PILLOW TALK

[LION HEART]

Here's something I wrote this morning on a whim... just random thoughts in my head I've had for the past two days.

 pillow talk
    two voices conversing late in the night
      bantering back and forth until sunrise
        whispering sweet nothings may go no where
          exchanging mere words that may go some where
        various debates could spark words of war
      deciphering wordplay that mean much more
    like children writing on the walls with chalk
  deep meanings are conveyed in pillow talk

All critiques welcome. 

[ButterflyKisses]

Here's something I wrote this morning on a whim... just random thoughts in my head I've had for the past two days.

pillow talk
two voices conversing late in the night
bantering back and forth until sunrise
whispering sweet nothings may go no where
exchanging more words that may go some where
various debates could spark words of war
deciphering wordplay that mean much more
like children writing on the walls with chalk
deeper meanings conveyed in pillow talk

All critiques welcome. 

Beautiful and eloquent.

[J-a-s-o-n]

 

[LION HEART]

Thanks everyone... I'm going to have to read this poem on Tinychat so I cab emphasis the pause and breaks not seen in the poem. 

[LION HEART]

When will this poetry reading take place? I have a poem I want to read too. Let me know details.

P.s. your avatar is hilarious. I laughed for about 5 minutes straight. It's totally something I would do. LOL

Tonight... a lil' after 10:10 PM.

And  yes, the avatar was so funny, I had to have it.  I knew it would make someone laugh.

[J-a-s-o-n]

Y'all two should do a collaboration. .

[LION HEART]

AMANUENSIS:
Grr... I would crotch kick you but you're not a man. 

JASON:
Collaborate?  Most definitely, but that grammar nazi... might have to put a muzzle on her. 

[J-a-s-o-n]

You two would produce an awesome piece.  Amanuensis, cut LH some slack.  My grammar sucks but you gave me an A+. . 

[J-a-s-o-n]

that's because LH is always so smug.... someone needs to take him down a notch. 

A swift kick to the ball sack perhaps.

[J-a-s-o-n]

 


if he comes after me, I'm pointing in your direction.

So if you go down, I'm going too.   

[J-a-s-o-n]

it was your idea!!!! 

But you're good at kicking balls and wanted to to drop LH down a notch.

[J-a-s-o-n]

I'm gonna say that it was all your idea and that I'm just an innocent victim here. 

I'm gonna say that I was manipulated by your vocabulary skills and gave in.  You dropped me down two notches.