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Love for sale
« on: January 07, 2014, 12:14:55 PM »
I've recently just started exploring my poetic side, so forgive me if it's not well.  I promise I'm improving.

There’s a lady who lives across the street. 
She’s selling love, buy two get one free.
Her motto is if it’s broken don’t fix it;
if you’re unhappy then just replace it. 
Love ain’t gotta’ cost a thing,
but every time I’m in there I leave with empty pockets. 
Was it that diamond ring, that golden charm, or maybe the locket? 
Trading all my humanity for vanity. 
There’s no value in love and relationships anymore;
all the things we used to do, all the things that we adore.



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Re: Love for sale
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2014, 12:16:43 PM »
I've recently just started exploring my poetic side, so forgive me if it's not well.  I promise I'm improving.

There’s a lady who lives across the street. 
She’s selling love, buy two get one free.
Her motto is if it’s broken don’t fix it;
if you’re unhappy then just replace it. 
Love ain’t gotta’ cost a thing,
but every time I’m in there I leave with empty pockets. 
Was it that diamond ring, that golden charm, or maybe the locket? 
Trading all my humanity for vanity. 
There’s no value in love and relationships anymore;
all the things we used to do, all the things that we adore.

Nice! :)



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Re: Love for sale
« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2014, 06:14:27 PM »
Always well written.  :D



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