and something for fun, i'll let you know when it's done...or when it's OVER

OVER!



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MiCorazon

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #20 on: July 29, 2010, 07:34:03 AM »
 ;D Keep having fun.  It makes our head hurts sometimes to find the right words, and even though not too many are poetically inclined, it's just us passing time.



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eclps05975

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« Reply #21 on: August 06, 2010, 04:12:40 PM »
Like the poems, very breathe taking and inspirational. O0



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Darkplanetasia

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #22 on: September 13, 2010, 12:21:52 AM »
SOME WORDS



Some words are so powerful
So pleasant to be heard & oh so wonderful

Simple words, simple lyrics, simple meanings, simple thoughts
As rewarding as if u just had won a hard battle u just fought

Do not ignore the power of some words
They could be as sweet as honey, or as deadly as some razor sharp swords

Yes, worry not of the negative words that might cause u some sensitivities
Rather pick-up the ones to give u Hope, Faith & positivities

Choose some words wisely,
Choose some words to avoid any possible miseries.

i like your choice of words

OVER!



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Darkplanetasia

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #23 on: September 13, 2010, 12:33:39 PM »
havent really have time for alot of things as of late. been busy trying to accomplish too many goals at one time.

sounds good though.

OVER!



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NraugKKX

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #24 on: November 04, 2010, 04:33:25 PM »
Cov lus no yog kuv tso lub paj hua
Tsi paub sau thiaj lav practice xwb
 
Tsi try ces tsi paub li xwb right
Kuv yuav mixe lub hmoob nrog lub Ib-glish
 
Vim hais tias tuaj hlo tev chaw A-mes-li-ka
Paub paub hais lus taw dawb tabsi lub Hmoob mas quav dev
 
Hmonglish los kuv kuj tsis keej thiab
Ah ya! xyo yuav ua li cas lod!
 
kuv try to rhyme so my words can flow as good as Mrs Vang
Lod yog tus Bro NraugKKX
 
Tabsi tsi tau li
kuv hmoob vocabulary too too poor
 
Tse kav liam
Lam sau xwb



If I didnt have little wind checking my mistakes tho, Gaddam!... dont think I'll even post this paj huam... so props goes to little Wind  O0

LOL, funny tiag os bro!! :2funny:



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WindComeWindBlow

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #25 on: November 08, 2010, 11:12:29 AM »
Lets try another pajhuam  :D  :)  :)


Me nyuam Hmoob es, me nyuam Hmoob
Tsis txhob thuam, thuam thiab kav tsij mloog
 
Kuv cov lus yeej muaj tseeb
Tsuag, tsuag los thig pob ntseg, txhob qeeb, qeeb
 
koj xav muaj, koj xav tau cuag li luag
Txhob hais lus phem, koj lus neej thiaj li muaj ci, tsis muaj ua vog ua vuag
 
Ib yam li los lus tawv dawb: "karma is a B/tch"
Txhob hais lus nkhaus, nkhaus cuag li ib niag pog Witch
 
Koj xav kom koj lub neej zoo thiab kaj lug
Koj yuav tsum pab koj cov Hmoob, koj yuav tsum hlub
 
Tsis hais kom pab ntau, ntau... Mes, mes los yeej tau lawm
Tsum paub xav, tsu paub ntsia, tsum ua lus siab dawb
 
Tsis hais tus tib neeg twg li: Dub, Mev, Fabkis, Ameslikas, los kanasdas
Yeej muaj tus zoo, yeej muaj tus phem ib yam
 
Koj thiab kuv... Wb, peb, nej, lawv... Tas nrho sawv daws yeej yog tib hom neeg
Kav tsij khaws kuv cov lus, kav tsij ntseeg!



This is a beautiful poem.  Thank you for your words of wisdom.



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Havocrazy

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #26 on: December 02, 2010, 10:42:31 PM »
Yo . . . Yo . . . uh . . . uh . . . here we go
Got your boy Havoc in the rhyme crib now
First all I want to said "oh WOW!" . . .

Love this thread already, got me all pump
Up and ready to jump just like when you
Get goose bump from watching Jason and
Freddy . . . and Forest ____? . . .

Going all out with this . . . bull ----> POOP!
dis' who? dis' what? disagreed and dis-
Approved of you being glue the word rude

Just a short rhyme from the top of my mind




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Havocrazy

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Re: A few of my poems...
« Reply #27 on: December 03, 2010, 04:23:30 PM »
Havoc Bro, cool meeting u here
Yeah, this is mostly for fun, so aint nothin' to worry 'bout, nothin' to steer
Mostly my poems are some of my reflections of my past
Memories from me so they can ever last
Good or Bad
Dont matter, I'll take them as they come&unfold, aint nothin' to be ashamed or sad
 
I see u're from Cali
Good stuff, Im coming down this week, so Im pretty pump&happy
Mb u can show me around
So I dont trip & fall on the ground
Santa Rosa?
Is there a lot of them nice/cute little Mama?!...
 
 

Are u DPA mang?!... ha, ha... Anyway, out for the weekend... See u in Cali?!... I'll be there for 3 weeks... Peace!...





I use to lived in Cali' bro'
Kicking it in NC now . . .

Time is moving too
Fast, than to now in
A flash, I forget to
Change my location
In my 411, my bad

Chilling in the jungle
Of North Carolina
Fishing and hunting
Who don't wanna?
Respecting it's woods
And it's very natural
Habitat Nature with
My pee . . .
Yeah!, just chugging
On 40 ounce, blast
12 Gauge and go
The whole twelve
Rounds with a
Unanimous . . . one
Pack . . .

This thread is so
Awesome I have to
Come back even if
My rhyme is all off
Track and can't
Compare to big
Daddy Mack lucky_
Ly with the smack
Down attitude to
Rule this thread
Through, me and
You are two true
Crazy rhyme fools
And it's all Cool . . .




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