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Evil_K_Man

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The Story of Eleanor...
« on: May 06, 2014, 12:39:43 AM »
So I felt a little poetic today and decided to contribute. I'm not big on writing about my feelings so I won't write about them, but I wanted to maybe express creativity (or lack of) through a poetic story.  Its going to be a three part series...well, maybe less if I get bored or people don't like, but here it goes.  Please don't judge too harshly, I just wanted to have some fun.

Chapter 1: Pride

Sad is this tale of woeful lore
A heart wrenching story, never told before

About the life of a young woman who lost her youth
a victim of circumstance, yes this was the truth.

An accomplished lady and the talk of the town
Every man's heart she owned, never having to utter a sound.

All angles of her beauty sharpen like a blade
Enough to pierce hearts and minds with her alluring gaze.

Beauty was her weapon and vanity her poison,
Soon to be married at her parent's disposition.

"This man I am to wed, is he not above all?
For only such a man, could I ever love"

How joyous she was the day they were to meet,
All smiles and laughter, indeed an incandescent treat.

Three loud knocks and heavy whispers at the her door
What kind of man is he, what life awaits our Eleanor.

to be continued...



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Evil_K_Man

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Re: The Story of Eleanor...
« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2014, 01:12:45 PM »
Lol...maybe this weekend...sinc e its mothers day im heading back home so...maybe if I have time.

I want to make sure I tell my story correctly...so it has more meaning.



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minorcharacter

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Re: The Story of Eleanor...
« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2014, 01:14:36 PM »
You're pretty good at this, K.



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Evil_K_Man

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Re: The Story of Eleanor...
« Reply #3 on: May 09, 2014, 01:17:25 PM »
You're pretty good at this, K.

I try...gotta push out as much creative juice as possible, if i am to impress the other poets on this forum.



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Evil_K_Man

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Re: The Story of Eleanor...
« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2014, 01:19:42 PM »
Okay, will be waiting patiently... or maybe you can tell me over the phone. j/k  :2funny: :2funny:

My scratchy voice won't do it justice.



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Evil_K_Man

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Re: The Story of Eleanor...
« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2014, 01:27:43 PM »
Guys that tell me that... always turns out the opposite... LOL

Well...i suppose its relative to who is listening me talk...at any rate I will continue to poem hopefully this weekend.



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