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Creative Corner => Poetic Souls => Topic started by: lucky_ly on June 12, 2010, 06:39:35 PM
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... I'll add some more as time goes!...
YOUR WORST ENNEMY
Do u know ur worst ennemy
The one who aint gonna give u a dam mercy.
U have probably meet him a thousand times
But you never knew n though, cos everything were alright n fine.
He's the one that bring you fear
N wanna get rid of everything of u that is Dear
He's the one who wait patiently in the dark
For the right time to throw that first blow n attack.
Yes, he's the coward that will hit u, out of nowhere
When u're at ur weakest by just giving u a cold stare.
He's the one who lives in within you
Yeah, The Devil n negative side of you.
Just make sure u dont let him take over
Always keep him in check n way down under.
HIWAY OF LIFE
In this long, long Hiway we call Life
We are all traveling our way at different place and time
Some of us, we've lost our car ride, now we are just walking along the road side line
Let's hope to catch a passing by, cos no more money, not even a dime.
There's a lot more bumps and wrong turn, we'll have to go through
But let's keep our head held high to reach that special "rendez-vous".
A long way for us to still travel,
But a lot of people to meet yet, and a lot of place to look and marvel.
So continuing our way to the Hiway of Life, we will
Just make sure not to get too sick nor too ill.
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nice death poem. keep it up O0
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Cool stuff doode.
OVER!
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Getting back into it, slowly.
Who u know more cokky than D is
Excuse me but it was God who gave me this penis
I just do it and whoever in my path, stupid
Foolish enough when I leave them in the ruins
Say b.y.e. when I leave them in a state where they d.i.e.
So annoying, can't I lie
Ruin so many threads when I tread tides
Ride the waves and make ur serious threads look just like...
My toilet bowl when I take a twice
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Nice poems!
Keep them coming... :)
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Lucky,
I love that story! It has somewhat changed my attitude and the way I'm thinking. Yes, we do have choices and these choices have a lot to do with our attitudes everyday. When I meet a person who is always optimistic about things, who always carries a great, positive attitude and seems to always smile and have a great day, I know I love it! I not only like his/her attitude but I also love being with him/her. Now, if I like it so much, why not be like that, too? I have choices, I can choose to be a nice, friendly person with a great attitude? Or be a mean, cruel, grumpy azz person! Arrrrrrgh! :D
Yes, that story just made my morning again.
Thanks. :)
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... Ok, here's another one... Wrote this one back in 99... Yeah looong time ago!...
TO FORGIVE BUT NOT FORGET
Here I come, here I come
Better be ready, cos Lucky Ly's always in a hurry!
I'd like to speak-up my mind
Cos im not all that blind.
Suggest my opponions
That could be solutions.
Im not much of an intellect
Hell!... I dont even know which word to select.
Im just using my basic knowledge
So that I can reach that top edge.
CHORUS
PEOPLE ALWAYS COMPLAIN AND BLAME,
THERE IS NO SHAME, WE ARE ALL THE SAME!
TOO MUCH PAIN... I HOPE IM NOT GONNA TALK IN VAIN.
THIS IS A NEW MILLENIUM, SO LET'S MAKE IT PLATINIUM
LET'S ALL TALK ABOUT LOVE CONNECTION
NOT WAR SITUATION!
Saddam Hussein!... Dam right, he's very insane
But he's just got a different theory, like in our past history.
To conquer and dominate; so he can create,
His hown colonies, with his powerful army.
Bill Clinton!... he's not like the average John, or Don, or Ron
He might have had a few mistresses, but nobody sees his distress
He might had lied, but his iron will hasnt died
People only see his mistakes, they dont all the homeworks in his desk... for God' Sake.
Dennis Rodman!... Sometimes he could be a real gentleman
He's got a lot of tattoos, so people think he's a little "coucou"
He bleach his hair, but at least he's got guts to dare
He started his life not too tall, but he's made the best, better than the rest of us all.
Ben Johnson!...He's not my son,
But he's Canadian, like the rest all the Native Indiens
He might had cheat!... But he did compete and lead!
And We... People of the nation, gave him a standing ovation.
Now... We all gonna give him a diss?!... But I hope he did not get too pissed.
CHORUS
We!... Are the new generation, dont talk to us about destructions
But rather, Solutions... Resolutions... E-v-o-l-u-t-i-o-n-s!
Now!... Did you listen and followed me?
Or think that Im just another l-i-t-t-l-e wannabe?!
Anyway... Never said I was a genious
But I know... When to be serious!
Let's all forgive but not forget
Let's all forgive... But not forget!
You wrote this one? :o :o :o WOW!
Applauds*Clap*Clap* Great stuff!
Very nice! And thanks for sharing... :)
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U're totally correct on this one Mrs Vang!... It just kind of sad sometimes that some ppl will know that... But they wont apply it?!... Just dont know what to say for those ppl... But oh well...
It's because they have a choice, and they choose to not apply it. ;)
But it's okay, tsuav koj thiab kuv wb apply xwb mas.
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:) :) :) ... Dont know if I can write something like that again tho... For some reasons, at that time, I wasnt having the best time in my Life... Usually I'll hit the gym n feel better after... But I couldnt get rid of the negativities in me/around me... Then one time, I just happened to relax n write stuff on a piece of paper... N the words just "came" to me?!... N so fast too... Must have wrote like... 3-4 poems... In less than... 1 hour?!... wont be able to do again for sure if u ask me to do it again...
I heard the best time to write a poem, a song, a pajhuam, to sing a song, hais a kwv txhiaj is when you're feeling sad and blue. Yes, I've been there also. Wrote hundreds of poems when I was going through my divorce. And I even learned how to hais kwv txhiaj! LOLz... ;D
But again, great stuff. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Very true again!... N as in my sign:
"Whatever rock ur boat... I aint here to make u believe, nor to force u"...
There you go... exactly. O0
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nice
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I carry on the marathon bigboi just lapped
I take the tourch, invite the hordes and trap...
These imbeciles, smack em with biblical verses
My mission here, the minister of citidal churches
Burn the polluted, dispute the wisdom of the ages
Make the world see change like a dealer out in vegas
I'm hella foul, outrageous
Kill ur style, plow ur acres,
And proceed to plant the seed because I believe my own fate I can create it
My strong hold, I've long for
A better life when we forgive and forget the wrongful...
Acts of everyman but everyman has his burdens he himself must own
Even jesus had to carry two trees before he received his throne
So what's this make it? I take it that we're all just screwed
But to be remembered, remember to stand up for the truth
Ur definition of it and no body else
Stand up, what the phuck? U need no body's help
if u need the motivated u should motivate urself
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Gone!
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Motivation? I spark and balze it...
But I don't need the trees to spray it
I gaze into the pages like an apprentice of magic
Cast, spell like spelling contest
Words larger than Gods concepts,
brain blowing up like bomb threats
Step on the stage and trash whack hmong cats
I'm colder than leonardo's titanic act is
Only wish I wasn't limited to spitting through this motorolla backflip
Celly is slow but Back to the rap script
Motivation is my ass first
I cry later but laugh first
Live now and enjoy life
Cause we all someday will benchpress the grass turf
Be an influence to kids,
I'm bad, so ur children takes a satan's trend
Idiot, I never play the hero type
God sent me to earth to pee on dykes
A ninja firestarter with gasoline and light
Who u think is burning the woods and trees @ night
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Aite Lucky_Ly...mea ns no harm bro. Just some lyrics. I think AZNRAPS.COM would be a proper place for the battles. Still love and respect....
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it's cool.. just as long as it's on friendly grounds
and no heart felt with your rounds
just as long as you use poetry in motion
I'll be gentle and not rule it out w/o emotion..
;)So let my page be the battle ground
Ha, ha... Kids! bring on the fun, mic n music sound
Lucky Ly's here to regulate
U 2 boyz can battle it out n find ur own 2 fate
I'll be fair n neutral
Just make sure ur rhyme's good n end with the right syllable
Mlle Tsav Piv Piv dont U delete this thread
Just because BigBoi1 n DPA are acting like 2 big freak!
K!... good enough for me!... Cant rap like u 2 boys! Hey BigBoi1, are from PA?!... Good stuff!... Im out for the day... Just watch out for mlle Tsav Pib Pib :) :) :)
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O0 O0 O0 O0 O0
WOW.. lucky.. spiting it out like nothing at all
your poems stand tall like the great wall
poetry is in your blood that I can see
5 stars for you from mlle tsav pib pib.. lols
:)
just remember guys.. keep it under control ;D
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POETRY MATTERS
They say Poetry heal the mind, soul and spirit
I hope it is true, that way I would not want any limits
Its gentle words feel like a breeze throuhout your body
Like floating in Heaven, always so bright, always so sunny
Put your thoughts on a piece of paper
It will get rid of a lot of your negativities, a lot of your angers
Either it is a message from them... You... Or me
It is priceless, it is always free
You will be coming at peace with yourself and able to let it go
A great reward for oneself, because you will become your own true hero
No more pain, no more sorrow
March forward always looking for a better tomorrow
Poetry does matter
Poetry does do wonders.
O0 poetry does matter
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How u coming along with urs DPA?!... Talking about ur song/demo... Post it up when it's ready mang!...
gonna take a while, not sure if i should really take my time and get my equipment up or should i just revised it, tighten some lines up here and there...i got an idea i've been wanting to do so i might put this aside and do it first, gotta come up with the lines first though. i'm excited about it though man.
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Cool!... Keep us posted then... Oh, n I hope ure gonna include ur famous word from here, in there too: "over", over! O0
i got one coming haha seriously, been thinking of something serious and something for fun, i'll let you know when it's done...or when it's OVER
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;D Keep having fun. It makes our head hurts sometimes to find the right words, and even though not too many are poetically inclined, it's just us passing time.
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Like the poems, very breathe taking and inspirational. O0
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SOME WORDS
Some words are so powerful
So pleasant to be heard & oh so wonderful
Simple words, simple lyrics, simple meanings, simple thoughts
As rewarding as if u just had won a hard battle u just fought
Do not ignore the power of some words
They could be as sweet as honey, or as deadly as some razor sharp swords
Yes, worry not of the negative words that might cause u some sensitivities
Rather pick-up the ones to give u Hope, Faith & positivities
Choose some words wisely,
Choose some words to avoid any possible miseries.
i like your choice of words
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havent really have time for alot of things as of late. been busy trying to accomplish too many goals at one time.
sounds good though.
OVER!
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Cov lus no yog kuv tso lub paj hua
Tsi paub sau thiaj lav practice xwb
Tsi try ces tsi paub li xwb right
Kuv yuav mixe lub hmoob nrog lub Ib-glish
Vim hais tias tuaj hlo tev chaw A-mes-li-ka
Paub paub hais lus taw dawb tabsi lub Hmoob mas quav dev
Hmonglish los kuv kuj tsis keej thiab
Ah ya! xyo yuav ua li cas lod!
kuv try to rhyme so my words can flow as good as Mrs Vang
Lod yog tus Bro NraugKKX
Tabsi tsi tau li
kuv hmoob vocabulary too too poor
Tse kav liam
Lam sau xwb
If I didnt have little wind checking my mistakes tho, Gaddam!... dont think I'll even post this paj huam... so props goes to little Wind O0
LOL, funny tiag os bro!! :2funny:
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Lets try another pajhuam :D :) :)
Me nyuam Hmoob es, me nyuam Hmoob
Tsis txhob thuam, thuam thiab kav tsij mloog
Kuv cov lus yeej muaj tseeb
Tsuag, tsuag los thig pob ntseg, txhob qeeb, qeeb
koj xav muaj, koj xav tau cuag li luag
Txhob hais lus phem, koj lus neej thiaj li muaj ci, tsis muaj ua vog ua vuag
Ib yam li los lus tawv dawb: "karma is a B/tch"
Txhob hais lus nkhaus, nkhaus cuag li ib niag pog Witch
Koj xav kom koj lub neej zoo thiab kaj lug
Koj yuav tsum pab koj cov Hmoob, koj yuav tsum hlub
Tsis hais kom pab ntau, ntau... Mes, mes los yeej tau lawm
Tsum paub xav, tsu paub ntsia, tsum ua lus siab dawb
Tsis hais tus tib neeg twg li: Dub, Mev, Fabkis, Ameslikas, los kanasdas
Yeej muaj tus zoo, yeej muaj tus phem ib yam
Koj thiab kuv... Wb, peb, nej, lawv... Tas nrho sawv daws yeej yog tib hom neeg
Kav tsij khaws kuv cov lus, kav tsij ntseeg!
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for your words of wisdom.
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Yo . . . Yo . . . uh . . . uh . . . here we go
Got your boy Havoc in the rhyme crib now
First all I want to said "oh WOW!" . . .
Love this thread already, got me all pump
Up and ready to jump just like when you
Get goose bump from watching Jason and
Freddy . . . and Forest ____? . . .
Going all out with this . . . bull ----> POOP!
dis' who? dis' what? disagreed and dis-
Approved of you being glue the word rude
Just a short rhyme from the top of my mind
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Havoc Bro, cool meeting u here
Yeah, this is mostly for fun, so aint nothin' to worry 'bout, nothin' to steer
Mostly my poems are some of my reflections of my past
Memories from me so they can ever last
Good or Bad
Dont matter, I'll take them as they come&unfold, aint nothin' to be ashamed or sad
I see u're from Cali
Good stuff, Im coming down this week, so Im pretty pump&happy
Mb u can show me around
So I dont trip & fall on the ground
Santa Rosa?
Is there a lot of them nice/cute little Mama?!...
Are u DPA mang?!... ha, ha... Anyway, out for the weekend... See u in Cali?!... I'll be there for 3 weeks... Peace!...
I use to lived in Cali' bro'
Kicking it in NC now . . .
Time is moving too
Fast, than to now in
A flash, I forget to
Change my location
In my 411, my bad
Chilling in the jungle
Of North Carolina
Fishing and hunting
Who don't wanna?
Respecting it's woods
And it's very natural
Habitat Nature with
My pee . . .
Yeah!, just chugging
On 40 ounce, blast
12 Gauge and go
The whole twelve
Rounds with a
Unanimous . . . one
Pack . . .
This thread is so
Awesome I have to
Come back even if
My rhyme is all off
Track and can't
Compare to big
Daddy Mack lucky_
Ly with the smack
Down attitude to
Rule this thread
Through, me and
You are two true
Crazy rhyme fools
And it's all Cool . . .