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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: J-a-s-o-n on September 03, 2014, 06:59:36 PM
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I've searched far and wide
Still, love I cannot find
A chance at love declined
To be loved denied
I have never felt the warmth of a woman
I'm asking myself the same question
Is love real or just my imagination?
It can't be real it's an illusion
My heart has always been on the line
It's been like that, it has no time to hide
For once, I don't want to be alone on valentine
How does it feel to have two hearts intertwine?
It's a mystery I have yet to uncover
Will I spend my entire life seeking an answer?
I think I'll hang up the banner
Thoughts of love will no longer linger
I put on a smile as a facade
I can't pretend, I'm a fraud
I faced the truth that love doesn't exist
It's not real, it's a myth
I'm destined to be alone
Countless heartbreaks I've experienced on my own
For me, love will never be known
"Loveless" will be marked on my tombstone
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Txhob tu siab mog. *hugs*
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Txhob tu siab mog. *hugs*
Kuv yeej tu siab txhua hnub txhua hmo. Ua tsaug koj puag kuv. :)
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I didnt know you know how to write in hmoob? :o
Kuv tsis paub sau ntawv hmoob os. Kuv siv Google Translate thiab Bing Translator. Ua tsaug rau kuv tus boO. :D :P
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Im impressed!! Better than me. Lol love your poem and i can relate to it. Thanks for sharing. O0
There are some words that I can't find with the translator so I use what I can. ;D Thanks for reading. :)
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Kuv yeej tu siab txhua hnub txhua hmo. Ua tsaug koj puag kuv. :)
Maybe it's because I've had so many romantic disappointment s that I'm no longer surprised when something doesn't work out. In fact in some ways it's almost expected. But the one thing I have learned is to never let go of hope. Hope is the breath of life that runs through our veins.
I have hope for you, Jason. Keep holding on. Just a bit longer. :)
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Maybe it's because I've had so many romantic disappointment s that I'm no longer surprised when something doesn't work out. In fact in some ways it's almost expected. But the one thing I have learned is to never let go of hope. Hope is the breath of life that runs through our veins.
I have hope for you, Jason. Keep holding on. Just a bit longer. :)
I feel.the same way but without the hope part. I've let it go. I do appreciate that you have hope for me. :)
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A very melancholy poem, Jason. Love happens.....es pecially when least expected. Another nice piece that I enjoyed reading. O0
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Here's my "revelation"
You were a hero in my eyes,
My light and shining star.
You were put on a pedestal,
Where you could do no wrong.
You meant the world to me,
My teacher and my commander.
You touched my heart and soul,
Where no one else existed.
Then came that fateful day,
You crushed my hopes and dreams.
My light and shining star,
You once were and are no more.
The pedestal you stood upon,
You fell with no one to catch your fall.
My once ecstatic heart and soul,
You broke and shattered into pieces.
I should have known,
For you are not perfect.
I should have realized,
For you are only human.
I shouldn't have ignored,
For you, my eyes were blind.
I shouldn't have held you so high,
For this was my demise.
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A very melancholy poem, Jason. Love happens.....es pecially when least expected. Another nice piece that I enjoyed reading. O0
Love doesn't exist in my world. I don't expect to find it or it find me. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nice piece BTW. I liked yours too. I'm surprised you wrote one but even more surprised after reading it. O0
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Nice piece, tRouble. O0
Thanks, MM! ;)
Love doesn't exist in my world. I don't expect to find it or it find me. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nice piece BTW. I liked yours too. I'm surprised you wrote one but even more surprised after reading it. O0
You can deny it all you want but once the love bug gets you, you're a goner. ;D Why surprised? Many of my poems are analogous to each other. :D
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Thanks, MM! ;)
You can deny it all you want but once the love bug gets you, you're a goner. ;D Why surprised? Many of my poems are analogous to each other. :D
I hate bugs. I got bitten a few times and it really hurts. >:( I'm surprised b/c you actually wrote your version of "Revelation". This piece was in my mind before the failed collaboration. Also, I was expecting a different tone from your piece since you wanted the failed collabo to have a more positive feel. :)
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I'm not too fond of bugs neither. Hehehe. How can it be failed if it's occurring now? :P My piece does have a positive feel to it, maybe not to the reader but to the writer. ;D Speaking of positive, look who's talking, Mr. Hopeless. Hehehe. :D
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So you've been bitten before or still suffering from the effects. ;) It failed b/c you were suppose to start it but gave up so I did it myself. You followed me. :P. It should of happened months ago. It wasn't a positive feel to me and we both agreed that it would. You forgot. ;D. I'm positive of what I wrote. O0
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I think we've all been bitten before. ;D Again, it didn't fail because it's occurring now. The only time it's a fail is if it didn't occur at all. :P All revelations are positive because you learn something from the experience, even though it was or may have been a bad experience. ;D
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Maybe you're the bug.that's biting others. :P. It failed miserably b/c you didn't keep your word. I wrote it and it occurred to you that you should write one b/c it triggered your memory. If I never wrote it, you would of never remembered. ;D. All revelation are positive to an extent while some are bittersweet. O0
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*looks in the mirror* Nope, I'm no bug. :D It didn't fail, because it was not unsuccessful nor was it not able to be done. :P
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Guess I'm the bug then. I'm always biting your forehead and you're always smacking it. :2funny: You're just making excuses b/c you know I'm right and you're wrong. Just admit it. You failed and backed out on your word. ;D
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Are you saying you hate yourself? >:D ;D
you hate bugs
you are a bug
you hate yourself
You're not right and I'm not wrong. I just haven't had time to think about it and was a bit slow in doing it. Overall, it wasn't a fail since it's being done now. :P
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So you hate me too? ??? That explains a lot. :P You wrote one in a jiffy for someone who didn't have time. Or you're saying that you're slow. :2funny: Its okay if you don't want to tell me. I understand. O0
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You didn't answer my question so I won't answer yours......... yet. >:D ;D I wrote one because gotta keep up with you, ya know. Hehehe. :P
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Fine, I'll answer your question. I do hate myself and I punish myself by testing my limits in missions. ;D. Your turn. You didn't answer my initial question. Not having time is such a lame excuse. ::). Its cool though. O0. If you wanna keep up with me, you need to write a few more. :P
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Ok.....I don't hate you because you're not a bug to me. ;D "No time" is not a lame excuse, it's an explanation on why I haven't written it. :P Hmmmmm.......c an we reuse pieces? Hehehe. :D
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Then what am I to you? :dontknow: So you didn't have time for months on end? I think you forgot with time. :2funny: You can't reuse pieces, they're overdue like your "Revelation". :P. Can't keep up with me ehhh. :D
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You may not know what you are but you know what you're not. Hehehe. >:D Time certainly does make a person forget about something temporarily but not permanently. ;D Hmmmmmmm...... .I guess I'll have to think up of some things...... ;D :P
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I know what I was and what I could of been. :). So you admit that you forgot. Was it so hard to come clean? :P. I know for sure that you won't write anything. Even if you did by any chance, I won't be here to read it. :D
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Huh? What do you mean? ??? I said temporarily since I've been busy. :P I always have something in my mind. Are you going on another hiatus? :D
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You don't know what I mean? I'll PM and tell you. :). I've heard that excuse plenty of times before. Why dont you write what you have in mind down? Oh that's right, you're too "busy". :P. You won't notice if I leave. It may be for good. O0
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It's been awhile since I heard from you
What happened? I have no clue
Our friendship you discontinue?
Say it ain't true
I thought what we had would last
But I guess I've become apart of your past
Maybe I should of paid attention to the forecast
So now I'm rhyming my feelings to you on broadcast
You loosen your grip from your fingers
Now to you, I'm a distant stranger
A friendship torn asunder
From you, there was no reason or answer
I'm a bit blue but more so confused
Am I guilty of being honest and true
Is that what I've been accused
Can you for once be honest with the truth
I'm fine if you want to severe ties
Just don't give me no lies
Especially fake smiles in disguise
I'll keep this just between us, not advertise
It was fun that started from a fluke
It had me, I admit I was fooled
But it was still nice and cool
I still consider you awesome and you rule
I honestly wish you the best in life
Saying nothing, I'll take that as your reason why
You were the first to say "Hi"
You may as well end it with "Goodbye"
:)
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That's a nice and sad poem, Json. Hopefully you don't really feel that way.
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That's a nice and sad poem, Json. Hopefully you don't really feel that way.
I do feel that way, honest. How am I suppose to feel. The evidence is there. ???
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I do feel that way, honest. How am I suppose to feel. The evidence is there. ???
You could always discuss it with the person. At times, action may speak louder than words BUT other times, words need to be spoken.
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sounds all too dejavu. sorry to hear json. people should just be honest with their feelings and not be afraid to hurt someone. :'(
Right. How hard is telling the truth? O0
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I would discuss it with the other person but all forms of communication were cut. No msg and no number. So how am I suppose to speak
to that person. ???
You could always discuss it with the person. At times, action may speak louder than words BUT other times, words need to be spoken.
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I understand what you're saying. Closure would be nice though. Maybe one day that person will contact me in the future and say "goodbye".
Json, if someone doesn't know your worth than it's just too bad. Don't waste your time chasing or waiting on hopes/dreams. The way I see it is if someone was interested in me. I don't have to put in that much efforts. It will be a mutual thing.
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I'm not counting on it. Its been awhile since I heard from that person.
Yes, I understand the feeling of not knowing what happened or what went wrong between a relationship or a friendship. I do hope that person will find the courage to at least let you know.
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I would discuss it with the other person but all forms of communication were cut. No msg and no number. So how am I suppose to speak
to that person. ???
If on an online forum, then pm? ???
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If on an online forum, why pm when its disabled? What if the attempt has been done in the past? What then? ???
If on an online forum, then pm? ???
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Even though we are separated by miles
We share the same smiles
I know you're close to me
As if we're cheek to cheek
The days have gone and became the past
I hold on to the memories with a firm grasp
I've weathered the four seasons
And have yet to be given a reason
I cast off my pride
Showed you a different side
Bare and naked
Beaten and blooded
When I start to fade from your memory
What's the one thing you'll remember about me
Maybe you've forgotten already
Remembering you, it came naturally
:)
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Nice poem. Is this a revelation piece or just reminiscing... ....or maybe even neither. ;D
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Well, it is in Revelation and involves the past. If its neither then what is it? :P
Besides, you need to catch up. You're two poems behind. Can't keep up with me? :D. Too slow, vaub kib. ;D
Nice poem. Is this a revelation piece or just reminiscing... ....or maybe even neither. ;D
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Neither can mean just "an idea" that you decided to write about. ;D
What's wrong with a vaub kib? They can be cute and it did win the rabbit. :D :P
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Maybe its all three or one more ;D
They're slow and not cute. It won because the rabbit let it win. It was being nice. ;D
Neither can mean just "an idea" that you decided to write about. ;D
What's wrong with a vaub kib? They can be cute and it did win the rabbit. :D :P
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One more? Hmmmmmm.
They can be fast and cute.........i f we draw/make them that way. ;D
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There are 4 stanzas. ;)
Or they are slow and ugly because they are. :P
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I attempted to write but I am only drawing blanks.