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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: BuckFuddies2 on December 12, 2013, 02:21:13 AM

Title: If My Love Is That Deep
Post by: BuckFuddies2 on December 12, 2013, 02:21:13 AM

Will you say 'Hi' to me........ when we first catch eyes
Will you look away and pretend not to know

Will we glance at one another one last time before we part
Our shoulders did touch, elbow to elbow

I tell myself I can't look back.......
In my heart I'm waiting for you to make the move, will you show?

It's sad to think, that sometimes, in our hearts..... we just have to let go

Title: Re: If My Love Is That Deep
Post by: tRouBLe on December 12, 2013, 10:41:30 AM

Lost love, Buck?  Sometimes it just wasn't meant to be.

Title: Re: If My Love Is That Deep
Post by: Json on December 12, 2013, 11:07:40 AM

Awesome

Title: Re: If My Love Is That Deep
Post by: BuckFuddies2 on December 12, 2013, 08:28:32 PM

Quote from: HeavenlyScent on December 12, 2013, 12:01:18 PM

My love is so deep, it can reach across the ocean to you
It's enough to melt your heart on a icy cold winter night
More than you can ever imagined a love to be
My love is so deep, it can touch the heaven
My love is enough to sustain us both even if you don't love me anymore...  :'( :'(

Awwww.... thanks for contributing.  Was it for me? 

Title: Re: If My Love Is That Deep
Post by: BuckFuddies2 on December 20, 2013, 11:16:17 PM

Oh wow, I just came back at this...... and I gotta say, that poem was good.

Forgive me though Poetic Snobs for I have rhyme'd.   :P

See.... I know.  I'll give ya'll a wink.  BUT, you are wrong for being too prententious, so I'm right.   ;)